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#271 total-robness

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Posted 03 November 2007 - 05:47 PM

Awwww that was so cute. Loved that update!
But I wonder how Josh wiil react
Anyways update soon
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#272 noleey

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Posted 04 November 2007 - 01:52 AM

Fantastic. I'm sad it's over though. It's a great story :D

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#273 Tay-hyper@girl

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Posted 04 November 2007 - 08:13 AM

Wow that was amazing
can't wait for the next update

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#274 ~book_worm~13

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Posted 04 November 2007 - 08:02 PM

THE LAST CHAPTER.

Yes. this is the end
The very end.
So maybe i should let you guys read it?
Or should i keep rambling.

.....

I think i'll let you guys read it. : )

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Chapter 31


I heard my mother getting out of the shower so I quickly pulled away from him on the guest room bed.

“I should go to my room.” I said, sitting up.

“Yeah, you should. But I don’t want you to.” Kyle said, sitting up beside me and kissing me lightly on the neck.

I shivered. “Kyle…” His lips moved to my mouth, which made it super hard to stand up and walk to my room.

When I finally managed to pull myself away from Kyle, I shuffled to my room and slipped out of the dress, throwing it into the corner. I pulled on a pair of pajamas and hopped into bed, smiling.



The rest of the weekend was filled with Kyle, Kyle and more Kyle.

And then Monday came.

Kyle met me at my door and we were walking when Sara and Josh walked towards us, on the way to school.

Sarah half smiled, and then looked slightly towards Josh, then to Kyle. I felt Kyle squeeze my hand lightly.

“Um, I have to do something up at the school, so I’ll see you later.” He kissed me on the cheek then started walking away.

“Yeah, I have to do that…thing…” Sara stuttered then walked after Kyle. Josh walked up beside me.

“Hi.” I said to him.

“Hi.” He had his hands in his pockets.

“Listen, Josh, I’m…I’m sorry.” I looked at him.

“It’s…. I mean…I saw it coming. I mean…I guess I kind of knew that you liked him, or he liked you…I just didn’t want to admit it. I guess I was hoping dinner would show you how much I cared for you.”

“It’s not that I don’t care for you! I do…it’s just that…I…not in…” I trailed off, unable to find the words.

He shrugged. “I understand.” He pulled a ring box out of his pocket.

My eyes got wide. “Oh, you weren’t going to…? Oh my god, were you?”

His eyes got wider then mine. “NO! If you’re thinking of what I think your thinking, no. It was a promise ring. Saying that, when I went to live with my dad…we’d still be together.”

I looked away from him, trying to find words to make him feel better.

“I think you should still take it. I mean, we might not be dating, but we’re still going to be friends, right?”

I nodded.

“You don’t even have to wear it, in fact, here.” He pulled a long key chain out of his pocket and slipped the ring onto it. “Here, a necklace.” He smiled and I turned and let him slip it around my neck. “You don’t have to wear it all the time, I don’t mind. I just want you to know that I still care about you.”

I reached my arms around him and gave him a hug. “I’m sorry Josh. I really am. I just…I had to do what my heart told me, you know?”

I felt him nod. “I know.”

I let go of him and smiled at him. “We should get to school.”

We walked towards the school, talking like old friends.

Kyle was waiting for my on the steps. “You talked to him?” I nodded, taking his hand and pulling him up the stairs.

“Yup. It’s all good now.” Josh walked past me and smiled.

“It’s all good now.” I repeated.

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so?
SO??????
SO?

what'd ya think?
the end!
THE END!

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#275 sophiewofie

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Posted 04 November 2007 - 08:38 PM

AMAZING!

I'm so sorry it's over though

Please let us know if you have a new story up!

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#276 216princesspie

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Posted 04 November 2007 - 09:05 PM

awwwwwwwwwww!
it's over! :icon_mecry2:
but it was a really nice update!
i'm glad she worked things out with Josh
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#277 total-robness

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Posted 04 November 2007 - 11:28 PM

Awwwww that was so sweet :m: .
I'm gonna miss this story :icon_mecry2:
But I'm pleased that Josh was so understanding

Awww great story
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#278 noleey

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Posted 04 November 2007 - 11:52 PM

Perfect ending :)

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#279 SoccerRules

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Posted 05 November 2007 - 01:08 AM

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!
Okay it is over now for sure.
And that ending was great.
I didn't want Josh to get hurt at least everything concerning
him is okay now. I though you gave us a great ending.
Wonderful!
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#280 Lizzy1212

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Posted 05 November 2007 - 06:29 PM

That was a great ending! At least Josh didn't get mad. I loved the story!!!



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#281 .:zebz_book_gal:.

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Posted 10 November 2007 - 09:19 AM

The Most Fantastic Ending Ever My Dear !
I LOVED IT !
I Just Can't Believe Its Over...
All Good Things Must Come To An End I Guess...

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#282 ~book_worm~13

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Posted 10 November 2007 - 12:51 PM

Yes, I know it is over.
HOWEVER.

I have already started on a knew story, so you have that to look forward to!

muahahahahaha.

I'm glad you all liked this one! I'll admit, I wasn't so fond of the ending, but I think it works.

Who knows, maybe one day I'll revisit it and change the ending?

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#283 ~book_worm~13

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Posted 10 November 2007 - 12:54 PM

I meant "new".
Sorry.

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#284 Tay-hyper@girl

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Posted 14 November 2007 - 12:45 PM

I loved the update but I'm all sad that it's ending.
Yay a new story can't wait for that!

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#285 lazybum4lyfe06

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Posted 29 November 2007 - 11:44 AM

I MISSED THE ENDING?!?!?! :o

I can't believe it. I kept wondering where this story had gone...but it never even occurred to me that it would be finished.

It was fabulous, by the way. I'm glad that she and Josh can be friends...that way Macy won't feel guilty about being with Kyle. :heartbeat:

I still can't believe I missed the end. :( I'm so sorry!!

I love this story to bits.

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#286 HoplessRomantic02

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Posted 22 December 2007 - 09:29 PM

I finaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaallly checked my email and found this story! Oh my God! I love the endiiiiiiingggg awwwwwwwwww!

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#287 stolen_dreams095

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Posted 23 June 2009 - 09:01 PM



It's so sweet! I love the way it ends! :D

I swear, I couldn't stop squealing as I read this story!

It was just so amazing! :D

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#288 Reader the Fish

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Posted 08 May 2012 - 06:37 PM

Even though I'm reading this in 2012, I wished you can read my reply. I loved this story SO much!!! 😍😍😍😍😍I started reading this late at night but couldn't stop reading until late night!!!!


- Yuyu💛💙💜💗💚❤
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