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meaghan848
YAY! And yes, I am very proud. biggrin.gif

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-Meaghan
princesskate14
Chapter Twenty Four

“You sure you’ll be alright?”

I turned around and faced Jake. I smiled at him and leaned against the car for support. “Yes, Jake,” I said, “I’ll be fine. Did I not drive myself here?”

He shrugged. “Well, you’re leg is broken, you shouldn’t driving at all.”

I rolled my eyes. “If I can figure out a away to drive my car with a broken leg, I’m going to do it.”

He laughed. “Alright, then.” He walked over to me and hugged me. This was still a shock to me. I had known the unemotional Jake for so long…I wasn’t used to the touchy-feely thing yet. It would probably take me awhile to get used to his openness.

I put my arms around him and hugged back. “I’ll be fine,” I laughed as I let go as did he.

He shrugged. “I can still worry.”

For the second time I rolled my eyes and then opened my door, getting in the front seat. I slid my leg with the cast on in gently and then shut the door. I turned the keys and started the car. I rolled down the window so I could say goodbye to Jake.

“Take care of yourself,” he said.

I smiled again. “Sure,” I said. “I’ll still see you at the end of the summer, right? You won’t disappear on me or anything now that we aren’t together?”

He laughed. “Nah,” he said. “I’ll be waiting.”

“Good.”

He stood up straight and I rolled up my window. I pulled out of the driveway, taking one last look at Jake and then driving down the road, getting on the highway. Towards Camp Talooly.

~*~

I pulled into Camp Talooly, shut the car off and got out. I pulled out my crutches and then went towards the main building to see what I was needed for. As soon as I walked in, I immediately bumped into Chris -and of course, Felicity.

“Oh,” Chris said. “You’re back.”

I nodded. “Yeah,” I said, “I’m back.”

He noticed my happy mood, I could see, and he raised his eyebrows. Felicity looked between the two of us, and hugged herself closer to Chris’ side. When she looked away for the briefest second I mouthed I’ll tell you later to Chris. He nodded and him and Felicity walked out.

I sighed and hobbled into the kitchen area to find Tracy. Which I did, and she then told me that I could come back around lunch time for kitchen duty, like I had been before.

I nodded and then hobbled back outside. I would be glad when I got my cast off. It was only one more week. And then I could get my old job back, kayaking…with Chris.

But when I walked outside, something that I saw surprised me. Chris was getting into a kayak…with Felicity. And there were kids! There were kids with them! Which meant…that he had kids to teach….

So why was Felicity with him?

I went over to them and Chris looked up and saw me. He smiled.

“Hey.”

“Hi,” I said politely.

Felicity was still getting in her kayak so she didn’t notice me yet.

I nodded in her direction and Chris followed my gaze. He rolled his eyes and looked back at me. “She insisted that I needed help with my job, since you were out and stuff. So she’s taking over for you until you get your cast off.”

I raised my eyebrows. “Oh?” I felt a little hurt. “So who’s doing her job?”

“Well,” he said, “no one.”

I stared blankly at him.

“I mean, the guys that were already doing it with her are still there. They don’t really need three people, Felicity said.”

I nodded. “Oh, okay.” I still didn’t understand. Teaching the kids to kayak wasn’t that hard. When I was doing it with Chris, I basically did nothing, meaning Chris was basically working on his own. So he didn’t need Felicity around to help.

I looked over at her and she was trying to buckle herself, but failing.

He didn’t need her around to help when she clearly didn’t even know what she was doing.

“Alright, then,” I said happily, although inside -for some reason- I was growing more jealous than I should be.

Chris looked at me, curious, but I just focused my gaze somewhere else. Felicity, finally having buckled herself, sighed and turned around, finally noticing me.

“Oh,” she said, “you’re here.”

I gave her a sarcastic smile.

“Well, as you can see, this is my job now,” she said, smug.

“Temporarily,” Chris added.

She glowered at him. “Temporarily,” she said, giving in.

I stood there as each kid loaded themselves into the kayaks, and Felicity just sat there, making sure she wasn’t getting wet, or her hair wasn’t messed up or anything. It wasn’t fair that this -breaking me leg- happened to me and I was such a good person. And Felicity…

Well, nothing happened to HER.

I took a deep breath, calming myself down. I couldn’t think like that. Felicity wasn’t that bad of a person, really. She just really loved Chris…sort of. I guess. But, if they wanted to be together, who was I to stop them? Even though I don’t even see Chris in that way.

I didn’t.

Not even one bit.

“Well have fun,” I offered weakly and turned around heading back up towards my cabin.

~*~

“What do you do for fun?”

I raised my eyebrows at Chris, who was again sitting in his little spot behind the food counter. It was lunch already and I was refilling the food containers. I sat back down once I was finished.

“You want to know everything I do for fun?” I asked.

He nodded. “Everything.”

We were still playing that game where we asked each other questions and we had to answer. We had been ever since the first time we started. It was getting quite fun.

“Well,” I said. Where should I start? “I love to read,” Chris laughed and I glared, making him shut up. “Uh…”

“That’s it?”

I looked again at him. “No,” I replied defensively. “That’s not ‘it’.”

He grinned and I thought.

What did I like to do for fun?

“I know I like to kayak…,” I grinned, “now that I know how.”

Chris laughed. “Sure, sure. Kayaking is fun, I guess.”

“I like to go to movies,” I offered.

He snorted.

I glared once more and he quieted. “I…like to hang out with my friends?”

“Do you do anything for fun?”

“Yes!” I protested. “I just can’t think of things right now.”

He grinned, smug.

“Oh, shut up.”

We were definitely back to our old selves. After the camping trip, it had been a disaster, and with the whole Jake thing. But now…I could say we were back to normal. Back to the first few days that we were getting to know each other.

It was back to having fun.

Fun. I hung out with Chris for fun. Did that count? But I couldn’t very well say that. It could come out sounding as a flirtatious move on him or something. Which, I definitely wouldn’t mean it that way. But it would sound that way.

But, hanging out with Chris was basically the only fun I had these days. And he didn’t even realize it.




I'm sorry if it was too short. But seriously, you people were freaking out. And, so, I needed to update.
But if it helps, I thought it'd be longer when I looked at it on MS Word. It seemed longer there.
Huh.

Well, comments?
Katie♥
PianoPrincess13
yay we get an update! icon_sunny.gif spinstar.gif icon_sunny.gif

Kyra/Chewie
PianoPrincess13
I loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thanks for updating Katie!!!

kyra
Cabot~Fan
Wow. That hardly counts. Nothing exciting happens. hmph.

Still...

~Chelsie ♥
princesskate14
QUOTE(PianoPrincess13 @ Jan 27 2007, 06:22 PM) [snapback]1743612[/snapback]
I loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thanks for updating Katie!!!

kyra


Thanks Kyra :]

QUOTE(Cabot~Fan @ Jan 27 2007, 06:26 PM) [snapback]1743618[/snapback]
Wow. That hardly counts. Nothing exciting happens. hmph.

Still...

~Chelsie ♥


It does SO count. And if I made anyting happen then the story would be over way too soon. So
shut your trap, Chelsie. Hmph.

Katie♥
Cabot~Fan
*offended*

Hey, I updated and my update is WAY more insightful than yours! SO HA!

~Chelsie ♥
princesskate14
Well, mine wasn't mean to be insightful.
Hmph.
And no one else? I saw you all looking
at my thread! Hmph.
Katei♥
Ah well.
princesskate14
I can't believe I spelled my name wrong.
Katie*
Katie♥
the_tall_girl
QUOTE
Fun. I hung out with Chris for fun. Did that count?

Hell yeah it does!


That was great! (Short, but great!) UPDATE AGAIN!

THAT WAS AWESOME, DUDE...ETTE!
princesskate14
Thanks Julia.
I won't be upating again till...I don't know when.
Katie♥
12Bandgeek21
yeah!
we finally got an update!

Jake = me like as friend
Chris = ackward feelings! lol

shay♥
thanks for showing me how to do that again!
princesskate14
Thanks Shay.
Next time I update I hope it'll
be more interesting for you
guys.
Hmph.
Katie♥
the_tall_girl
Aw come on! You're not mad, are you? I personally thoroughly enjoyed is. Right guys?

Lol

UPDATE!

Even a teaser would satisfy our messed up minds. (Speaking for myself.)
12Bandgeek21
QUOTE(princesskate14 @ Jan 27 2007, 07:53 PM) [snapback]1743760[/snapback]
Next time I update I hope it'll
be more interesting for you
guys.

i would hope so!

shay♥
princesskate14
sad.gif
I feel like my writing is disappointing
you. Maybe I should stop for awhile
so I can make sure my updates
are more interesting?
Katie♥
bvrc1chick
um, how about NO!!!!


JUST UPDATE!!!!!!!!! I REALLY NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!!!

~Rachael~
12Bandgeek21
QUOTE(princesskate14 @ Jan 27 2007, 08:03 PM) [snapback]1743780[/snapback]
sad.gif
I feel like my writing is disappointing
you. Maybe I should stop for awhile
so I can make sure my updates
are more interesting?
Katie♥

WHAT?!?!
n,o there not disappointing at all.
everyday i come on here waiting to see if you'll update something.
and when you do i feel like a little boy getting his first puppy.
please don't think like that again...it makes me sad.

a loyal reader,
shay♥
BadKitty_12
I liked the update! Stupid Felicity. For some reason she reminds me of a mouse. No, a rat. Yes, a rat. Update asap!

♥Sam
-bummmerr-
short but great!

UPDATE WHEN YOU CAN smile.gif


-brittney
meaghan848
That was awesome!!

But a little on the short side...

UPDATE SOON!!!!

-Meaghan
princesskate14
QUOTE(bvrc1chick @ Jan 27 2007, 08:06 PM) [snapback]1743788[/snapback]
um, how about NO!!!!
JUST UPDATE!!!!!!!!! I REALLY NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!!!

~Rachael~


Thanks Rachael.

QUOTE(12Bandgeek21 @ Jan 27 2007, 08:07 PM) [snapback]1743790[/snapback]
WHAT?!?!
n,o there not disappointing at all.
everyday i come on here waiting to see if you'll update something.
and when you do i feel like a little boy getting his first puppy.
please don't think like that again...it makes me sad.

a loyal reader,
shay♥


Aw, thanks so much Shay. I guess I won't be taking a break. smile.gif


QUOTE(BadKitty_12 @ Jan 27 2007, 08:08 PM) [snapback]1743791[/snapback]
I liked the update! Stupid Felicity. For some reason she reminds me of a mouse. No, a rat. Yes, a rat. Update asap!

♥Sam


Thanks Sam. And a rat? ha.


QUOTE(-bummmerr- @ Jan 27 2007, 08:16 PM) [snapback]1743800[/snapback]
short but great!

UPDATE WHEN YOU CAN smile.gif
-brittney


Thanks Brittney smile.gif


QUOTE(meaghan848 @ Jan 27 2007, 08:24 PM) [snapback]1743818[/snapback]
That was awesome!!

But a little on the short side...

UPDATE SOON!!!!

-Meaghan


Thank you Meaghan smile.gif


Katie♥
12Bandgeek21
QUOTE
Aw, thanks so much Shay. I guess I won't be taking a break.

*cheers*
yes!!
*jumps up and down*
*suddenly acts cool*
my work here is done...
*strolls off*

shay♥
roadkill2105
Thanks for the update Katie it was great, despite what chelsie said LOl jk.

Update soon!


~♥~Cassie~♥~
princesskate14
Thanks Cassie!
Katie♥
roadkill2105
Are you feeling ok?

If it helps i am almost finished the update for best friend or boyfriend if that will make you happy. It'll make me happy cause Tina might stop bugging me lOl

but no it is a good update a nice short sweet happy time with a twitch of jelousy


~♥~Cassie~♥~
princesskate14
QUOTE(roadkill2105 @ Jan 27 2007, 08:58 PM) [snapback]1743891[/snapback]
Are you feeling ok?

If it helps i am almost finished the update for best friend or boyfriend if that will make you happy. It'll make me happy cause Tina might stop bugging me lOl

but no it is a good update a nice short sweet happy time with a twitch of jelousy


~♥~Cassie~♥~


Yeah, I'm fine. My cat just recently died, and I was stressed out because I had a regents exam last Thursday, and I have a track meet Monday. And I was paranoid that the story was getting too boring.

And yay! And update from you! smile.gif It does certainly help. Thanks for asking.

Katie♥
princesskate14
Oops, I forgot to say,

"But I'm fine."

Which I am.

Katie♥
Cabot~Fan
QUOTE(roadkill2105 @ Jan 27 2007, 07:42 PM) [snapback]1743855[/snapback]
Thanks for the update Katie it was great, despite what chelsie said LOl jk.

Update soon!


~♥~Cassie~♥~


Aw, I never said it was bad!

Now I feel bad for making everyone think that I thought the update totally sucked.

I DON'T THINK IT SUCKED! I THOUGHT IT WAS FABULOUS!

~Chelsie ♥
AmaiKiku
Lol.
Katie, whenever you update the whole cycle of pleading from your readers goes on and on.
We never stop because we're LOADED with
Energizer batteries.
Yup.
Thanks for updating and
yes, it was short.
Since when does it seem long??
Never, that's what I tell you.
Lol.
Alright, I'll stop speaking like that, its...*shakes head* weird.

>>Crystal<<
laEspanolaBailando
Aw it was short but it was good.

I'll try not to freak out anymore. wink.gif
JennyG
*reads update* That was great! Now give us another one. *Starts to jump in own seat* Less updates makes me hyper.

~ Mon
princesskate14
QUOTE(Cabot~Fan @ Jan 27 2007, 09:19 PM) [snapback]1743934[/snapback]
Aw, I never said it was bad!

Now I feel bad for making everyone think that I thought the update totally sucked.

I DON'T THINK IT SUCKED! I THOUGHT IT WAS FABULOUS!

~Chelsie ♥


Aw, well thanks Chelsie


QUOTE(AmaiKiku @ Jan 28 2007, 01:15 AM) [snapback]1744278[/snapback]
Lol.
Katie, whenever you update the whole cycle of pleading from your readers goes on and on.
We never stop because we're LOADED with
Energizer batteries.
Yup.
Thanks for updating and
yes, it was short.
Since when does it seem long??
Never, that's what I tell you.
Lol.
Alright, I'll stop speaking like that, its...*shakes head* weird.

>>Crystal<<


Thanks Crystal. You sounded very...proper. Ha.

QUOTE(laEspanolaBailando @ Jan 28 2007, 06:30 AM) [snapback]1744359[/snapback]
Aw it was short but it was good.

I'll try not to freak out anymore. wink.gif


Yes, it was short....but thanks. smile.gif


QUOTE(JennyG @ Jan 28 2007, 07:15 AM) [snapback]1744377[/snapback]
*reads update* That was great! Now give us another one. *Starts to jump in own seat* Less updates makes me hyper.

~ Mon


Thanks Mon. biggrin.gif


Well, when I get home from church, and I finish The Protector udpate early, I shall try and see
if I can write another update. A longer one, to make up for that one.

Okay?

Just don't bombard me with comments if I don't alright?

Katie♥
chrisy_moron
That was greaaat!!!

I LOVED IT!!! Although it was short...

I seriously can't stand felicity at all.... why can't she like fall into the water and ruin her hair and never go kayaking again?!!

arrrr

btw UPDATE again please!
JennyG
^ She reminds me of Destiny from Loveable Mistakes. Oh! Maybe Katie can make it some how that Felicity will be abducted by aliens and they can shave her head! *stares at what self has just written* Okay absolutely no more Roswell reruns for me.

~ Mon
princesskate14
QUOTE(chrisy_moron @ Jan 28 2007, 08:47 AM) [snapback]1744411[/snapback]
That was greaaat!!!

I LOVED IT!!! Although it was short...

I seriously can't stand felicity at all.... why can't she like fall into the water and ruin her hair and never go kayaking again?!!

arrrr

btw UPDATE again please!


Thanks Tina. And yes, Felicity is really annoying.


QUOTE(JennyG @ Jan 28 2007, 09:40 AM) [snapback]1744449[/snapback]
^ She reminds me of Destiny from Loveable Mistakes. Oh! Maybe Katie can make it some how that Felicity will be abducted by aliens and they can shave her head! *stares at what self has just written* Okay absolutely no more Roswell reruns for me.

~ Mon


Haha, Mon. Nice scenario, but I think we all know that aliens don't exist...
That we know of anyway.

Katie♥
soccerforwardnumba10
YAY you updated. It was good!!

*sighs* when's the romance gonna start again???

~sapna
~AllAmericanGirl~
OK Katie. That was good. But not like...amazingly good. Nothing excitingn happens! They really do need o get togather. ooo i know how bou Falicity drowneds kyaking! (ok sorry for all the spelling erors i just got my nails redone for the first time in about a month and so i cant really type all that well!) WELL UPDATE KATIE!!

-jess
soccerforwardnumba10
QUOTE
Nothing excitingn happens!


I know totally!! LIke if I were writing this it would go like this:




Felicity finally looked over from her defeated attempts to buckle herself, and saw me.

"Oh, you're here," she said unhappily.

I was tired of her. So I hobbled over and pushed the kayak away from the edge of the water. Without her paddles, that were lying on the shore. I smirked.

"You bi-" She was cut off because of the exuberant kayaker that had lost control because his hyper-ness that crashed into her.

Her kayak flipped over. She emerged a few moments later, her 'perfect hair' bedraggled, and her clothes drenched. She spit out some water and yelled,

"I can't believe you did that, you b!itch! I'm going to kill you!!"

"Whatever,"I muttered and limped away to my cabin, passing Chris who had covered his mouth and was shaking. I think he was trying not to laugh.

Behind me I heard Felicity yell at Chris to help her out, and roaring laughter, and Felicity yelling at Chris.



Now that's more satisfying right!!
princesskate14
QUOTE(soccerforwardnumba10 @ Jan 28 2007, 04:29 PM) [snapback]1745116[/snapback]
YAY you updated. It was good!!

*sighs* when's the romance gonna start again???

~sapna


Thanks. smile.gif And I don't know, I'll have to think about that...


QUOTE(~AllAmericanGirl~ @ Jan 28 2007, 04:42 PM) [snapback]1745142[/snapback]
OK Katie. That was good. But not like...amazingly good. Nothing excitingn happens! They really do need o get togather. ooo i know how bou Falicity drowneds kyaking! (ok sorry for all the spelling erors i just got my nails redone for the first time in about a month and so i cant really type all that well!) WELL UPDATE KATIE!!

-jess


Oh, thanks Jess. And yeah, it wasn't "amazingly good" but...hopefully it'll get better.

QUOTE(soccerforwardnumba10 @ Jan 28 2007, 04:53 PM) [snapback]1745171[/snapback]
I know totally!! LIke if I were writing this it would go like this:
Felicity finally looked over from her defeated attempts to buckle herself, and saw me.

"Oh, you're here," she said unhappily.

I was tired of her. So I hobbled over and pushed the kayak away from the edge of the water. Without her paddles, that were lying on the shore. I smirked.

"You bi-" She was cut off because of the exuberant kayaker that had lost control because his hyper-ness that crashed into her.

Her kayak flipped over. She emerged a few moments later, her 'perfect hair' bedraggled, and her clothes drenched. She spit out some water and yelled,

"I can't believe you did that, you b!itch! I'm going to kill you!!"

"Whatever,"I muttered and limped away to my cabin, passing Chris who had covered his mouth and was shaking. I think he was trying not to laugh.

Behind me I heard Felicity yell at Chris to help her out, and roaring laughter, and Felicity yelling at Chris.
Now that's more satisfying right!!


*spits out chocolate milk*
Oh, my God. That was... an interesting perspective on the situation.
Haha.


Katie♥
meaghan848
UPDATE! ^And, omg you should totally do that.

-Meaghan
chrisy_moron
QUOTE(soccerforwardnumba10 @ Jan 28 2007, 04:53 PM) [snapback]1745171[/snapback]
I know totally!! LIke if I were writing this it would go like this:
Felicity finally looked over from her defeated attempts to buckle herself, and saw me.

"Oh, you're here," she said unhappily.

I was tired of her. So I hobbled over and pushed the kayak away from the edge of the water. Without her paddles, that were lying on the shore. I smirked.

"You bi-" She was cut off because of the exuberant kayaker that had lost control because his hyper-ness that crashed into her.

Her kayak flipped over. She emerged a few moments later, her 'perfect hair' bedraggled, and her clothes drenched. She spit out some water and yelled,

"I can't believe you did that, you b!itch! I'm going to kill you!!"

"Whatever,"I muttered and limped away to my cabin, passing Chris who had covered his mouth and was shaking. I think he was trying not to laugh.

Behind me I heard Felicity yell at Chris to help her out, and roaring laughter, and Felicity yelling at Chris.
Now that's more satisfying right!!

TOTALLY HOW IT SHOULD GO!!!!

She so should get chucked into that water!!!

*curses felicity*
~AllAmericanGirl~
Oh my frak katie just update.

-Jess (lol. yeah my favorite word is frak. but you wont get it i you dont watch Veronica Mars)

12Bandgeek21
*giggles*
we're waiting...

shay♥
AmaiKiku
QUOTE
Thanks Crystal. You sounded very...proper. Ha.


Thauts whuy they caull me Miss Perfection at school!!!

>>Crystal<<
princesskate14
QUOTE(~AllAmericanGirl~ @ Jan 28 2007, 11:25 PM) [snapback]1745595[/snapback]
Oh my frak katie just update.

-Jess (lol. yeah my favorite word is frak. but you wont get it i you dont watch Veronica Mars)


I just updated Saturday! And yes, it's true I didn't have school today...
But I was watching season three of Dawson's Creek! Do realize
how imperitive it was that I watch it? Well...it was!



QUOTE(12Bandgeek21 @ Jan 29 2007, 09:23 AM) [snapback]1745799[/snapback]
*giggles*
we're waiting...

shay♥


Yes, well, I have to update The Protector first...



Katie♥
Lannfo75
Hi, I'm a new reader and I love your story!

Please update soon!

~Lauren
12Bandgeek21
QUOTE(princesskate14 @ Jan 29 2007, 03:14 PM) [snapback]1745983[/snapback]
[/font]Yes, well, I have to update The Protector first...


[font="Garamond"]okay!
either story works!

shay♥
princesskate14
QUOTE(Lannfo75 @ Jan 29 2007, 03:32 PM) [snapback]1745999[/snapback]
Hi, I'm a new reader and I love your story!

Please update soon!

~Lauren


Hey, thanks so much Lauren. smile.gif

Katie♥
JaneAustenBuff07
THAT WAS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GREAT!

Now. . . if maybe, *pause* you could do it again? How about tomorrow? Tomorrow is good for me.



TOMORROW!!!!!! PLEASE! That was soooo good! (ps did she tell chirs what happened with boyfriend, i mean exboyfriend?)
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