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#91 Helly

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Posted 23 December 2008 - 10:20 PM

Aaww, that is sooo sweet :icon_mecry2:


but u wrote I have felt do lonely. typo?


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#92 Princess_Missy

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Posted 23 December 2008 - 10:23 PM

Yes, it is meant to be I have felt so lonely.
Sorry about that.

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#93 Helly

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Posted 24 December 2008 - 12:59 AM

You're probably all sick and tired of hearing my poems by now.
This one's kinda stupid but anyway.

Gone with the wind.

You held my hand,
You held my heart,
The one I looked up to,
Whom I knew would never part.

That one night that you left for work,
You tucked me up in bed,
I told you that I loved you mummy,
You kissed me on the head.

You turned on the radio,
On that hot summer night,
The blinding lights and screech of tyres,
Made you scream in fright.

Mummy, tonight you won’t be coming home,
Although our love will always thrive,
It was ironic the add on the radio,
“Please, don’t drink and drive”.

When we scattered your ashes I started to cry,
Daddy braved up and grinned,
He said “Darling, your mummy’s in a better place,
She’s forever riding the wind”.
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#94 Princess_Missy

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Posted 24 December 2008 - 01:01 AM

That is so sad.
But it was a good poem.
And I am not sick of them Helen!

Love Melissa :heartbeat:
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#95 *♥Suki♥*

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Posted 25 December 2008 - 01:31 AM

I have not been on here for SOOOO long!!
I have missed so much!
And all the poems......Gosh!....They were totally fantabulous!
It made me write a few more Few more verses...
Here.

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~*Thank You*~

I never did it before,
But I m doing it now.
I m sorry for the delay
I m gonna start here right now.
Time For some gratitude to show to you daddy....

*I wanna
Thank you, thank you
For being there for me.
Wanna say
Thank you, Thank you
For everything you did.
Just wanna
Thank you, Thank you
For watching out for me,
Thank you....Thank you.

You never mentioned it,
shows how great you are.
Always misunderstood
You acted like the light in the dark
Time for acknowledging you...Daddy*

Didn't ask anything in return,
Always happy with what I do.
But you must be hurt inside...
Still you were standing beside me....
When I needed you..
When I needed youuu..*

Thank you...
You acted like the light in the dark..
Thank you..
Always happy with what I do...
For that I wannaaa...Thaaaank You.


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It's a song actually.
And It can be sang for anyone but I sang for my Dad (obvious because I used the word)
Hope you like it.
I will write more poems soon.

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#96 spell_balognax3

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Posted 27 December 2008 - 08:51 PM

CC is much appreciated, as I am well aware of how much these poems suck. And just because I feel that it's noteworthy, even though it's probably not, my poetry very often reflects the way I am feeling.

Empty Box

You are surrounded,
You cannot escape.
There’s nothing to take your mind
Off the walls
As they start to get closer and closer,
And all you want to do
Is escape.

But now the lid is closing.
You are being sealed inside.
You have no way to escape.
And you have no where hide.
Because when you have nothing,
What is life but an empty box?

Crying in the Rain

Don’t hide behind your jacket
Don’t cower under an umbrella
Don’t fear the tears
Because in the rain
No one can tell you’re crying.

Real Tears

So the tears that glisten on your face
Are real.
They puncture the eyes
And calm the heart.

The last one isn't really a poem, but I still like the last two lines.

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#97 Queen of the slayers

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Posted 27 December 2008 - 11:43 PM

So, my friend and I were joking around about writting a fluff pop song type thing and then she dared me to write one. And, well, I wrote lyrics...and she seemed to like it. So I figured I'd post it here.
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It's Time

It's time for us to have a talk now
C'mon, before I have a melt down
I need to tell you that I know about her

I found her number on your cell phone
but the name was unknown
So I called to see who it was

it's time for us to have a little chat
It's time to tell me where your heart's at
it's time to tell me who you love

How could you try to hide this from me?
you knew I'd find out eventually
I can't believe we lasted so long

that's it, baby we're history
how could you do this to me?
I've never felt like such a fool

it's time for us to have a little chat
It's time to tell me where your heart's at
it's time to tell me who you love

it's time for us to have a little walk
it's time for us to have a little talk
that's it, we're over, it's the end

It's time
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#98 *♥Suki♥*

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Posted 28 December 2008 - 01:40 AM

Banana Hater and Queen Of Slayers....I really liked your works. And Queen your lyrics certainly are nice! And writing them instantly is really hard seeing that you wrote them for a dare. And Shakey I like your first two poems more, i.e Empty Box and Crying in the Rain. The third one was more like a .....dialogue? Pft! Forget it, I can't categorize anything. It's all very good.


I have mine coming up in a few days.

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#99 crazee_top

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Posted 28 December 2008 - 06:05 AM

I had to write this for English... but ive lost the original... i think this was it... (ohh we had to you onomatopoeia... now my friends say im emo...)

Storm

Howl. Crash. Shatter.
The wind howls through the trees.
The doors crash with such force.
The windows shatter, into a million pieces.

Cry. Scream. Yell.
Children cry for help.
People scream in pain.
Parents yell to out of reach family.

Then suddenly,
Silence.
Nothing.
But fear.

Its not that good... I wrote it in about ten minutes.
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#100 Queen of the slayers

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Posted 31 December 2008 - 02:51 PM

So I was sitting at my computer and i was looking at my background and ended up kind of writing a poem about it. The first part is more about the photo/my feelings about it than the person in it. Towards the end it's more about the person. I am aware that this poem sucks xD

Heres a link to the wallpaper from DeviantART: Wallpaper

Here's the picture:
Posted Image
(It's Gerard Way)
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light another smoke
break another heart
I knew from the moment you first spoke
that you would rip me apart

and do you care
as you stand before me
with your disheveled hair?
why can't you leave me be?

Coffee in hand
tie tied right
here I stand
alone in the night

skyline behind you
eye squinted to the sun
a lifetime a head of you
my lifeline comes undone

smoke curls around your lips
words whispered only to the dead
your pants loosely hang at your hips
I wish you'd whisper to me instead

even through this I can see
the one thing I do know
you stand before me
an outcast's Hero
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#101 Monday's Child

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Posted 31 December 2008 - 04:32 PM

I feel that I should explain this poem, partly because it could be a bit of a new project
Okay, so while I won't go into the details, I was being distracted from some stuff by a new story idea
I had a basic plan and some characters, but I skipped about halfway through the story to a part that I really wanted to write
I then got stuck writing said part, and ended up writing some of what my main character was thinking
Just to clarify, she's not talking (or should I say thinking?) about an actually angel, but rather she sees Gabriel as her sort of guardian angel, probably only because he's helped her through some though times
This might be their first physical meeting - they've been talking via a chatroom for a while - although I personally think that what I wrote down is a bit too intense for that to be true
Anyway, here it is:

My Guardian Angel Cries, Clear Pain in His Eyes

Gabriel, please just open your eyes
The scars on your face aren’t deserving of lies
An angel like you needn’t hang his head
You’ve done nothing at all of which to regret
It was that person you spoke of who was in the wrong
For telling you false truths, for leading you on
Now, Gabriel, please tell me who took a blade
And with it the scars on your pale face made


If anyone feels like helping me add some more puntcuation, then go ahead :D

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#102 *♥Suki♥*

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Posted 02 January 2009 - 09:02 AM

Queen Of Slayers and Sophie, you both certainly ROCK!
Both the poems were so fantastic!

And Queen of Slayers, how are you able to write such awesome poems in moments? They are always SO GOOD!

Sophie, there is no comparison! You write poems with such ease it makes me wonder..."Wow..I wish I could write like that!"...*chuckles*

And now guys finally I give you two poems!
1 poem was written about a month ago and I just found it yesterday in my very much untidy desk.
Another one has been written about the new year ahead of us!
So here they go!

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~*THE DECISION*~

A decision to make,
Is just so hard.
What if I break,
Someone's heart.

I love one more,
The other little less
But that doesn't mean,
I will be ruthless.

One has loved me,
Just unconditionally
The other has been here,
Just momentarily.

The decision seems easy,
But that's from outside
When you look a little hard,
It rips me from inside.

But still I make the decision
Which is very hard
To choose between the two,
I will be broken into shards.

But whom am I kidding?
I love only one.
The one true love,
Who shall be replaced by none.

He has been there,
All through the years.
If I lose him,
I will be left with nothing but tears.

The other one can move on.
As he has always.
He may find someone else,
many love him anyways.

I m just happy with
My Prince of Love.
We are made for each other
I m his and he is my beloved.

I have now chosen,
The one that's heaven sent.
Now the decision's been made.
But not on a point of blade.

I know the last verse is completely lame but I don't know I just wrote it.

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~*WHAT IS NEXT*~

What the future holds,
no one knows.
One has to find out
When with the time he flows.

But I have no worries
What is next.
Whatever it will be
Will be for my best.

There could be a whole new world,
A very nice and peaceful place.
But who is sure?
We could be just sucked into the outer space.

But I have no worries
What is next.
because it will be god's own will,
It will all be a test.

Many relations may end.
Many hearts may cry.
But who is sure?
Maybe some wanna give it one more try.

But I have no worries
What is next.
because I have my true love.
So in peace I rest.

There might be a disaster
That frightens the whole earth.
But who is sure?
Maybe even a saviour can take birth.

But I have no worries
What is next.
because I will be on my own
I will save my own nest.

But in the end I think
It will all be fine
For this I m sure
It will be a pretty year 2009.


First I was writing this poem for indefinite future then somehow in the end I just shifted it towards 2009.

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Hope you all liked these poems. I know my poems are always extra long but please don't ignore them because of this reason!
Please comment and CC is always appreciated!

Thanks,
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#103 octoberoriole

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Posted 02 January 2009 - 02:48 PM

people come and people go
but certain ones
stay with you forever
Why must April come
and give me flannel tears?
Ready to wash away your memories
in the dingy rain
Why must this month hit
and take you away?
The word "Goodbye"shouldn't be said
but it's coming sooner than I thought
So many memories and so much pain
I'm not ready to let go


I don't like this but I tried to convey my mood and it just didn't come our right. Sorry guys.
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#104 awkwardchica

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Posted 05 January 2009 - 11:12 PM

Once upon a time
A girl liked a guy
She thought he liked her back
She convinced herself even
But he didn’t

He scared her
“Ignoring” her at school
So she flirted with him really hard
And he’d do something wrong
So she wouldn’t talk to him for weeks

And so the cycle repeated
And so the cycle repeated
And so the cycle repeated
And so the cycle repeated
And so the cycle repeated

When they saw each other
In the halls
He’d turn away like he didn’t see her
Or flip open his phone and keep his head down
Yet she still yearned

Finally she figured out
He didn’t want to talk to her anymore
So she didn’t talk back
She tried to go numb
It didn’t work very well

She saw his carefully averted eyes
She heard his sighs when she spoke
And even months later
She still tasted tears from rejection
And she felt so hollow

No one knew
She said not a word
Even though she denied it every time
She still liked him
A lot

The months passed slowly for her
She fought inside these feelings
She still had a year later
Why couldn’t she stop thinking about him?
She didn’t want to

Spring came
She hadn’t spoke to him since that day
She finally felt that she was over him
Finally
But secretly, she thought of him often

Still
There were no other guys
She “crushed” here and there
But it was nothing like him
Like them

They were so awkward
When they saw each other in the halls
They both turned away
And pulled out their phones
Pretending they didn’t exist

Over summer they didn’t see each other
But fall came once more
So did his birthday
They didn’t talk
The one year anniversary

One week later
“Guess who asked me to Homecoming?”
Her best friend asked
She guessed it on the second try
It was him

Suddenly her world went upside down again
Why did she feel so betrayed?
She didn’t like him
Right?
Right?!

She shouldn’t care who he asked
It was not her business
And she told herself she shouldn’t care
She did though
Way too much

The next day
When the group got together
They made eye contact
She attempted a watery smile
And he smiled a little bit back

From that day on
It was instantly less awkward
They said hi
Instead of ignoring each other
In those infamous hallways

One month later
After Homecoming
She took a picture of them together
He put his arm around her
And pulled her in close

They smiled at the camera
And said cheese
They laughed
And took another one
Then he asked her to dance

The awkwardness was gone
It was like it never existed
Thank you for Homecoming
They were friends again
And she couldn’t have been happier

Once upon a time
A girl liked a guy
She likes him still
She’s waiting for their happily ever after
But the story’s still being written
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#105 *♥Suki♥*

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Posted 06 January 2009 - 03:56 AM

Awkwardchica........That poem was just splendid!
It really rocked! No seriously!
It was just so great even without all that rhyming and everything!
It was like a tale and I could actually see the whole thing happening in front of my eyes!!

It was really really awesome! And the last stanza.....that was really the best!
Great job!

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#106 Singerchick 14

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Posted 06 January 2009 - 04:47 PM

Hey guys!!!! I know I havnt posted anything here in a while but my poem Ruins got voted in for best Poetry and I wasnt expecting to EVER get nominated for ANYTHING! So thank you soooooo much anyone that nominated and/or voted for me in the Winter Awards!

I couldn't be more thrilled to have won something for the first time on here or anywhere for my poetry! :D

Thanks ya'll so much! As soon as I write something new I will be sure to post it here, but that may be a while for a good one, lots of school and engineering and family stuff going on right now... x_x

Ok talk to ya'll sometime soon hopefully! =)

Thanks again!!!! ^_^

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#107 steffykins xx3

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Posted 07 January 2009 - 12:01 AM

I was feeling I guess sad one day so I wrote this absurd poem:

Untitled

Your face fails to deceive
Your smile sickens me
Your old self, how could you let it leave?
Those new eyes, I bet you can hardly see
The agony of others, because darling
You’ve left me aching
I’ve lost you to another
Just another plastic face in the making

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#108 *♥Suki♥*

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Posted 07 January 2009 - 12:46 AM

Steffykinsxx3: Your poem is really good! Think of a nice name for it? It surely deserves one! And the way you have written it with rhyming words that go with the idea is just great. It is sometimes hard to find words that rhyme with what you want to write in the poem. It happens to me a lot. Please give the poem a name and it certainly isn't absurd!

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#109 mychemro*kiss*

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Posted 12 January 2009 - 02:47 AM

I wrote this one day when I felt really lonely, and well... invisible. It's one of those things that's been lurking in my mind and I wrote it out. It didn't come out too badly, so I decided to post it.

I am the Invisible Woman.

I am that wet leaf in the gutter.

I am a speck of sand in the mirror.

I am that gust of wind you never see.

I am that molecule of hydrogen,
buried deep inside the mine field.

I am that needle in the haystack,

That grain of yeast in bread.

That 1% of saturated fat,

I am that girl next door.

The thought that is never thought of.

That idea that you forget,
but don't bother to remember.

I'm that girl you'd never give a glance.

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So... yeah.

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#110 bookgirl25

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Posted 15 January 2009 - 05:24 PM

Jess I dig it :]
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Peru

Small hands reach out-
Desperate for gifts-
Desperate for Your truth.

Small faces smile-
Over a game of soccer-
Over a sticker-
Given by those humbled-
In the face of extreme poverty.

Small houses sit-
Atop dust covered hills-
Providing heat only by fire.

Tears from your servants-
Tears for the fallen-
Tears for this poverty.
Shown in the twinkling eyes-
Of a child.

Fulfilled hearts embrace-
Your truth-
Hands reached out-
For Your love.

You give hope-
In poverty-
Shown in the twinkling eyes of a child.

--
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#111 Monday's Child

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Posted 16 January 2009 - 02:45 AM

Internal Silence

Where is my faith and where is my hope?
Where is the person that I need the most?
Where are the memories, the raindrops, the snow?
Where are the children that I used to know?

Instead I see shadows of their former selves
Their childhoods packed up in boxes on shelves
Covered with dust and in need of true love
If only solutions rained down from above

Then I wouldn’t worry, like I do now

And I wouldn’t wonder who, where and how


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#112 steffykins xx3

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Posted 16 January 2009 - 11:19 AM

Steffykinsxx3: Your poem is really good! Think of a nice name for it? It surely deserves one! And the way you have written it with rhyming words that go with the idea is just great. It is sometimes hard to find words that rhyme with what you want to write in the poem. It happens to me a lot. Please give the poem a name and it certainly isn't absurd!

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Thanks :D. It originally was "Plastic Faces for Plastic Personalities", but I changed it, and I think I'll just call it "Artificial".


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#113 *♥Suki♥*

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Posted 18 January 2009 - 08:26 AM

Thanks :D. It originally was "Plastic Faces for Plastic Personalities", but I changed it, and I think I'll just call it "Artificial".


-Stef


Artificial is nice...It's sounds...appropriate. I was thinking of a name for this poem the other day, you know a name for myself as you had not titled it ye. I thought of calling it "Plastic" and now seeing that you were keeping a similar name earlier...it makes me think that I CAN title poems...an achievement..

*puffs up the chest proudly*

LOL

Please post some more soon!

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#114 Amelia<3

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Posted 24 January 2009 - 02:25 PM

Cry

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Weird things make me wanna cry,
Like listening to 'Miracle' alone on a Sunday night,
Like him saying 'I love you',
Like me lying through my teeth,
Like it all not being true,
Like a rip in a sheath.

My life falls apart,
By the simplest things,
I feel as I'm made up of,
Meaningless dreams.
I'm shielding myself,
From the horrible realities,
Ignoring, pretending,
Faking mentality.

I don't wish to believe,
What I know it true,
And my when it's my heart I deceive,
My mind doesn't construe.

I cry over weird things,
They have simple meanings to me.
And like the circle of a ring,
That's cracking slowly,

I hide the break as much as I can,
And forgot about it on my hand.
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#115 jesses_girl_loves

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Posted 24 January 2009 - 09:14 PM

Your eyes
Are like a stone
Solid, Firm
Your eyes
Are like the moon
Glowing as if you we all there was
Your eyes
Are like the sun
Bright and fierce
Your eyes are like water
Reflecting the world, beautiful and otherwise
Your eyes
Are like books
They tell many tales
Your eyes...
They kill
They save
They make me love you...

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#116 Shikha

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Posted 25 January 2009 - 02:55 PM

Hey friends!

I had wrote this small but meaningful definition poem on "faith" which I would love to share with you. I hope you like it!


Faith


What is faith?

Faith is believing
Faith is being strong
Even when things can go wrong
Faith is having hope
As things slip out of your hands like soap
So don't worry, never cry
You'll always have a second try

This is faith
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Posted 25 January 2009 - 03:46 PM

Hello! Yet another sappy, stupid song that I've written. This one was kinda inspired by that new Jewel song. Sorry, I can't remember the name but I think it's "Don't Believe In Love" or something like that. But here it is! Forget Me:

At a young age, i knew I wanted this
But now you stage every kiss

Said I won't live with doubt
But baby, is their somebody else

Everytime we break apart
I lose a piece of my.... heart!!
Oh oh OH!

<Chorus>

I still love you
I always have
I still need you
I always will
And now don't for...
get me
I hope to always be in the back
Of your mind!
You're the one that,
the one that I loved
So just don't...
Don't forget me

Holding on
But the days drag on
You're up and down
And all around

I don't know where we stand
on solid ground!

Don't hug me
if ya don't mean it
Don't hold me
if you don't feel it!
Oh oh OH!

<Chorus>

<Bridge>

When you forget me...
Will I forget you...

If you forget me...
I won't forget you...

If you love me...
Please don't leave me...

Baby
Want me!
'Cause I...
(whisper)
Want... you
OH!

<Chorus>
Please... don't... ever evr!
Forget....
me.... me


Well their it is. I like it. Kinda. I guess. I should like it. So I do. What do you guys think?
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#118 sweet.chickadee.miss.krys

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Posted 29 January 2009 - 05:00 AM

Hello everyone!
Just wrote this today... Enjoy:

Summer Skin

You are so young, so pure
But, the wind, sun and water have got to you and now
You’re peeling back the layer of brown skin from all the wear
To reveal a new, pink purity
Your feet are shedding their footsteps to make way for new ones
Dirt removed, you’ll run for longer
No long insecure about the thought of paleness, the tanned leathery covering
will last you for a few months yet
Freckles show up as reminders of the damage, but you’re peeling back
Your summer skin and you’re so certain of where you’re going
You are so bright and alive
And your old skin is fading and falling off in flecks
And you’re getting older and newer
Peeling back your summer skin,
You’re new again



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#119 Amelia<3

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Posted 31 January 2009 - 07:37 PM

Did Somebody Say Muffin? (inspired by a Magic Bullet Commerical)

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She stares out te window,
Lifelessness surronding her,
She is nothing,
Not there.

Mentality breaking,
His voice shaking,
"Don't Cassandra,
Don't."

The infomercial
Continues on,
She feels like she's,
Selling her own life,
On an infomercial.

She can't handle,
What they think,
Or what they're telling her.

It doesn't make sense.

She doesn't make sense.
Her midn takes in,
Her emotions absorb,
But nothing lets out,
Nothing shows,

And continues like,
This pattern,
Going on.
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#120 marymbe22

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Posted 04 February 2009 - 08:52 PM

Okay i have one I wrote it a while back but its one of my favorites please tell me what you think! Advice? Anything you like please tell me...its my first post.

Weather Comes and goes
Sorrow doesnt go
It stays with you forever more
Flying away at the end of time.
But something is still
filled with sorrow.
Something is missing
Something is gone
Some is hidden
Where is it at?
What is it?
Is that something
A laugh?
A smile?
A happy memory?
Forever more lost in the gap of time
Never to be touched
once more.
Forever Missing
Forever Gone
Forever Hidden
In my memories forever more.


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#121 marymbe22

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Posted 04 February 2009 - 08:54 PM

Hey friends!

I had wrote this small but meaningful definition poem on "faith" which I would love to share with you. I hope you like it!


Faith


What is faith?

Faith is believing
Faith is being strong
Even when things can go wrong
Faith is having hope
As things slip out of your hands like soap
So don't worry, never cry
You'll always have a second try

This is faith


I really like this...Its really good!
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#122 Avoln_High4545

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Posted 05 February 2009 - 10:11 AM

I wrote this for my sister who i havent seen in three
years because her Husband won't let her visit us.
they've been together since High Skewl and he never treated her
with love.
I love You Carla

~~~Nolee <3~~~



~~~ Every Night ~~~

Every Night i wake in fright
that this will be the end for
You and me. I see Your tears
I see your fears.

Every Night I hear your pain
of breaking hearts again, and again
You come home crying wondering why
whats wrong with you, you try and try
to hide your tears no such luck I'm always here.

And now your gone far, far away I miss you sister
come stay a day. But Every Night I know you cry
About the boy who left you to die.

Every Night I wish you well and Every Night
I wish Him hell.


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#123 w/peaches

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Posted 08 February 2009 - 07:21 PM

That is such a sweet, emotional poem. I especially liked the last line.

Here is something I wrote for a boy who tore me up inside, and yet I'm still intrigued by him (although no longer romantically, but in a different way). I'll stop rambling now. Oh, but also, it's pretty bad, I was just making an attempt to rhyme because normally I don't rhyme.

Dear Max

Dear Max,

I finally got over you
I figured out what I had to do.
It wasn't too easy at first
It could have been better, but it could have been worse.

I used to lay awake at night
Wondering if you ever might
Feel the same way I do
Love me the way that I loved you.

It hurt me to know that she was yours
And that you were hers.
I used to imagine us together
I thought I'd feel that way forever.

The pain tore me up inside
Made me want to run and hide.
I struggled to stay strong
But it was hard, and I should have known all along
That you were bad for me
But love blinded me, made it hard to see.

It was hard to see that you loved her
And not me, and of that you were sure.
I would love the fact that you simply knew my name
I looked at you, and looked away, playing a sort of twisted game.

I played this silly game between me and you
The funny part was that you never knew.
You were my dirty little secret
And over time I began to regret
The fact that I hadn't yet gotten over you.

It didn't get easier when others knew.
The leaves and colors changed
But my feelings remained the same.
No, that's a lie - over time, my feelings for you
Grew and grew.

I could never understand why I hurt myself this way
Why my stomach fluttered, and I never knew what to say.
I used to be so collected, I knew who I was inside
But then I met you and for one, I was tongue-tied.

The effect you had still amazes me
The way you made it impossible to see
The way that you were hurting me, I knew
I knew that I should stop, but I didn't know what to do.

I didn't know what to do or how, or when
I'd try to get over you again and again.
Nothing ever worked, however
I needed to accept that we'd never be together.

But something stopped me from accepting the truth
Something kept me drawn to you.
That is what you did to me
I wish that I could make you see
The hard hearts you ripped apart
The way you broke and tore up my heart.

Three months of my life
Disappeared that night.
But it was a relief not to want you anymore
I used to question how I felt, but now I was sure,

I was sure that I was through with you
Being done with you was long overdue.
Because really, I never needed you here
When all along, I had him near.

But I'll never forgive you for the suffering and pain I went through
All because I wanted you.
You put me through three months of agony
It took me that long to see.

I'm a fool who can't forgive myself
I hope that you're ashamed of yourself.
I hope you know how you hurt me, Max
Your words, your eyes cut through me like an axe.

And now that I am done, now that I am through
Why is it I'm still drawn to you?
Sincerely Yours,
The Reminder of the Pain You've Caused


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#124 forget.me.nots

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Posted 09 February 2009 - 05:41 PM

Hmm. Just wrote this and I'm not sure what to think of it. It feels almost too short to express what I'm feeling right now, but it's about wanting to run away and start over, and get out of the repetitive loop where things are always the same.

More song lyrics than a poem, really. Wow, I feel wierd though about posting it five minutes after I wrote it.
I didn't even edit...*frets*

vigilante anthem


<H1 style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt"> </H1>

we'll be like vigilantes baby

burn this sad town to the ground

just stand with your head in your hands

watching it go down

watching us go down

but we we're still too strong to drown



this place keeps playing the same

like a dangerous loop that'll crush us if we

stay

run us over if we get in the way

suspend the things we meant to say

the things we meant to say



we'll be like vigilantes baby

new future, new skin, new faces

new loves, adventure places

and nobody will know the insides of our hearts

unless we tell them to

and we'll know what is true

we'll know what to do

i'll never lose you



The people here won't miss us when we go

five years and i see blurs

where all their faces should go

it's better if we let them go anyway

they don't know anything baby

they don't know



Lets make a vigilante anthem

for the young and weak

Permission to set fire and run

Burn, just let the whole world burn

Give it back nothing in return



Make your final stand and speak.



Tell me what you think!
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#125 thehealthyalternative

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Posted 18 February 2009 - 03:39 PM

SUKI-- I loveeeeeee your poem. I really do.

And JESS-- I updated DemoLovers :D (We need a nickname for it, yeah?)

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#126 Cookie x.

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Posted 18 February 2009 - 05:58 PM

That is such a sweet, emotional poem. I especially liked the last line.

Here is something I wrote for a boy who tore me up inside, and yet I'm still intrigued by him (although no longer romantically, but in a different way). I'll stop rambling now. Oh, but also, it's pretty bad, I was just making an attempt to rhyme because normally I don't rhyme.

Dear Max

Dear Max,

I finally got over you
I figured out what I had to do.
It wasn't too easy at first
It could have been better, but it could have been worse.

I used to lay awake at night
Wondering if you ever might
Feel the same way I do
Love me the way that I loved you.

It hurt me to know that she was yours
And that you were hers.
I used to imagine us together
I thought I'd feel that way forever.

The pain tore me up inside
Made me want to run and hide.
I struggled to stay strong
But it was hard, and I should have known all along
That you were bad for me
But love blinded me, made it hard to see.

It was hard to see that you loved her
And not me, and of that you were sure.
I would love the fact that you simply knew my name
I looked at you, and looked away, playing a sort of twisted game.

I played this silly game between me and you
The funny part was that you never knew.
You were my dirty little secret
And over time I began to regret
The fact that I hadn't yet gotten over you.

It didn't get easier when others knew.
The leaves and colors changed
But my feelings remained the same.
No, that's a lie - over time, my feelings for you
Grew and grew.

I could never understand why I hurt myself this way
Why my stomach fluttered, and I never knew what to say.
I used to be so collected, I knew who I was inside
But then I met you and for one, I was tongue-tied.

The effect you had still amazes me
The way you made it impossible to see
The way that you were hurting me, I knew
I knew that I should stop, but I didn't know what to do.

I didn't know what to do or how, or when
I'd try to get over you again and again.
Nothing ever worked, however
I needed to accept that we'd never be together.

But something stopped me from accepting the truth
Something kept me drawn to you.
That is what you did to me
I wish that I could make you see
The hard hearts you ripped apart
The way you broke and tore up my heart.

Three months of my life
Disappeared that night.
But it was a relief not to want you anymore
I used to question how I felt, but now I was sure,

I was sure that I was through with you
Being done with you was long overdue.
Because really, I never needed you here
When all along, I had him near.

But I'll never forgive you for the suffering and pain I went through
All because I wanted you.
You put me through three months of agony
It took me that long to see.

I'm a fool who can't forgive myself
I hope that you're ashamed of yourself.
I hope you know how you hurt me, Max
Your words, your eyes cut through me like an axe.

And now that I am done, now that I am through
Why is it I'm still drawn to you?
Sincerely Yours,
The Reminder of the Pain You've Caused


~A~ :user:


Oh my GoSH this poem is just so .... WOW!! Seriously, I loved the way you wrote it.
Keep writing great poems. :spinstar:

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Posted 19 February 2009 - 03:08 AM


I Thought


I thought you were my forever
But that ended when you broke my heart
How could you- after all we've been through?
It hurts now that we're apart
I thought you loved me
But that was then
I was young, not anymore.
You took my innocence.
You took my heart.
You took me with your smile.
I know it's over
But still with every mile
I walk, I walk for you.
I thought you were my forever
I thought you were my everything.
I thought wrong.
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Posted 19 February 2009 - 07:38 PM

The Weak and the Tragic

I'm a dry and barren scene
Traumatized by the obscene
I began so alive and pure
Now you've broken me down for sure.

-Stef
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#129 thehealthyalternative

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Posted 19 February 2009 - 08:11 PM

Oh my GoSH this poem is just so .... WOW!! Seriously, I loved the way you wrote it.
Keep writing great poems. :spinstar:

Mary Lou


I fully agree [x

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Posted 21 February 2009 - 12:28 PM

This might suck a little....

Roses are red,
Violets are blue,
But I still miss you.

Oh baby, I need to know why
Did you ever say goodbye.
Now you're gone, and I'm all alone,
In my cold an loveless home.

Roses are red,
Violets are blue,
But my heart is still in two.


So don't be afraid to tell me what you think.
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#131 w/peaches

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Posted 27 February 2009 - 07:18 PM

Oh my GoSH this poem is just so .... WOW!! Seriously, I loved the way you wrote it.
Keep writing great poems. :spinstar:

Mary Lou



I fully agree [x

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Thanks so much! :) I'm glad you guys like it.

This might suck a little....

Roses are red,
Violets are blue,
But I still miss you.

Oh baby, I need to know why
Did you ever say goodbye.
Now you're gone, and I'm all alone,
In my cold an loveless home.

Roses are red,
Violets are blue,
But my heart is still in two.


So don't be afraid to tell me what you think.


This doesn't suck at all! I actually really like it. Actually, yes, I really like it a lot. I'm not sure what it is, but something about this poem just gets to me (in a good way!). Great job!

I have another poem. As for this one, well, I have been writing a lot of poems about this boy lately... So here goes... Tell me what you think!

Best Kept Secret

I told myself I was over you
I told myself I was through with you.
And the funny thing is
For the longest time I believed myself.

I believed that I wanted nothing to do with you
That the one I needed was in front of me.
Tonight I truly began to see
You're just not someone I'll get over.

Other boys will come and go
Hands will be held, lips will be kissed
But you will remain in the back of my mind
Of course, I'll never do anything about you.

I'll just keep you there,
Locked up for me and only me.
You'll be my little secret
Kept from the world.

It's funny to think I was so in love with you
And even when I wasn't, I still wanted
Something to do with you.
And now that I know I still like you...

I still want something to do with you.
I just want us to be friends;
That's all I need
To be satisfed.

It's a major relief to know
That at least I'm not in love.
I truly was once in love with you
But now it's just a tiny crush.

I know this is for the worse
But we can still be friends, right?
As long as we keep it at that.
You're my
Deliciously
Delightfully
Deviously
Best kept secret.


And here's rhyming one I just wrote about the same subject...

Hold On to You

You've got a handle on my heart
One of two with the power to break it apart.
Or maybe that was long ago,
Maybe now I'm smart enough to know.

Now I know you don't have that power over me
This afternoon I started to see
That he's the only one who can break my heart
He's been the only one from the start.

But maybe that's not true
I have to admit that it used to be you
Who could have broken my heart
The one that did tear me apart.

Sometimes I still like to look at you
When I haven't much else to do.
I still smile, now and then,
At the sight of you, again and again.

You're just the kind of boy who will always
Make me happy, despite what I say.
Despite what I tell myself, there's no use lying
Because if I do, I'll just end up crying.

You're the kind of boy who a girl can't forget
And I have to live my life, I can't regret
Ever falling in love with you
Because what's a girl to do?

She can't control her true emotions
Especially when her heart is full of commotion.
And I believe I still have the right to
Hold on to you.

I'll
always
hold
on
to
you.


That one's one of my favorites. So please give me your opinions! :) Can't wait to hear what you think.

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Posted 28 February 2009 - 11:48 AM

I think that's a really good one! :a_smil08:
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Posted 28 February 2009 - 11:51 AM

This doesn't suck at all! I actually really like it. Actually, yes, I really like it a lot. I'm not sure what it is, but something about this poem just gets to me (in a good way!). Great job!

Oh Yeah, thanks. (And it's kinda about the way you feel when someone you love leaves you. :icon_mecry2: It's actually a song I wrote.)
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#134 w/peaches

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Posted 28 February 2009 - 04:43 PM

Thanks for your comment on my poem! And about yours - yeah, it did sound more like a song than a poem.

Last night I wrote about ten poems (I was on a roll!), so I'm going to post the better ones here. Scratch that - I decided that only one was actually post-worthy.

Reasons Why This is All Wrong

1. You have a girlfriend
2. I have a boyfriend
3. You'll never like me
And why is that so tough to see?
4. I can never, ever picture us going out
(Except today I could.)
5. We're much better off as friends
6. And it'll stay that way, from now to the end.
7. You probably don't give a damn about me...
So why do I obsess over you?
8. But maybe you do give a damn about me
Because today you said good bye to me... see!
9. See what I mean about obsessing over you?!
10. That wasn't really a reason, but I'm getting all off track
And I've been trying to get back -
11. But you're still stuck in my mind
Racing ahead, leaving me behind.
12. There are too many reasons to list here
And to the end of this list, I'll never get near.
I just need to accept
This is all wrong
And try to move along.
(But we all know I never will.)


Tell me what you think :a_smil08:

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Posted 07 March 2009 - 03:41 PM

^I really like this, a lot due to the way you wrote it like a list (a very nice idea)^ :D
Und now it is my turn:

My Angel

Silent, frightened angel, don’t feel you have to hide
Just look to your left and see that I’m at your side
Silent, frightened angel, undo your frustration
You don’t have to stay at this lost, forgotten station

Silent, frightened angel, the grieving state is dead
Now that it’s all over, there’s no need to hang your head
Silent, frightened angel, leave the past back then
We don’t need reminding of all the other men

Silent, frightened angel, simply lie down to sleep
You shouldn’t spy on the ants around your feet
Silent, frightened angel, their business is none of yours
Work out how to use your voice, lift your head up from the floor


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