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#361 24moon100

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Posted 26 July 2011 - 02:47 AM

WHERE has this been? Just wondering. ^_^


Oh and, HAPPY PAGE NINE!!!!



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#362 DayDreamer95

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Posted 27 July 2011 - 05:55 AM

Oh! Meggie!

Gosh!

I haven't been able to write in this....I love it so much...

Oh Skylar and Turner...

What I have in plan for them!!!


LOL!

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PS: HAPPY PAGE NINE

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#363 DayDreamer95

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Posted 03 October 2011 - 09:16 PM

ATTENTION!

I wanted to tell you that I've missed this story. I don't know about you, but it's being nagging at me lately. I've felt guilty, sad, and awful.

So what I'm going to do?

Rewrite it and repost! This won't be deleted, but I want to make a start for everyone to know. TURNER IS BACK IN TOWN B!TCH!

Yes so...any questions? concerns? Excitement?

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#364 sancia

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Posted 04 October 2011 - 04:36 AM

Here is one super-excited fangirl. You might have heard my scream when I read your post. I think my neighbor is just about to call police. :D Seriously, that's wonderful news Ally!
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#365 DayDreamer95

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Posted 04 October 2011 - 10:50 AM

:lol: :D
I haven't smiled like this in forever! I'm so glad you're excited! Because I'm totally excited about it too! Though I just have to finish With You and before you know TTP
Alex~ :020:
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#366 romanceluva11

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Posted 04 October 2011 - 05:46 PM

This is amazing!! I :heartbeat: it!!!
by the way, how did you make the cover?
I'm writing a book with my friend right now, but it goes under the category Adventure :)
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#367 NikkiandEm

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Posted 04 October 2011 - 06:49 PM

ONE EXCITED FANGIRL RIGHT HERE. HAVING A PANIC ATTACK

I NEED TO HEAR THIS. I NEED UPDATE.


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#368 DayDreamer95

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Posted 04 October 2011 - 09:39 PM

Haha...Okay! Well I wont' update till With You series is finished! Sorry! It's the rule!

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Posted 22 October 2011 - 09:51 PM

WHAT IF I BROUGHT TO YOU CHAPTER ONE?

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#370 solique

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Posted 23 October 2011 - 06:46 AM

Hey.

So I'm going to be straight up and honest, no sugar-coating anything.

It's not my favorite story. You have a lot of potential, you just need to use it properly. I find there are too many sub-plots and characters to keep up with. Also you don't give your characters enough time to grow and for the romance aspect to develop enough. And it's too happy, there's no drama.

It's also a bit too fine and dandy. There are barely any fierce dramas, only little problems here and there.

You need to make it more exciting, and gripping.

But, honey, don't let anyone get you down. My opinion is just one among billions of other opinions. Also HEAPS of people love this story, so you must be doing something right :D

and I'm soooo sorry if I sound cruel or nasty, I'm just giving you my honest opinion.

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#371 24moon100

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Posted 23 October 2011 - 02:59 PM

Hey.

So I'm going to be straight up and honest, no sugar-coating anything.

It's not my favorite story. You have a lot of potential, you just need to use it properly. I find there are too many sub-plots and characters to keep up with. Also you don't give your characters enough time to grow and for the romance aspect to develop enough. And it's too happy, there's no drama.

It's also a bit too fine and dandy. There are barely any fierce dramas, only little problems here and there.

You need to make it more exciting, and gripping.

But, honey, don't let anyone get you down. My opinion is just one among billions of other opinions. Also HEAPS of people love this story, so you must be doing something right :D

and I'm soooo sorry if I sound cruel or nasty, I'm just giving you my honest opinion.

xoxo



^Good job for giving your honest opinion in a gentle way! :)


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#372 DayDreamer95

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Posted 23 October 2011 - 08:02 PM

Shannon: You are very much right, and I have egknowledged this. That's why I've revamped this story! I'm going to have it more gripping and more sad-y. But i really apperciate the honest! I don't get it enough to improve, so I really do agree with you! And I don't think you're cruel! Not at all! If anything, you are an amazing MCMB member to be honest enough to tell me! So thank you!

Meg: Are you being saracastic? :lol:


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#373 Aprilloves

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Posted 26 October 2011 - 01:28 PM

oh my god ! alex i think im gonna die u are amazing!!!!!!!!! :mgicecream: :icon_study: :icon_study: :icon_study: :eusa_clap: :eusa_clap: :eusa_clap:
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#374 DayDreamer95

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Posted 26 October 2011 - 08:22 PM

What do you mean, April?

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#375 24moon100

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Posted 27 October 2011 - 09:42 PM

Shannon: You are very much right, and I have egknowledged this. That's why I've revamped this story! I'm going to have it more gripping and more sad-y. But i really apperciate the honest! I don't get it enough to improve, so I really do agree with you! And I don't think you're cruel! Not at all! If anything, you are an amazing MCMB member to be honest enough to tell me! So thank you!

Meg: Are you being saracastic? :lol:


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No sarcasm. :)
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#376 DayDreamer95

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Posted 28 October 2011 - 08:52 PM

Gotcha, Chica! :)
Alex~ ;)
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#377 NikkiandEm

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Posted 28 October 2011 - 10:12 PM

i would very much love some TP right now.
right now.
right now.
save me from my boring friday night of loneliness


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#378 solique

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Posted 21 January 2012 - 02:33 AM

What happened to this?

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#379 NikkiandEm

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Posted 21 January 2012 - 11:02 AM

i know :(
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#380 DayDreamer95

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Posted 29 January 2012 - 02:49 PM

No one knows what it's like
To fall in love with the perfect one
The person who's just pure fun
The one you know you want
But she doesn't.
And when you think you have it in your fingers.
It crumbles into sand.

-Turner Jenning


HELLO! I'm back with an attack! I'm busy with one very serious, but I'mma do this on and off..updates will be up soonish! So yayy! Enjoy that poem! Ponder! Wonder! Ask questions! I would be happy to answer!

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#381 sancia

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Posted 30 January 2012 - 09:55 AM

Ally that is awesome! I can't wait for update! That poem is soooooooo great. :D You can't see but I'm actually grinning like an idiot here. :D
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#382 24moon100

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Posted 31 January 2012 - 01:30 AM

Sweet! Love the poem. Post away please! :)
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#383 bubba97

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Posted 01 February 2012 - 03:07 PM

Aww that poem was about me wasn't it?



Yeah, right..

Ahahahah, Allie, when are you ever going to update?!


I can't wait anymore, I miss my Turner!


Please, please update!



-Mrs Jenning



PS : Shannon, Alex has told me the rest of the story (Yup, I know what happens NEXT) and trust me, it's plenty dramaticccc ;)

Although, your comment was really well said. I've never seen CC written so nicely, seriously.
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#384 DayDreamer95

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Posted 04 February 2012 - 07:42 PM

Hello! Thank you EVERYONE with the comments! Alex, shut up! Please? Hahah..anyways. It'll be revamped to where you might not even know if this is TTP! But anyways! I hope you like it! I'm going to post once I finish the edit! Hahah, anyways

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#385 DayDreamer95

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Posted 11 February 2012 - 10:31 PM

tall dark haired woman stood before Turner. Dressed in a button down shirt and a black pencil skirt. Her hair curled perfectly around her glowing face. Her sapphire eyes shone brightly, as she simply blinked saying
“My name’s Skylar Thompson”


SPOILER! For CHAPPIE ONE!~ Enjoy peoples! Comments are loved

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#386 sancia

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Posted 12 February 2012 - 08:44 AM

Ally could you just stop torturing us and post the first chapter?? :D I want to read it. NOW. Pleeeeeaaase?

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Posted 13 February 2012 - 09:38 PM

Haha, OH! Sammie! I have to finish it :blush: then edit it :evil: then post :love7: so it'll be a process! So anyways, haha! Just enjoy the spoiler!

Alex~
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Posted 21 February 2012 - 01:20 PM

I'm awesome! I'm almost finished! EDITTING IS GOING TO HAPPEN! :) So yaaay! I'll update as sooon as I possibly! :D
Alex~

Edited by DayDreamer95, 21 February 2012 - 01:20 PM.

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#389 suze.angelova

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Posted 23 February 2012 - 08:24 PM

I'm awesome! I'm almost finished! EDITTING IS GOING TO HAPPEN! :) So yaaay! I'll update as sooon as I possibly! :D
Alex~


YESSS!! I cant wait :D
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#390 24moon100

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Posted 23 February 2012 - 09:22 PM

YESSS!! I cant wait :D


My thoughts exactly. :)
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#391 solique

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Posted 24 February 2012 - 12:43 AM

Aww that poem was about me wasn't it?



Yeah, right..

Ahahahah, Allie, when are you ever going to update?!


I can't wait anymore, I miss my Turner!


Please, please update!



-Mrs Jenning



PS : Shannon, Alex has told me the rest of the story (Yup, I know what happens NEXT) and trust me, it's plenty dramaticccc ;)

Although, your comment was really well said. I've never seen CC written so nicely, seriously.

Really? I thought it was really rude O.o maybe thats just me.

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#392 sancia

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Posted 24 February 2012 - 10:00 AM

My thoughts exactly. :)


And mine! :)
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#393 DayDreamer95

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Posted 03 March 2012 - 08:32 PM

Thanks for the support! Proceeding is super hard!
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Posted 18 April 2012 - 06:55 AM

Are you still editing, Alex?

I miss this story!

Did you end up changing the first chapter to the version you sent me, or will it go along the lines of this story here?

Let us know when we can expect to read more! :D



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Posted 09 February 2014 - 04:35 PM

God! I've been crying from reading these comments. From these amazing people. From everything.

Miss this

Miss you guys!
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Posted 25 February 2014 - 01:43 AM

I miss this too. I literally just scrolled through the whole thread. God, I spoke so informally it's almost embarrassing :D.

I miss these days so much. I miss going on here all the time to see the updates.

This website holds so much nostalgia. Wow.
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