*New Reader alert I think*

Wow this is really good in fact it's great
so please please Update!

Tay <3

PS. Oh man I ryhmed again, this is what happens to you try to
ryhme Haikus in English.

Love it .....
Just bored..

update it's quite nice

<font color=red><b/>HEy NEW READER!!

OMG...THiiS iiS So GoOD!!!UPDATE PLEASE!!!!!!!

ANA

P.S. ii HOPE NANCy DOSENT DiIE && ii ALSO HOPE THAT JEN && LANCE GET BACK TOGETHER!!!

Hey, great about all the enthusiasm, but please refrain from using caps and chatspeak in your posts. Thanks!

Er. People.

I don't want to die.

Blimey I ain;t as evil as the Nancy in this fic.

and Besides, People, shouldnt pray for anyone's death. Whatever. she broke Lance and Jen up. SHE deserves to die. Not me. Please.

Nancy.

uhhh princess nancy..i dont think we were talking about you...


Ana

DUH....

hehe!! Thanks everyone for the comments!!!! I have the next TWO chapters writen out but there quite short BUT to create tension I'm going to post them separatly!!!lol!! I'll post soon when I have the time and feel better because I have a horrible Hayfever Cold!!!!!=(

love you all!!

holz xxxx:spinstar:

i hope you get better

New Reader Rocksteady says

Great Job i love your writing!

please update soon!

its like reading a really good novel and waiting in suspense ofr whats next!

cant wait!

yeah update soon when you get better

Hope you get well soon, Holly!
Can't wait for the next update!

~Amanda~

hope you get better!!

Ana

Hi! I'm kind of better now thanks!!

I'll HOPEFULLY update today!!yey!!!hehe! But I don't know..................................hmmm...............

Okay.........
Bye!
lolly(holly but my friend oli gets mixed up so im now lolly!!)xxx

well i hope you can update

Haha I can update!!!yey!!!

Here it is!!
-------------------------------CHAPTER 13-------------------------------------------------------

'She'll die'

"Perfect" I said, patting my ponytail.
"Elle, you in there?" Will asked knocking on the bathroom door.
"Yeah, come in," I replied. I saw him open the door in the mirror. He smiled.
"Where are you going?" He asked.
"Jogging, you want to come?" I asked sliding a clip in my hair.
"No I'm okay thanks," He replied.
"Okay, see you later," I said giveing him a kiss before turning on my iPod. He waved. Will knew I wouldn't be able to hear him if he spoke. I jogged down the stairs.
"Just going for a jog," I said to mom. She nodded. I've been jogging alot now and I usually walk up to the park and jog round once or twice.

I was going into the Arboretum when I saw him. Down in the Ravine, where I first saw Will. I stopped dead in my tracks and pressed pause on my iPod. Marco was down in the ravine. I sprinted out of the Arboretum and pulled my new cell phone out of my pocket. Since what happened with Maroc I finally convince my parents to let me have a phone. I dialled Will's number(he already had one).
"Hi Elle," He said.
"Will, Marco's here, down in the ravine," I said panting a little.
"Uh.....okay....meet me by the baseball pitches........." He replied.
"ok" I said. He hung up, so did I, I ran to the baseball pitches and waited for Will, looking out for Marco aswell.
"Elle!" Will called, I spun round and saw him jogging over.
"Hey," I said relieved to see him. He looked around.
"He hasn't passed, he's probably still down in the ravine," I said reading his thoughts.
"Right, let's go," He said walking towards the Arboretum.
"What are you going to do?" I asked. Will shrugged.
"I don't know," He replied simply. 'Great' I thought sarcasticly.

"Will, Elaine," Marco said once we were down in the ravine.
"It's Ellie," I said, making my way through some weeds.
"Why are you here?" Will asked. Marco walked towards him.
"I have memories here.........WE have memories here.........don't we Elaine?" He asked me. My mind flashed back to when I handed Will the sword. My throat went dry.
"You saved the day, you boyfriend......but not me.....you put me in prison," Marco said.
"Uh............." I mumbled.
"It's your fault Elaine, you fault this happened," He started getting angry,"If you hadn't of come here this whole thing would have never happened," He shouted. Marco stormed towards me, I backed up and hit a rock, I climbed up onto it so I was taller than him.
"Marco!" Will shouted. He ignored him.
"You, The Lady of the Lake should go back to where you came from!!!!!!" Marco yelled.
"SHUT UP MARCO!!!!"Will shouted even louder. Again, he ignored him.
"I'm going to make you pay for putting me in prison Elaine!!!!!!!" Marco exclaimed pushing me. I heard a crack as I went down.
"ELLE!!" Will shouted, I could hear laughing before I hit the ground.
Then I saw black.

---------------------------------------END OF CHAPTER 13-----------------------------------------------------

Hehe tell me what you think!!!

Holz xxxxxxxxxx

Holly! How can you end it like that?!
Hope you update soon!

~Amanda~

oh my god
that was really good
please update soon
by the way im a new reader
beckii

That's the WHOLE point!!!lol!!

Thanks beckii!!
I'll update this week as I already have the next chapter writen out!!!

holz xxx:)

Oh my.......

*Don't kill Ellie!!!!!!!!!!!

-Sarah-

Aaaaahh!!
oh my god!! that was so mean!!
At least you updated!!
But now.... I need you to update again, 'cause you can't just leave us hangin'!
Update soon!

xx 3eb3

oh, my, god! i have never seen better writing by an unpublished writer! you are so good at this stuff and will definatly go somewhere with this! please update!!!! best of luck!!!



~shannon

oh my god!! please update!!!

please

please

please

with cherries on top!!hehe

Ana

oh my god what happened toi her

Thank you!!!!!!!!!
I can assure you that Ellie IS NOT dead!!! there would be no story otherwise!!!!!! If she was dead.......well..........I don't know what would happen.....Will would most definatly kill Marco!!!!

Holz xxx

WOO HOO 6 PAGES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

haha!!!

Holz xxxxx

Nooooooooooooooooooooo...............
Elle can't die

I loved it Update soon



Linzi

I will always not like Marco!

marco is evil

Hehe Marco is evil......very evil!!lol!! I'll update as soon as I can!!!

holz xx

update soon

PLEASE update SOON!!!!!!! i dont think i can manage to wait any longer!!!!!!!!!

<3 ~shannon =D

update

oh my goodness, i need an update or else i think i just might die...please update SOON!!!!

lyl <3 ~shannon =D

helloooooooooooooooooooooo?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! is anyone there? i put up that message like 80 million days ago...please update SOON!!!!!

<3 ~shannon =D

oh my god!!! i am new here and your story was the first one i read. i am the BIGGEST fan of Avalon High. Your story was the bees knees. UPDATE SOON <----me reading avalon high

Hehe thanks everyone!!!I'll update as soon as I can as school is out for summer(woop!!!) in two weeks so we have literally no work to do!!!!!YEY!!!!!!!!!!!as you can see I'm very excited but next year we have our SATS-biiiiig tests....not as bad as GCSE's but bad anyway!!!- but that shouldn't keep me from updating!! I should have finished by the end of the summer anyway =( but the thing that WILL keep me from updating is the NEW AVALON HIGH BOOK!!!!!!!!!! I can't wait until I read it!!!!

But I'll update soon!!!
holz xxxx

how can u end it like that i was so hooked

update as soon as possible pleaaasssee



I LOVE it

Hey guys, please don't use chatspeak here. Thanks!

Hey, new reader!! I love the story, its great. I wish I could write action scenes like that instead of just the sappy romance ones I write all the time. PLEASE UPDATE!

its good update

miss hasta

update

Please update!!!!!!!

please?

what does chatspeak mean?

Update! PLEASE? Update A.S.A.P

*Sam*

Chat speak is like:

'yer an i was like ohmigod an this is well gd innit an kl an i cnt belive it oh my god!!!'

sorry if anyone talks like that, but thats mainly what chatspeak is!!! correct me if I'm wrong and I will update soon!!

Holly xx

I always thought chatspeak was talking about something other then the story. Maybe not. Hey, Candy, would you like to explain what chatspeak is so that we don't do it? It would be appreciated!

*Sam*