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Posted 16 October 2007 - 09:02 PM
Put your hair in a do, it is whipping me in the face, I CAN'T READ IT.
Posted 17 October 2007 - 02:48 AM
It's really good, but there's something happening with all of the characters!!! It's like one long episode of Home and Away
Posted 18 October 2007 - 03:42 PM
Well I'm Canadian and I don't think I write differently than other people except for the fact that it's in french but when I write a text for english class I find it's perfectly normal...
Posted 18 October 2007 - 05:00 PM
It’s NOT ABOUT YOU! Jesus.
Care to explain why I’m suicidal in this story? Hm? -- T.
What? Am I supposed to read all of this? All these big paragraphs are giving me the creeps. -- K.
He hit her. Is something wrong with you? -- T.
Oh, I could just take those scissors and cut *** ******* *****! Such a *********** ******! Julia, what the *#&$%% is wrong with you? --K.
How can you TELL that they’re talking fast? She’s was just probably just reading it fast in her head.
Why do your characters speak so fast? They remind me of Gilmore Girls… --T
Yeah? Well, I can recite the US and British history word by word. All you can do is about heterosexual couples kissy kissy and touchy touchy. --F.
Him: Your title is fat.
Me: You mean like the gangster 'phat' as in cool?
Him: No. It's fat. Like a pig. --H.
I read of what seemed to be the first chapter of a wonderful novel. If you're willing to finish it, I can edit it for you and send it to one of my close friends--she's an editor. Though you might not want to use the word '*#&$%%' so much. --Ms. C.
Why isn't G. in this story? --M.
Posted 01 November 2007 - 03:41 PM
It may not actually be criticism, but something my mother said was the strangest, nicest thing ANYONE has said about by writing.
Mum: I know you write well.
Me: you've never read anything I've written *glares, hoping hard that this is true* how the heck do you know I'm a good writer.
Mum: because you talk like a writer.
*grins* I talk like a writer. ROCK ON!
Posted 04 November 2007 - 05:51 PM
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Posted 05 November 2007 - 11:47 AM
'Were you horny when you wrote this?'
Posted 07 November 2007 - 11:46 AM
She is such a nutcase. Sorry, but she is.
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Posted 13 November 2007 - 03:15 PM
"Oh, dear. You're so... beautiful and slender and wonderful, oh, such a great student, that was so well-written... you're amazing and you have such potential!"
My english teacher.
Bit of a wacko, but she completely loved me.
"Oooh! Is it about a drunk girl who drives down New York, you know... gettin' some? *wiggles eyebrows* It IS, isn't it? Pffh, don't lie to me, I know you're thinking it just as much as I am..."
-M, haha, I love that kid.
"Dude! TOTALLY SMASHING!"
Posted 13 November 2007 - 11:59 PM
One of the few times I ever told one of my friends that I wrote, she said: Oh, really? Because you have that author look about you. Pretty, but unusual and strange. I thought you were an author...
I was like, "Um, thanks?"
Because, apparently I look like a writer and I also look unusual and strange.
Is that a good thing?
Oh, really? Because you have that author look about you. Pretty, but unusual and strange. I thought you were an author...
Posted 15 November 2007 - 09:53 PM
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Posted 16 November 2007 - 07:52 PM
You give us words that we have to look up... and we all know its you Katherine!
Posted 19 November 2007 - 10:40 AM
Is this possible? I was a little confuzed. And here is what Lari said, when she read the same story:
I really hate the main character but I love this story!
That main character is such a sick loser...I love him.
Posted 19 November 2007 - 07:24 PM
^She was reading some piece I wrote and true I HAD looked up stuff on the thesaurus 'cause my writing would look like a first grader's if I didn't.
So I see you left me for a thesaurus. I feel so loved. --T.
That was SO FUNNY. You just had to be there. That was HILARIOUS.
Little did she know that I understood sh*t she was saying. --K.
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Posted 01 December 2007 - 12:16 PM
Why didn´t he die in the end?
Posted 06 December 2007 - 07:56 PM
well i've read the first 2 chapter of your story and its kinda good i guess, you should really get it published.
Posted 08 December 2007 - 09:17 PM
Posted 08 December 2007 - 09:56 PM
Hey! We have a writer in here, Ms. [insert name here]!
Me: Well, I do like to write.
Teacher: I know. When you read that bit of your free write... You've really got something.
Me [thinking]: It was a freewrite. It came off the top of my head. It was crap.
Me: Oh, well... thank you?
[Twas a different person than the first one]
Person: Well... what else do you like to do?
Me: I like to write.
Person: I know. When you read your free write... I was thinking "We've got a writer in here!"
Me: Erm. Okay.
Something like that. Anyway, it wasn't anything genius.
Writing is like a dream, an aching dream. Shadows ring your eyes at four in the morning. You should sleep, but your words propel you forward, streaming onto the computer screen. You should eat something, but caffeine fills your stomach, churning. "You can do it," it says. "Just keep going."
Writing is a storm, a blank pane filling with clouds--rain hitting it hard, shaking it.
Posted 08 December 2007 - 10:25 PM
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Posted 15 December 2007 - 04:42 PM
Classmate A: You write like a philosophe.
Friend A: Classmate A says you write like a philosophe.
Me: This is awkward.
Posted 16 December 2007 - 12:48 AM
I wish he would stop swearing in Spanish.
What exactly does "They kept it PG-13 at school but who knows what they did when they weren't their mean?" You know, they're allowed to have sex in PG-13 movies.
You so ripped off Gossip Girl.
Wait, which one is dead and which one's in jail?
Bleh! Religious epiphany cop-out ending!
Punctuation, dear. It's a beautiful thing.
Posted 17 December 2007 - 09:39 PM
Posted 19 December 2007 - 11:51 AM
This is your life plus tragedy.
Posted 19 December 2007 - 09:48 PM
Elmo? A crackhead?
person A: This chapter reminds me of pikachu.
person B: no, it reminds me of that weird crackhead kid, elmo.
person C: what? are you guys insane? This is totally a great representation of star wars.
Posted 19 December 2007 - 10:07 PM
Posted 21 December 2007 - 09:44 AM
Sounds like something Chandler from Friends would say... - P
Damn, the girls in your story are too confusing about what they want from guys - DJ
I don't think I need to after that statement. Cheers.
So, the guy you based me on... You're calling me a retard? - L
Umm... does that girl have a fetish for doing weird things? - A
P: Whoa... She's like... what's the word for her... what's the word for NOT independent? unindependent?
Me: Um... yeah.
P: Yeah, thanks!
Me: Um... no problem... seriously. *rolls eyes as he turns away*
Posted 21 December 2007 - 03:14 PM
Guy at School: You really wrote a novel?
Guy at School: For nothing?
Me: Umm... That's arguable.
Guy at School: You didn't get anything?
Me: I got a certificate that I can hang on my wall.
Guy at School: So you won?
Me: Well... Sort of. Me and 13000 other people.
Guy at School: In America?
Me: In the world.
Guy at School: What a waste of time.
Me: I LIKE writing. Its my FAVORITE THING.
Guy at School: That's weird.
Posted 21 December 2007 - 03:44 PM
You write stories? You are sick.
Posted 21 December 2007 - 09:44 PM
Wow! You cuss a lot!
Are you like obsessed with boys?
wow! That makes me feel good!
It's boring me so, I'm leaving
Sarcasm is a wonderful thing!
And you have cow problems!
You're a cow
Where you on crack when you wrote this?
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Posted 23 December 2007 - 07:06 PM
I can't believe you would do something as stupid as copying someone else's writing. Who really wrote this?
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