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#136 *~^Elena^~*

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Posted 30 May 2009 - 01:23 PM

I'm back!!!!
And not wrinkled like a prune i hope.
Finally a break from my stressed out week. I HATED last week so much.

haha tell pam to chillax tongue.gif tanya's not a person who gets mad often. its more scary than unusual really! hahaha. peace out.

I think I'm chillaxed. haha for two days i guess i am.


TANYERz! HEYY!!!
I have been planning on reading this for forever!
Whaha! i'm reading this now. i'm like on part of chapter 2.
haha i'm reading so slow.. :wub:
I'm just replying because i have to go to enza's house for father butch.
this story is intense im telling yah.

pam=]

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#137 katfaye

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Posted 31 May 2009 - 01:03 AM

OOOH I HAVE A GOOD SLOGAN!!

AND ITS IN DANTE'S POV!!

"I have no regrets from loving you, take only the good memories"

WAAAA!!!

People who wants this, raise your hand!!

*raises hand*
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#138 *<Alenaire>*

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Posted 31 May 2009 - 04:56 AM

hehe sorry guys if the ending wasn't to your liking ;) I just find that a happy ending doesn't suit this story at all. This story gives a noirish feel, and a Happily Ever After ruins it for me :( Sorry! Besides...usually when a Demon is involved, it doesn't really go the way you want it to be lol

Wow! You guys have a Dante fanclub lol :D I'm so excited to see your banners! ^_^ And I go with what katfaye's suggestion above ^

Hey Pam! :D :D Take your time in reading this story! :P and OMGG, Father Butch is there?? I haven't seen him in like, AGES. Not like he and our family are in speaking terms or anything...there's a sort of hard feeling involved between parties, and I don't actually want to see him again. :| GOSH, he is so two-faced!

...

Well...I'm not going to indulge you with details...so...take your time with Dante! :D (Oh, and don't speak about what I said to the Espanol family >3<)

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#139 x--JinxedAngel

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Posted 31 May 2009 - 05:40 AM

Aw that's alright Tanya, I know what you mean... But...Dante really did love Malena didn't he? ;]

Kat - OH MY DAYS!! I love that slogan!!! xDDDDDDDDDD Eeeeeeeeeeeep!!! (Hm...now all we need is banners... ;]
Hahaha. Okay, I'll get to work on it as soon as I'm finally free from tests...which is like...a week. =| Sorry.

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#140 cutejesse

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Posted 31 May 2009 - 08:23 PM

^Dante LOVED Malena. definitely. why would he even bother to save his mistress when he knew of the consequences, if it didn't involve an emotion such as love? :P

YAY! I LOVE THAT SLOGAN!! Anyway, good luck on your tests Amy!

Can't wait to see the banners! =P =P
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#141 x--JinxedAngel

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Posted 01 June 2009 - 01:54 PM

Lol, thanks. I will... ooh... this is going to be hard... Are we allowed to even use pictures from Google? (answers own question= uh...no)

Has anyone got ANY suggestions about the banners at all? I'm really at a dead end. :/

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#142 katfaye

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Posted 04 June 2009 - 05:30 AM

how bout just a banner without a picture? like just design it using photoshop and stuff :D like a card for all us Dante fanatics! xD
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#143 cutejesse

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Posted 07 June 2009 - 01:39 AM

DANTE!!!! Posted Image

but he definitely still makes me Posted Image
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#144 x--JinxedAngel

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Posted 07 June 2009 - 12:38 PM

Those emotes was the cutest things I've ever seen. :] Kyaaaaaaaaaa!!

-Amy

Oh, remember when Tanya posted that picture of Sebastion from Blood Loan or something? He reminds me of Dante in looks. ;]

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#145 cutejesse

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Posted 07 June 2009 - 06:56 PM

you mean sebastian from kuroshitsuji?

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#146 x--JinxedAngel

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Posted 08 June 2009 - 11:21 AM

Yes, that's what I meant. :]

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#147 cutejesse

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Posted 18 June 2009 - 06:09 AM

Sebastian is hot.

that's how i pictured dante, actually...i pictured him to look like sebastian! :heartbeat:

i miss this story.

i might reread it again..

right about...

now

:heartbeat:

i'll prolly still cry at the end but wtv haha
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#148 katfaye

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Posted 19 June 2009 - 07:11 AM

i actually want to nominate this story for Punk'd

his award goes to the story with the most creative plot line, filled with memorable characters, great twists and turns, etc.


MEMORABLE CHARACTERS!!!!!

with a plot line that makes you swim in your own pool of tears

and I can nominate this for Happily Ever After

the story may be one which concluded with a sad, bittersweet, etc. finale, and not necessarily, a happy one.


BECAUSE the ending of this contrasts so much to the award title LOL and it's a beautiful ending imo
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#149 katfaye

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Posted 28 June 2009 - 12:41 AM

i reread the story again!

my heart constricted :(

...though i didnt cry lol
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Posted 28 June 2009 - 02:18 PM

Awww. It's toughened you up. :lol:

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#151 cutejesse

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Posted 02 July 2009 - 05:15 PM

Hey amy, if you would reread this again, do you think you would still cry buckets? xP
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#152 x--JinxedAngel

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Posted 03 July 2009 - 05:25 PM

I don't know actually :lol: ... it'd depress me again though. That's for sure. And you know what? I'll read this again soon. BEFORE I go on holiday. I love this story so much.

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#153 cutejesse

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Posted 16 July 2009 - 04:38 PM

WHOOT. tell me what you felt after reading this twice! x)
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#154 cutejesse

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Posted 18 July 2009 - 09:04 PM

I read the story again!

This part made me laugh:

Dante had gone up the stairs with the young lady acting limp by his side. He had seen many a woman try these exaggerated performances in front of him, and this was by far the worst he had ever seen.


and this. This part REALLY captured what women nowaday think!

“My lady!” the baroness was running towards her, lifting her skirts to reveal her white ankles. “Why are you leaving so suddenly?” Her face was troubled. “Did we do something to change your mind?” She tilted her head at an angle which she thought would best accentuate her cheekbones.


AND I NOTICED something!

Dante, what is it that you hold most dear?” Malena asked, wanting to forget the trepidation with a question.

“What I hold dear?” Dante was amused by his mistress’ query. He did not think she was so interested in his life. “Why do you think a demon like me has that?”

“Everyone does.” Malena turned to look at her butler’s face that was half shadowed by the candlelight. “Even I have that. Maybe not what you hold ‘dear’, but important. What is the most important thing to you?”

Dante looked thoughtful for a few seconds, then his lips arched into a hollow smile. “My memories. The memories that I have cultivated over time.”


“I have to atone for my offense to the contract.” Dante’s lowered his eyes in a sad manner.

“What do you think will happen?” Malena suddenly found herself to be nervous.

“My Revered Master, the highest Devil Himself, will make it so that both of us will suffer.” He turned his eyes away from Malena’s. “He has always known what is the best punishment. He will take what is important from both of us.”


SEE??? the devil took away what was important for both of them, tearing them apart forever! he took away dante's precious memories, and for malena, the devil took what was important to her too! The precious memories she also shared with dante...memories that would never be duplicated again! especially the memories of him falling in love with her... :icon_mecry2:

oh no im going to cry again...

WAAAAA
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#155 x--JinxedAngel

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Posted 19 July 2009 - 04:09 PM

I finished it again too!! I cried again, but not terribly like last time. I ... love... Dante... so so much. He seems more human everytime I read this. (except his fighting skills).

-Amy

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#156 cutejesse

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Posted 20 July 2009 - 09:21 AM

what's your favorite part in the story? :D :D
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Posted 25 July 2009 - 09:54 AM

For Tanya's eyes only:

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#158 *~^Elena^~*

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Posted 05 August 2009 - 08:23 PM

Tanya!!!
I'm kinda back!
hahaha.
OKI this is like the saddest story ever! thanks a lot for making me cry!

Hehe Just joshing.
Another one of your great works tan!

PAM
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#159 katfaye

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Posted 05 August 2009 - 08:35 PM

hey, whats your fave part Pam?
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#160 *~^Elena^~*

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Posted 05 August 2009 - 09:23 PM

“I have taken my leave for a week, and have left my business with my trusted assistant. I care more about you after all.” Linares grinned at her, but Malena did not even look up from her papers to notice.


Okay something about this part just makes me really sad and happy at the same time.
I don't know why this part but when i read it, i felt butterflies in my stomach (weird me)
I love the whole story and if I can quote all of it I would. hahaha.

Oh.. One more thing... Vida... she kind of reminds me of Maria-chan from the manga Skip Beat. Whenever her character comes, i picture her as Maria. haha.

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#161 katfaye

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Posted 05 August 2009 - 09:34 PM

Ohh I know maria=chan! lol. haha yeah she's kind of like that haha.

linares is really really sweet :c i was so sad for him during the epilogue.

but i actually love dante more! xD hes soooo hott

i picture linares as a good-boy type of guy lol
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#162 *~^Elena^~*

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Posted 05 August 2009 - 11:26 PM

I know he is!
How great it would be if someone was like that in my life... *le sigh*

yeah dante is cool too! he's like the guy that you would love stick to. haha.
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#163 takari28

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Posted 15 August 2009 - 01:48 PM

This is an awesome story.

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Posted 18 August 2009 - 03:09 PM

That was a really good story.

At first I was a bit confused about the ending but after I realized what happened I felt so sad.

“Dante, what is it that you hold most dear?” Malena asked, wanting to forget the trepidation with a question.

“What I hold dear?” Dante was amused by his mistress’ query. He did not think she was so interested in his life. “Why do you think a demon like me has that?”

“Everyone does.” Malena turned to look at her butler’s face that was half shadowed by the candlelight. “Even I have that. Maybe not what you hold ‘dear’, but important. What is the most important thing to you?”

Dante looked thoughtful for a few seconds, then his lips arched into a hollow smile. “My memories. The memories that I have cultivated over time.”


“I have to atone for my offense to the contract.” Dante’s lowered his eyes in a sad manner.

“What do you think will happen?” Malena suddenly found herself to be nervous.

“My Revered Master, the highest Devil Himself, will make it so that both of us will suffer.” He turned his eyes away from Malena’s. “He has always known what is the best punishment. He will take what is important from both of us.”


I agree with cutejesse. You feel like sobbing your heart out after finding out what the Devil did to both of them.

The devil is very devilish. He does his job well.

Great story Tanya.

-Nikki :icon_sunny:

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#165 cutejesse

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Posted 26 September 2009 - 09:23 PM

Nikki: :D
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Posted 22 February 2010 - 07:46 AM

Aw, I actually miss this story :c
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Posted 23 February 2010 - 04:21 PM

So do I Tanya... D:
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Posted 24 February 2010 - 07:51 PM

Can someone explain the ending?

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Posted 12 March 2010 - 11:53 AM

^What don't you understand?

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Posted 14 May 2010 - 05:55 AM

mmm...maybe she doesn't get the ending like how him kneeling and saying "what do you want to call me" means. basically, he lost his memories of her :(
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Posted 26 July 2010 - 03:17 PM

Heeey :)
New reader...
Loved your story
It was great!
Loved reading it :)

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Posted 02 December 2010 - 07:31 AM

Heeey :)
New reader...
Loved your story
It was great!
Loved reading it :)


Did it make your cry? xD It sure made me cry! haha
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#173 katfaye

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Posted 28 July 2012 - 10:53 PM

Babump!
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