Posted 03 November 2007 - 05:47 PM
But I wonder how Josh wiil react
Anyways update soon
Posted 04 November 2007 - 01:52 AM
Posted 04 November 2007 - 08:13 AM
can't wait for the next update
Posted 04 November 2007 - 08:02 PM
Yes. this is the end
The very end.
So maybe i should let you guys read it?
Or should i keep rambling.
I think i'll let you guys read it. : )
I heard my mother getting out of the shower so I quickly pulled away from him on the guest room bed.
“I should go to my room.” I said, sitting up.
“Yeah, you should. But I don’t want you to.” Kyle said, sitting up beside me and kissing me lightly on the neck.
I shivered. “Kyle…” His lips moved to my mouth, which made it super hard to stand up and walk to my room.
When I finally managed to pull myself away from Kyle, I shuffled to my room and slipped out of the dress, throwing it into the corner. I pulled on a pair of pajamas and hopped into bed, smiling.
The rest of the weekend was filled with Kyle, Kyle and more Kyle.
And then Monday came.
Kyle met me at my door and we were walking when Sara and Josh walked towards us, on the way to school.
Sarah half smiled, and then looked slightly towards Josh, then to Kyle. I felt Kyle squeeze my hand lightly.
“Um, I have to do something up at the school, so I’ll see you later.” He kissed me on the cheek then started walking away.
“Yeah, I have to do that…thing…” Sara stuttered then walked after Kyle. Josh walked up beside me.
“Hi.” I said to him.
“Hi.” He had his hands in his pockets.
“Listen, Josh, I’m…I’m sorry.” I looked at him.
“It’s…. I mean…I saw it coming. I mean…I guess I kind of knew that you liked him, or he liked you…I just didn’t want to admit it. I guess I was hoping dinner would show you how much I cared for you.”
“It’s not that I don’t care for you! I do…it’s just that…I…not in…” I trailed off, unable to find the words.
He shrugged. “I understand.” He pulled a ring box out of his pocket.
My eyes got wide. “Oh, you weren’t going to…? Oh my god, were you?”
His eyes got wider then mine. “NO! If you’re thinking of what I think your thinking, no. It was a promise ring. Saying that, when I went to live with my dad…we’d still be together.”
I looked away from him, trying to find words to make him feel better.
“I think you should still take it. I mean, we might not be dating, but we’re still going to be friends, right?”
“You don’t even have to wear it, in fact, here.” He pulled a long key chain out of his pocket and slipped the ring onto it. “Here, a necklace.” He smiled and I turned and let him slip it around my neck. “You don’t have to wear it all the time, I don’t mind. I just want you to know that I still care about you.”
I reached my arms around him and gave him a hug. “I’m sorry Josh. I really am. I just…I had to do what my heart told me, you know?”
I felt him nod. “I know.”
I let go of him and smiled at him. “We should get to school.”
We walked towards the school, talking like old friends.
Kyle was waiting for my on the steps. “You talked to him?” I nodded, taking his hand and pulling him up the stairs.
“Yup. It’s all good now.” Josh walked past me and smiled.
“It’s all good now.” I repeated.
what'd ya think?
Posted 04 November 2007 - 08:38 PM
I'm so sorry it's over though
Please let us know if you have a new story up!
Posted 04 November 2007 - 09:05 PM
but it was a really nice update!
i'm glad she worked things out with Josh
Posted 04 November 2007 - 11:28 PM
I'm gonna miss this story
But I'm pleased that Josh was so understanding
Awww great story
Posted 05 November 2007 - 01:08 AM
Okay it is over now for sure.
And that ending was great.
I didn't want Josh to get hurt at least everything concerning
him is okay now. I though you gave us a great ending.
Posted 05 November 2007 - 06:29 PM
Posted 10 November 2007 - 09:19 AM
I LOVED IT !
I Just Can't Believe Its Over...
All Good Things Must Come To An End I Guess...
Posted 10 November 2007 - 12:51 PM
I have already started on a knew story, so you have that to look forward to!
I'm glad you all liked this one! I'll admit, I wasn't so fond of the ending, but I think it works.
Who knows, maybe one day I'll revisit it and change the ending?
Posted 14 November 2007 - 12:45 PM
Yay a new story can't wait for that!
Posted 29 November 2007 - 11:44 AM
I can't believe it. I kept wondering where this story had gone...but it never even occurred to me that it would be finished.
It was fabulous, by the way. I'm glad that she and Josh can be friends...that way Macy won't feel guilty about being with Kyle.
I still can't believe I missed the end. I'm so sorry!!
I love this story to bits.
Posted 22 December 2007 - 09:29 PM
Posted 23 June 2009 - 09:01 PM
It's so sweet! I love the way it ends!
I swear, I couldn't stop squealing as I read this story!
It was just so amazing!
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