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Posted 29 December 2007 - 05:57 PM
Your poem rhymes. Poetry shouldn't rhyme.
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Posted 02 January 2008 - 07:51 PM
*scoffs* Shut up, Gracey. At least that's...uplifting. My friends go, "Is there something I should be doing with this that doesn't include fire, bodily fluids, window, or gas stations?"
"Face it, Gracey. You're going to be a writer. It's inevitable."
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Posted 28 January 2008 - 01:33 PM
Can I post the weirdest compliment I've ever gotten? Because it's pretty funny and I really want to see what people say. Okay: here goes (note explanation first)
I work on the Art/Literary Magazine at my school, but I've also been published it. So we were selling the magazines from my freshman year and this one older guy (kind of crunchy/grungy/guitar player type - probably in his late 30s) and a woman came up to our table and asked if we (my friend and I) had anything in it. I smiled and showed her a poem I wrote about a friend of mine. It's certainly not the best thing I've ever written, but not the worst I guess (If anyone's curious I'll post the poem here). Anyway she read it and had him read it. And then he was all 'that was great' so I said 'oh, well thanks.' (by the way I'm going but what I posted in my blog later that night, because this part I don't remember) and then he said 'no, that was great' and then - here comes the weird part - then he bowed to me. I was flattered and completely weirded out.
What about you peoples? Any weird compliments too? (some of these criticisms posted are compliments as well)
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Posted 09 March 2008 - 10:39 AM
"What I don't get is why you have so much detail about this one guy. It's ONE WHOLE PARAGRAPH! Personally, I don't care how his hair looks or how hot she thinks he is. I just DON'T CARE. Why couldn't you have written that much about how hot some of her girl friends are? WHY NOT? That's it, I'm done with you. Next time you write about how hot some guy is, just show it to your girly friends."
-Matt, my dear and caring friend. He just doesn't understand that I was writing for a girl's POV
Matt, after I asked how he liked it
"How come you never let me read that composition book you're always carrying around? You never let anyone read it, but remember lab partners before friends, Michelle. Lab partners before friends!"
- Christian, my lab partner. Colorful isn't he?
"Why do all of the girls in your stories end up making out with a guy who looks like me? Are you trying to tell me something, Michelle? If you are then just go ahead and tell me. I'm a man, I can take it."
- Christian again. And the boys in my stories look nothing like him.
Posted 12 March 2008 - 03:51 AM
Hm... Pretty good.
Posted 14 March 2008 - 05:33 PM
You’re a cynic’s cynic…you’re cynical about cynicism.
Posted 14 March 2008 - 06:57 PM
Posted 14 March 2008 - 09:25 PM
Write a sequel. NOW! Or else.
It should be longer
(To this day I have no clue what that means)
A little rough punctuation-wise
You read that out loud too fast
(It was a murder mystery, okay?)
There was too mch death in it
Posted 20 March 2008 - 12:24 AM
Hmmm.it's good, but there just aren't enough evil geniuses.
Posted 21 March 2008 - 09:58 PM
Friend (after reading Chapter): Um, that was really bad.
Friend: Because teenagers don't say 'abs' or 'his beautiful dark eyes'. Those expressions are strictly reserved for adults.
Me: Ok...You're weird.. (Walks quickly away from psycho friend)
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Posted 27 March 2008 - 11:08 AM
You´re main character is a loser. Do you know that?
Posted 02 April 2008 - 06:49 PM
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Posted 04 April 2008 - 06:46 AM
My bestest pal Elle
Oh my God. Take the poem back right now! That was so depressing, I think I wanna shoot myself in the head now!
My wonderful English teacher
Did you actually right that? Who helped you?!
My other bestest pal Haley
Is it a loooove poem? because it sounds like a looooove poem!
Posted 06 April 2008 - 10:53 AM
Posted 06 April 2008 - 03:12 PM
(It was a love story...)
There should be SPARTANS in it!
(Also a love story)
The main guy should pull out an AK-47 and SHOOT EVERYONE!!
(Erm, it didn't look anything like him.)
How come this guy looks like me? Are you trying to tell me something?
(Also a love story. Between a guy and a girl!)
Is she like gay or something?
Posted 06 April 2008 - 04:26 PM
This is crap. It's complete and utter crap. I hate it.
But it's so freakin' good. Best thing I've ever read
Posted 06 April 2008 - 04:42 PM
-best guy friend, K. and me, J. lolz
K: Oh, you write?
J: What do you think all those long emails I sent you were?
K: I was supposed to read that?
Posted 07 April 2008 - 08:49 PM
Z - You WRITE.
Me - Yes, and it isn't weird.
Z - Yes it is. Why don't you do normal things?
Me - Just because I write doesn't mean I'm--
Z - You need to get out of the HOUSE.
Me - Well, I mean, I do get out of the house... I go out, hop around a bit, and go back in... you know?
Z - I will never say this about anyone else, but we need to get you a boyfriend.
Me - o.o So you're trying to... normalize me? Just because I wanted to reach 24000 words the other day doesn't mean--
Z - What we need to do is get someone to go to your house with a rose in one hand and a bible in the other.
Me - Now what would THAT do, exactly?
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Posted 21 April 2008 - 11:23 AM
Z = A guyfriend of mine.
The conversation went on.
Sigh. No matter what I do, they think it's weird...
They're the weird ones, I think.
Posted 21 April 2008 - 06:21 PM
Posted 21 April 2008 - 08:55 PM
I thought that was wicked funny.
"I don't like the way this passage tastes."
I know, right. What did they do, EAT it?
Posted 22 April 2008 - 11:33 AM
L: You should make Tim and Holly a couple.
L: But...they would be a cool couple!
Me: What gave you that idea? They are like...day and night!
A: (meets us) I just finished reading your new story, Kati.
Me: What do you think?
A: Tim and Holly should end up loving each other.
L: Told you so.
Posted 22 April 2008 - 07:07 PM
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