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#91 Shaheen

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Posted 01 June 2011 - 10:45 AM

Oooh, this is awesome story! Ethan is so adorable! Can't wait to read more.

*Sam*


Thanks, Sam!!! I'm so glad you think so! :)

YAY!!!

update soon!!!!!


this makes me happy!


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LOL. My updates are short, that's why I do my best to update ASAP!

HE really likes her!
Poor Ethan Although I too would have freaked out like Aurele if i got drunk and ended up married

James and Vanessa ...hehe what are you upto shaheenie? :D



Yes, he does.

I knowwww!!!! Same for me!!

LOL...just spicing the story up a bit. Who know, it might lead no where? ;)


Amazing, Lovely, Can't Get Enough, Satifices My Reading Needs, UPDATE!!!

Shaheen you are amazing! Just like Ethan! And I want an update! And please ALERT ME! I feel so bad I don't get to the updates FASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSST ENOUGH!!!!!


LOVESSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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Thanks a LOT!! Posted Image

Urm, alert you? Okay. I've never alert anyone. But if you're specifically asking to, I will! ;)

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#92 Shaheen

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Posted 01 June 2011 - 11:21 AM

.:.ChapterEight.:.



“WHAT?” I yell at the top of my lungs. NOT in a happy way!

“You’re having dinner with Ethan tonight.” Evelyn says, looking bored.

“WHAT??” I yell again. I think you must have concluded by now that I’m an overdramatic person.

“Stop your melodrama!” Evelyn rolls her eyes. “I’ve just talked to Ethan. He wants to have dinner with you. And I’ve already told Adam to ask for special dinner room for you guys. Now, isn’t that just nice of me?” She asked, showing me her oversized grin.

“I’m not going!” I inform her in my casual stubborn tone with a flip of my hair.

“You’re SO going! Even if Adam has to grab your legs and, me your arms, to carry you there!”

“That’s kidnapping! James can bring in the federals for that!”

“Really? And me who thought that James will hold the door for us!” Evelyn makes her innocent face.

Well then, it’s either being drag like bag, or get ready and avoid obvious humiliation.



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I don’t even know why I’m bothering on my appearance for a dinner with Ethan. I mean, it’s not as if I like him or anything. Sure, he’s… my husband! But, I still do not like him.He’s SO not my type (He’s a bit too gorgeous and male for my liking). I guess you know what my type is; someone with a face who looks like a scared puppy!

I clean my smudge lipstick with a tissue paper and walk to open the door for Ethan.

“Hello, beautiful!” He smiles at me, showing me his dimple, his dark green eyes shining like emeralds. And I’m not even exaggerating over the description. Okay, just a tiny bit. His black hair is a bit ruffles, and…I notice that he’s wearing the ring. Our wedding ring! This makes my heart to speed up a bit, and perspiration running down my back in panic.

“Give me a sec.” I croak, close the door on his face, and press myself against the wall and count: one rabbit, two rabbits, three rabbits, four rabbits….. When my heartbeat turns normal again, I take some deep breaths, open the door again and smile.

“I’m ready!”

“Good to know!” He smiles at me again, and takes my hand in his while we walk to our dining room Adam arranged for us. As we walk I force myself to ignore the warmth of his hand in mine, and the tingle feeling down my spine. I can feel his thumb lightly caressing my wrist. With a gulp, I ignore that too. As far as I can manage, that is!

“Why did you want to have dinner with me?” I ask him, breaking the silence while we walk on the deck.

“Why, to seduce you back again!”

“I won’t let you.” He looks down at me, his face hidden in by the shadows of the night, but he doesn’t say anything. We continue to walk in silence, the light cold wind making me to shiver, or maybe it’s his presence. And when we arrive, he opens the door for me, waiting for me to enter first.

The room isn’t large and oversize, but strangely romantic with a chandelier just above our table and lots of candles. I feel strange to dine with this man, whom I barely know. Alone in a room with him, with just a waiter waiting for us at our table!



We dine in silence. I don’t know what to say to him, and he too seems to be a bit uneasy. Maybe Adam went a bit too far with the deco, that’s why he seems so out of place. Or maybe I’M SCARING HIM!! That would be nice right! Ethan Spencer got scared of Aurélie Nora McCarthy! Oh, the joy of it!

“Why did you leave me Aurélie?” Ethan asks out of blue, his voice soft. And how am I supposed to answer that??

“I-I didn’t know you Ethan…”

“This isn’t a reason! You married me!”

“I was scared. I had to go.” I state truthfully.

He shook his head at me, his eye looking strange…almost gleaming. Maybe it’s the light. He licks his dry lips and looks at me again, his jaw hard, “Aurélie, you have absolutely no idea how much you hurt me. And I’m ready to forgive you for what you did to me…only if you’ll come back to me.” He says his voice hard, echoing in the room.

The obvious pain in his voice cuts though my heart, and my eyes tingle, and starts to fill.

“I’m sorry.” I whisper. “But Ican’t.”

He looks at me and nods. “Won't you even give us a chance?”

“I can’t.”

“You can’t or you don’t want to?”

“I don’t know.” I look at him and see that his face looks dead serious. “Are you angry with me?”

In response, he just shrugs, and then says, “I just have to seduce my wife back again then!” I notice his smile, and I decide not to freak out over his answer because it just feels good to know that he’s not THAT angry with me.

“I won’t let you!” I stick out my tongue at him, making him to laugh.

The good thing is that I’m glad this evening ended up on a pretty good note. And I don’t even know why I care! But the thing is I do, and I don’t want to hurt Ethan. And it’s a feeling that I do not fancy. At all!
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Love it?? I guess I'm being sadistic though. Always trying to hurt Ethan... :(

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#93 xx.Phoebe.xx

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Posted 01 June 2011 - 11:59 AM

Ethan should just cool it. Aurelie was DRUNK!!! Though that's just an excuse for Ethan to marry ME! I promise to make him very happy :D

Great updates, Ninja :)

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Posted 01 June 2011 - 04:08 PM

Great update!

I feel so sorry for Ethan.
1. He really wants her
2. He is gorgeous
3. His name is Ethan
4. he IS Ethan.

I like Ethan :)

Honestly I just woke up and read this.
Thank you for my 'coffee'

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#95 heykaterpillar

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Posted 02 June 2011 - 02:06 AM

I just want to scream at Aurelie's ear, "What is wrong with you woman?!" There's a perfectly handsome and awesome guy who's head over heels for you and you still don't want him?! :hyper:
hahaha. She's lucky. and I love her still despite her efforts to avoid Ethan. :lol:

I do hope she will soon give Ethan a second chance. ^_^

“Why did you leave me Aurélie?” Ethan asks out of blue, his voice soft. And how am I supposed to answer that??


Best line ever! I love this part. :eusa_clap: It made me cry somehow. :icon_mecry2:

Really awesome update! This is truly one of my favorite stories here at MCMB. :heartbeat:
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Posted 02 June 2011 - 03:03 AM

WHY DID YOU MAKE ETHAN SO DAMN HOT!!!!

i keep comparing everyone to him


urgh!!

loved it none the less

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Posted 02 June 2011 - 06:13 AM

*gulp*
They are having dinner
They are having dinner in a room alone
They are having dinner in a room alone and he IS trying to seduce her.

Oh my
And yes you ARE sadistic
If it were me I'd let him seduce me *giggle*

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#98 sancia

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Posted 02 June 2011 - 07:15 AM

*gulp*
They are having dinner
They are having dinner in a room alone
They are having dinner in a room alone and he IS trying to seduce her.

Oh my
And yes you ARE sadistic
If it were me I'd let him seduce me *giggle*


That's exactly what I thought of when I read the update. :D Me loves this!

*Sammie*
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#99 Shaheen

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Posted 02 June 2011 - 08:23 AM

Ethan should just cool it. Aurelie was DRUNK!!! Though that's just an excuse for Ethan to marry ME! I promise to make him very happy :D

Great updates, Ninja :)

Bee



You??


Why, bee? Don't you have enough guys after you in London? According to your friend Mel.... :P

Thank you Princess!!

Great update!

I feel so sorry for Ethan.
1. He really wants her
2. He is gorgeous
3. His name is Ethan
4. he IS Ethan.

I like Ethan :)

Honestly I just woke up and read this.
Thank you for my 'coffee'

Lauren :)



LOL. I totally laughed when I read the part 'His name is Ethan; he IS Ethan'!!!!

Ah. The booster again.


I just want to scream at Aurelie's ear, "What is wrong with you woman?!" There's a perfectly handsome and awesome guy who's head over heels for you and you still don't want him?! :hyper:
hahaha. She's lucky. and I love her still despite her efforts to avoid Ethan. :lol:

I do hope she will soon give Ethan a second chance. ^_^



Best line ever! I love this part. :eusa_clap: It made me cry somehow. :icon_mecry2:

Really awesome update! This is truly one of my favorite stories here at MCMB. :heartbeat:



WHY DID YOU MAKE ETHAN SO DAMN HOT!!!!

i keep comparing everyone to him


urgh!!

loved it none the less

mel :)


LOOOLLLZZ. Actually, though I'm the writer here, I feel the same!! I mean, I'd have TOTALLY jump him. Okay, probably not, but you know what I'm mean.

We'll see if she does!! :P

Haha, THANKS!!

Really??????? Posted Image That's an awesome thing to say!

*gulp*
They are having dinner
They are having dinner in a room alone
They are having dinner in a room alone and he IS trying to seduce her.

Oh my
And yes you ARE sadistic
If it were me I'd let him seduce me *giggle*



You got it all right Liberty! :D

You wished you were in her place right? :P

I think so too :( I mean, I'm hurting him way too much.

I'm sure ;)

That's exactly what I thought of when I read the update. :D Me loves this!

*Sammie*



LOL!!!!!!!

Thank you Sam/Sammie!!!! :D
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#100 DayDreamer95

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Posted 02 June 2011 - 08:04 PM

One frigging word.....LOVE....Another one is....IT.....

I'm not sure why, but I'm falling for Ethan, but what can I say? I fall for dreamy guys....like...like...nevermind about that, Post please. I need more ETHAN TIME! And like Aurelie and I are now BESTIES! I mean, she's a girl after my own heart!
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#101 bubba97

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Posted 03 June 2011 - 06:22 AM

Best. Update. EVER!


Ethan... Oh Ethan :heartbeat:


He's adorable!



Hahahaha, it's awesome how everyone's always pushing them together!

It's like they know they're meant to be.



Spoiler



The fact that they're forcing her to spend so much time with him, I mean...


Either way, I hope he seduces his wife back again :P


Update soooonn
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#102 Shaheen

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Posted 03 June 2011 - 08:51 AM

One frigging word.....LOVE....Another one is....IT.....

I'm not sure why, but I'm falling for Ethan, but what can I say? I fall for dreamy guys....like...like...nevermind about that, Post please. I need more ETHAN TIME! And like Aurelie and I are now BESTIES! I mean, she's a girl after my own heart!



lol

Haha....you think he's dreamy? I'm glad.

Thanksss :D

Best. Update. EVER!


Ethan... Oh Ethan :heartbeat:


He's adorable!



Hahahaha, it's awesome how everyone's always pushing them together!

It's like they know they're meant to be.



Spoiler



The fact that they're forcing her to spend so much time with him, I mean...


Either way, I hope he seduces his wife back again :P


Update soooonn



THANKS!!

Yes!! They are. Well, they want Aurél to at least try.

Haha....yes! It has everything to do with Ethan......that is his charm! :D They like him.

He will ;)

Promise!!
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#103 rockgal

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Posted 03 June 2011 - 07:44 PM

Its frustrating because I can see Aurel's perspective
But I just want her to stop being reasonable and let
Ethan seduce her!

Loved the update though, update soon!
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Posted 03 June 2011 - 08:45 PM

Its frustrating because I can see Aurel's perspective
But I just want her to stop being reasonable and let
Ethan seduce her!

Loved the update though, update soon!



defenatly agree

does defenatly have a double f?

mel :)
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#105 Shaheen

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Posted 04 June 2011 - 07:46 AM

Its frustrating because I can see Aurel's perspective
But I just want her to stop being reasonable and let
Ethan seduce her!

Loved the update though, update soon!



That's the thing!! :D

*Giggles* I'm so happy that you do ;) thanks!

defenatly agree

does defenatly have a double f?

mel :)



Definitely...is written with only one F. lol. It happens to me all the time too. Like there are two M, two T and two E in committee. I used to forget that
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#106 megandmiasno1fan

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Posted 05 June 2011 - 09:16 AM

Ahhh my gaaaaad!

SHAHEENIE! (by the way, I see people are using that nickname for you... I MADE IT UP PEOPLES!Posted Image)

This story is so awesome! Boy am I glad that I came back to mcmb!

I started to read this lastnight actually, but then I hadda go to bed, so here I am commenting now :)

God Shaheen, I absolutely love this, seriously!

Your idea are always so awesome and your writing style is just brilliant, you never fail to crack me up!Posted Image

I'm totally in love with Ethan Posted Image

There's a dude I wouldn't mind getting drunkenly married too!

Please update soon? :)

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#107 kylie

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Posted 05 June 2011 - 05:41 PM

Clearly Ethan is not too concerned about seducing his wife all over again.
Should be interesting to read. :P

Update Soon!
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#108 Shaheen

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Posted 06 June 2011 - 10:40 AM

Ahhh my gaaaaad!

SHAHEENIE! (by the way, I see people are using that nickname for you... I MADE IT UP PEOPLES!Posted Image)

This story is so awesome! Boy am I glad that I came back to mcmb!

I started to read this lastnight actually, but then I hadda go to bed, so here I am commenting now :)

God Shaheen, I absolutely love this, seriously!

Your idea are always so awesome and your writing style is just brilliant, you never fail to crack me up!Posted Image

I'm totally in love with Ethan Posted Image

There's a dude I wouldn't mind getting drunkenly married too!

Please update soon? :)

-Dervs

xx



Hey Derviee!!! :D

That's right people!! She's the creative inventor of my nickname ;)

Now....I don't remember....was it me who baptize you as Dervie??

AwwwwPosted Image Thanks!! I'm so very happy that you love this!

Ah....now that's news!! Who is the dude Dervie???? ;) ;)

Sure. Wednesday maybe.

Clearly Ethan is not too concerned about seducing his wife all over again.
Should be interesting to read. :P

Update Soon!




I'm happy that you find it interesting.
Will do soon :)


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Hiya awesome readers. My exam ends on Wednesday so, I'll try to update after I get back!! Sorry for the delays.
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#109 megandmiasno1fan

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Posted 06 June 2011 - 11:43 AM

Hey Derviee!!! :D

That's right people!! She's the creative inventor of my nickname ;)

Now....I don't remember....was it me who baptize you as Dervie??

AwwwwPosted Image Thanks!! I'm so very happy that you love this!

Ah....now that's news!! Who is the dude Dervie???? ;) ;)

Sure. Wednesday maybe.

Yo shaheenie!:3
Thank you for letting everyone know! ;)
Yeah i think you were!
Course I love it, how could i not!? :heartbeat:
Oh why it's Ethan of course... as if you didn't know! ^_^
tehe B)
-Dervs
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#110 Shaheen

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Posted 06 June 2011 - 11:57 AM

Yo shaheenie!:3
Thank you for letting everyone know! ;)
Yeah i think you were!
Course I love it, how could i not!? :heartbeat:
Oh why it's Ethan of course... as if you didn't know! ^_^
tehe B)
-Dervs
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Really, I thought he's some hot yummy Irish dude ;) ....rather than fictional Ethan.
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Posted 06 June 2011 - 09:28 PM

Awww...somehow I sympathize with both of them. Ethan really likes her and so I understand why he wants her to be with him but she wasn't in her right mind when she married him! It wasn't a marriage at all!

but Ethan will just have to make her fall in love with him!! Which I'm waiting for with a LOT of anticipation....

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Posted 07 June 2011 - 01:59 AM

Call me whatever you want

impatient, bad speller, often concupiscent towards fictional characters

that was just to get you started but you know



BUT HOW LONG TILL I CAN READ MORE OF THIS AMAZING HEAVEN ON A WEB PAGE!!!


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Posted 07 June 2011 - 07:03 PM

I forgot I never commented because I read the update on my cell.

Fab update! I love this story! UPdate soon

~Kari~
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Posted 08 June 2011 - 08:07 AM

Awww...somehow I sympathize with both of them. Ethan really likes her and so I understand why he wants her to be with him but she wasn't in her right mind when she married him! It wasn't a marriage at all!

but Ethan will just have to make her fall in love with him!! Which I'm waiting for with a LOT of anticipation....

Rivea :icon_flower:




Both of them are right somehow.

Uh-huh. That's right! ;)

Call me whatever you want

impatient, bad speller, often concupiscent towards fictional characters

that was just to get you started but you know



BUT HOW LONG TILL I CAN READ MORE OF THIS AMAZING HEAVEN ON A WEB PAGE!!!


mel :)



LOL. No worries. I'm updating!! Exams are over, so yeah...!

*Kisses* Thanks!

I forgot I never commented because I read the update on my cell.

Fab update! I love this story! UPdate soon

~Kari~



Me too I never comment when I read from my cell. I have to wait to get back home and use the PC. I think there's s bug in my phone cause I used to write long comments and when I touch add reply...nothing nada! The comment didn't passed.

Thanks!!

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#115 Shaheen

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Posted 08 June 2011 - 08:07 AM

Awww...somehow I sympathize with both of them. Ethan really likes her and so I understand why he wants her to be with him but she wasn't in her right mind when she married him! It wasn't a marriage at all!

but Ethan will just have to make her fall in love with him!! Which I'm waiting for with a LOT of anticipation....

Rivea :icon_flower:




Both of them are right somehow.

Uh-huh. That's right! ;)

Call me whatever you want

impatient, bad speller, often concupiscent towards fictional characters

that was just to get you started but you know



BUT HOW LONG TILL I CAN READ MORE OF THIS AMAZING HEAVEN ON A WEB PAGE!!!


mel :)



LOL. No worries. I'm updating!! Exams are over, so yeah...!

*Kisses* Thanks!

I forgot I never commented because I read the update on my cell.

Fab update! I love this story! UPdate soon

~Kari~



Me too I never comment when I read from my cell. I have to wait to get back home and use the PC. I think there's s bug in my phone cause I used to write long comments and when I touch add reply...nothing nada! The comment didn't passed.

Thanks!!

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Posted 08 June 2011 - 08:22 AM

.:.Chapter Nine.:.



Oh my God! I can’t believe what just happened. This is seriously my bad luck following me till here, in the midst of the ocean. Of all the things that could have happened! Okay, Aurélie, just breathe…deep breathe….

No, no, I can’t afford to take deep breathe right now. I have to think of some excuses or my parents are seriously going to give me an earache when they will arrive on the cruise.

The thing is…My parents called Evelyn last night when I was on a date having dinner with Ethan. They wanted to know if everything was alright with the wedding and all then when…(I’m seriously not going to forgive Evelyn for this one!) Evelyn ‘slipped’ to them that I’m married. She said it was an accident, but seriously, this huge an accident is UNFORGIVABLE! And then she started babbling everything to them, Chicago, my wedding, my meeting up with Ethan again. I mean she told them ALL of it. Actually, Evelyn is like super scared of my Mom (She is scary!) And now my Mom forced Adam to send a jet to California (Did I mention that Adam is super mega rich? Well, he is!) so that she can get on the cruise’s next pick up point to meet me and ETHAN!!

As if my trouble isn’t enough,Adam’s best man will be coming for the wedding too! The guy who dropped ME at Adam’s engagement like hot potato because he thinks I’m too stubborn, childish and irritating. Yeah, meaning my ex-boyfriend will come aboard! And he’s a guy from those high class societies with a freaky accent whom my Mom likes! Seriously, my Mom just adored Jeremy- aka the ex-boyfriend.

So, yeah! I’m in deep, deep trouble. I can just bet that this trip will be a total nightmare. I have to get my mind off these things. I mean, my Parents and Jeremy are going to come TOMORROW morning. I’m not going to ruin THIS new day on the cruise for that. All I have to do is to continue planning Evelyn’s wedding and see that everything is going to perfection.



I stop in the wedding hall and start barking orders to dissolve my frustration. Seriously, these people here have absolutely no talent in decoration.

“NO! This is not right! This flower arrangement just doesn’t go with this deco! Seriously guys! Try to work your mind. I want lilies! White lilies!”

“What’s’up wifey?” Not in a good mood?” I hear Ethan’s voice behind me.

I turn around, and look at him dead in the eyes, “I’ve got TONS of things to do, so if you stay in my foot,you’ll have your face disfigured!” I really thought that my tone would have scared him. But instead, he just whistles and comes to kiss me good morning on the cheek. Now, HOW can I be angry when he’s behaving so sweetly?!!

I give a little cough and ask, “What do you want Ethan?”

“You?” The way he said it just makes my heart to beat a little too fast, and I turn my head to hide my flushed cheeks.

“Well, that’s not on the menu. My apology!” I retort in a fake sarcasm. He smiles at me, showing me his dimple, which doesn’t help my already racing heart a bit. I give a little cough to clear my throat and say, “Well, since you’ve already decided to disturb me here, you better help me out and try to be useful.”

“Sure.” He smiles.

He took orders from me for the last hour without question, and he proved himself to be useful. It’s not as if I’m getting soft towards him or anything. He’s still my mortal enemy. Okay, probably not mortal, but an enemy nonetheless since he decided to seduce me back again. Should that put him in my enemy list? I’m confused here…

“Adam asked me to be his best man for the wedding.” He converses casually while arranging rose’s petals in abowl.

“WHAT?” I yell.

“You heard me, Aurél!”

Okay, I did! But I’m…shocked!How COULD Adam do this to ME? ME!!

“Well, Adam already has his best man. Jeremy it is!” I inform him.

“Yeah, apparently, there will be two best men for the wedding. And I can’t wait to see that Jeremy.”

Why can’t he wait to see Jeremy??

“What d’you mean you can’t wait? He is your buddy too?” I ask with a raised eyebrow.

“What?” He puts a fake shocked expression on his face. “Of course not! Adam told me he was your ex. We’ll just show him that you’re happily married now! Right, baby?”

“Wrong!” I glare at him.

“And your parents too!” He continues as if I just didn’t deny him.

“My parents??”

“Yeah! Adam told me that they are going to come with Jeremy tomorrow morning. Isn’t that nice?” He shows me one of his perfect smiles. “Apparently, they didn’t know that their little girl has already passed the ring.”

I think I’m going to faint.

“And Adam told me to be cautious with your Mother.”

“You and Adam are getting friendly, I see!” I stare moodily. Of all the people who could have betrayed me, I’d never have put Adam on that list. He always takes my side. But apparently, he decided to sides with the enemy…Well! If he wants it like that!



Extract from Ethan’s Journal: (4)

Ethan’s Journal

I carried the ring wherever I’d go. She told me she studied at UCLA, and I went there to look out for her. But apparently, she had already graduate and moved away from Chicago. My next move was to try to find her through a private detective. But my friend thought that if she left me, it was because she didn’t want to have anything to do with me and that I should forget her.

It hurt. But, he was right.

And I tried to forget her. And I think I succeeded too. Though, sometimes it was difficult to think about her. But I tried.

And now, she’s here in my life again, and playing with my heart.

But this time, I won’t let go. It’s going to be tough, I know that. But I won’t let her go. Simply put, I can’t let her go. The irony of it is that; I have to seduce my wife back again. And I know exactly how to do that. She doesn’t know it, but in the few hours I’ve been with her three years ago, I’ve learned all I needed to know about her. And the most important of it all is that, Aurélie Nora McCarthy doesn’t know what she wants in life. And me, I’m going to use this against her and let her know that what she wants is a life with me!

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#117 Allthingsstellar

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Posted 08 June 2011 - 08:35 AM

My thoughts as I read the update -

I don't like Jeremy already. Bah! But is Ethan going to get jealous? *excited look*

Yes! Totally! Definitely! Show this stupid Jeremy how happily married you are!!

I love Adam. :heartbeat:

Oh my God...Ethan's diary always makes me *sniff*. He's soooooo cute! Aurelie, just fall in love with the poor guy already!


Update super soooon!

Riv (because she's too lazy to write Rivea and just realized she wrote a lot more than Rivea) :icon_flower:

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#118 xx.Phoebe.xx

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Posted 08 June 2011 - 05:15 PM

Jeremy can suck it. Though I hope he causes some jealousy sparks from Ethan.

Jealousy is so hot. Sometimes :P

UPDATE SOOOOON.

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#119 brunette7856

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Posted 09 June 2011 - 01:43 AM

This is so freaking sick! :)

'Nuff said.

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#120 sancia

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Posted 09 June 2011 - 03:02 AM

All I have to say is: Ethan's diary makes this story beyond awesome!

*Sammie*
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Posted 09 June 2011 - 02:21 PM

Woohoo for exams being over! Yay!
Mine, however, have not started yet. Boo.

I so love Ethan. Can't wait to see what her parents think of him.
Update soon! (:
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#122 DayDreamer95

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Posted 09 June 2011 - 08:10 PM

Shaheen! I am IN LOVE WITH THIS! Post more! Ethan...<3 All I gotta say!
Love,
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#123 papercut

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Posted 10 June 2011 - 02:43 AM

THIS WAS AWESOME!!!!!

i love it as always

how were your exams?


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#124 Shaheen

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Posted 10 June 2011 - 08:57 AM

My thoughts as I read the update -

I don't like Jeremy already. Bah! But is Ethan going to get jealous? *excited look*

Yes! Totally! Definitely! Show this stupid Jeremy how happily married you are!!

I love Adam. :heartbeat:

Oh my God...Ethan's diary always makes me *sniff*. He's soooooo cute! Aurelie, just fall in love with the poor guy already!


Update super soooon!

Riv (because she's too lazy to write Rivea and just realized she wrote a lot more than Rivea) :icon_flower:



Haha....we'll see about that! ;)

LOL.....love him too

Actually, since Ethan now has narrated his part in the story, the diaries part will be rare. Guess maybe another one or two. It was just to fill in the gap.

ROLF. It always happens to me. Feel lazy to go back and press backspace and then write a long message to explain the mistake. :D

Will do :P

Jeremy can suck it. Though I hope he causes some jealousy sparks from Ethan.

Jealousy is so hot. Sometimes :P

UPDATE SOOOOON.

Bee


LOL.......you shall read to learn more ;)

I knowww!!!!!!!!!

But we hate it when it happens to us right? ;)


This is so freaking sick! :)

'Nuff said.

Lauren



Thanksss!!!! :D

All I have to say is: Ethan's diary makes this story beyond awesome!

*Sammie*



lol. Thankss!! But diaries will be rare now. Ethan already filled the gaps in the story in his diary.

Woohoo for exams being over! Yay!
Mine, however, have not started yet. Boo.

I so love Ethan. Can't wait to see what her parents think of him.
Update soon! (:



Hey Kylie!!

Yesss!!!!! Thank God!!

Well.....i wish you LOADS of luck. You'll need it. I know I needed it.

You'll know about it soon!

OK! :D

Shaheen! I am IN LOVE WITH THIS! Post more! Ethan...<3 All I gotta say!
Love,
Alex~



Hey, thanks Alex! Appreciate it!! :D

THIS WAS AWESOME!!!!!

i love it as always

how were your exams?


mel :)



THANKS! I'm SO glad that you love it!

Urrr......it was OK. Not that OK, but OK. LOL

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#125 bonjovi333

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Posted 10 June 2011 - 11:48 AM

I NEED AN UPDATE right NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS IS SOOOOOOO AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!! preferably now, BUT SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D

luv,
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#126 rockgal

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Posted 10 June 2011 - 07:06 PM

I think Jeremy is going to try and steal Aurel away from Ethan -.- but I hope not or I'll have to chase him down to stop him

It looks like things are going to get a whole lot more interesting now that Jeremy AND her parents are coming. Wonder what her parents will think of Ethan- even if they don't like him at first I'm sure he'll manage to make them straight away because he's simply that charming ;)

If only somebody else could see that "/

Anyway update soon! X
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#127 Shaheen

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Posted 11 June 2011 - 07:19 AM

I NEED AN UPDATE right NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS IS SOOOOOOO AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!! preferably now, BUT SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D

luv,
kayla :heartbeat:



LOLLLZZ

Thank you SO much!!

Update probably tomorrow!

I think Jeremy is going to try and steal Aurel away from Ethan -.- but I hope not or I'll have to chase him down to stop him

It looks like things are going to get a whole lot more interesting now that Jeremy AND her parents are coming. Wonder what her parents will think of Ethan- even if they don't like him at first I'm sure he'll manage to make them straight away because he's simply that charming ;)

If only somebody else could see that "/

Anyway update soon! X



Hahah....everyone seems to have their own theory about Jeremy.

LOL....we'll see!

Aurél, for example? ;)

Tomorrow. Probably.

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#128 abiii.aliceee

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Posted 11 June 2011 - 02:46 PM

new reader!
i think this is amazing:D!
need to update!!!<3
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Posted 11 June 2011 - 04:38 PM

Aww, Ethan's such a sweetheart :D


I just love it when he calls her Wifey :D

And he can't wait to meet Jeremy, can he?


Aurelie can't deny the fact that she needs him by her side!


I can't wait for him to meet her parents too!



You have to update Shaheen!


Soo sorry about the late comment by the way :(

Haven't been on for awhile..



To thank me for your story being the first one I read, will you update? ^_^

-Alexandra
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#130 papercut

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Posted 12 June 2011 - 01:17 AM

YAY!!

update i coming

and it's a public holiday so i don't have to go to school


PURE AWESOMENESS

(i've been watching too much how i met your mother(best show ever))

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#131 Shaheen

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Posted 12 June 2011 - 03:55 AM

new reader!
i think this is amazing:D!
need to update!!!<3

Hiya new reader. Welcome aboard!Posted Image


Awwww....thank you so much!!!


Right away ;)

Aww, Ethan's such a sweetheart :D


I just love it when he calls her Wifey :D

And he can't wait to meet Jeremy, can he?


Aurelie can't deny the fact that she needs him by her side!


I can't wait for him to meet her parents too!



You have to update Shaheen!


Soo sorry about the late comment by the way :(

Haven't been on for awhile..



To thank me for your story being the first one I read, will you update? ^_^

-Alexandra



He is, isn't he? I tried my best to make him sweet while writing.


Believe me, she will be relieve to have him by her side.


It's really OK.


Update coming up ;) happy? :D

YAY!!

update i coming

and it's a public holiday so i don't have to go to school


PURE AWESOMENESS

(i've been watching too much how i met your mother(best show ever))

mel :)



LOLZ!!


I LOVE public holidays. For you it means, no school, for me no work!


Ahhhh!!! Love this show too!!!!!! Totally hilarious!!


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#132 Shaheen

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Posted 12 June 2011 - 04:07 AM

.:.ChapterTen.:.



The time I was dreading most has arrived. And no, it wasn’t that an army of vampire bats is attacking me or that I’m stuck in a cave full of mutant rats! No! It’s much, much worse than that!

My Mother, Eleanor Elizabeth McCarthy, is walking towards me, her high heels clicking on the wooden floor announcing her entrance and her pointed chin high in the air indicating that she is not happy at all. With me! Next to her was Jeremy, the ex-boyfriend, with her polished shoes and ultra expensive sunglasses. And finally, my Dad, looking lost between the two high class society people, and his geometric tie which I gave him for his last birthday.

Now, admit it! Which is more horrifying? The sight in front of me? Or being devoured by a bunch of mutant rats? Exactly! The sight in front of me!

“Nora.” My Mother greets, her lips tight, making a thin line and her eyes small like pebbles.

“Mother.” I greet in return, forcing my voice out of my throat.

“I received very displeasing news from your friend Evelyn.” She says, very direct to the point. As you can notice, my Mother doesn’t like to waste precious time.

“My apologies that you had to receive this news like this, Mother.” I try not to croak, and try to hide my sarcasm.

“You ought to be, Nora! I hope he doesn’t practice skateboarding for a living like that boyfriend you had before Jeremy. Or maybe he’s a fisherman this time!” Mother says in her high pitched voice which makes me want to put cotton in my ears. Why can’t I have a normal mother?

“Not a fisherman, but pharmaceutical representative, ma’am!” I hear Ethan voice behind me, which for a reason I find very reassuring seeing that my brother who promised to be by my side when Mom will arrive, is untraceable! And…I had no idea that Ethan is a pharmaceutical representative! My own husband! But well, it’s not my fault! It’s not as if he told me, right! Or maybe he did. Three years ago! And, under the influence of alcohol, I forgot! Yeah, that has to be it!

“Ethan!” I smile. Yeah, in moment like that, you can actually smile at your enemy. Especially since the enemy is behaving like a life savior and that he looking dead sexy in the morning.

“Hi, Baby!” He comes and kisses me on my cheek like he usually does. Not that I’m thinking that he should kiss me elsewhere or anything. Absolutely not! He’s SO not my type. But it’s actually good to be kissed by him. Though it’s on the cheek!

Ethan then turns around and shakes hand with my Mother, “Mrs. McCarthy.” He nods in acknowledgement, his emerald eyes looking a bit hard. But then, under my Mother’s glare, everyone looks like that.

“Mr. Spencer it is then?” My Mom asks.

“Yes, ma’am.” Ethan replies politely. “Pleased to meet you.” He says, though I’m quite sure that he isn’t.

“Hi Dad!” I greet and kiss him on the cheek after Ethan shook hand with him.

“Hello, Jeremy!” I say, less cheerful. And notice that Ethan didn’t trouble to shake hands with him. Maybe he guessed that he’s the ex.

Afterwards, my Mother went to her cabin because this discussion with her daughter got her tired. But then, she always was a drama queen. And by total coincidence, just as Mom made her exit, James came.

“WHERE were YOU?” I scream.

“What do you mean? I came running so as I can be with you to greet Mother!”

“James? Mother came and is already in her cabin! Thank you very much for being with me!”

“What? Wasn’t she supposed to come at nine?” James asks, pretending to be shocked. And believe me, he’s a quite good actor seeing that he’s a first class reporter in California. But I had twenty five years experience living with him. Yeah, my brother and I still share an apartment.

“No, dork! It was at eight thirty!”

“Oh. Sorry I didn’t know.” He shrugs.

“Liar!”

“Alright, alright! But I DID ask Ethan to come and help you out!”

“Very, very nice of you!” I retort sarcastically. Though, Ethan was really very helpful there! And thank God he isn’t a fisherman! Not that being a fisherman is a bad job or anything. Because me I respect all jobs which is done fairly. I mean, how would we eat fish if there are no fishermen, because people like my mother think it as a worthless job?!!

“Okay, I’m sorry alright!” James apologies, looking a bit sincere.

“Whatever. You owe me one.” I pout.

“Sure sister!” He smiles, and I smile back at him. For some reason, I find it difficult to stay angry with my twin brother, James.


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#133 brunette7856

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Posted 12 June 2011 - 04:58 AM

Okay. I've made my mind up. Since Ethan is obviously taken, :(, I think I'll stick with James! He's so funny, so ladies BACK OFF! haha. :) Ethan rocks don't get me wrong. I've said it once, I'll say it again: HE IS ETHAN! But James will be a sufficient enough of a substitute. Plus he isn't married which is a plus :)

Lauren, take a breathe...

Breath taken :)

This is a funny chapter, though I do know that I don't like the mom. High Class Society people. pfft. Aurélie don't listen to your mom!!!! Ethan is sweet. And don't go back to Jeremy. Clearly he is no Ethan :)

So I like Ethan, but James will suffice :) Breathe!

Breath taken once again...

Seriously loving this story,

Lauren :)

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#134 Allthingsstellar

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Posted 12 June 2011 - 05:46 AM

Why is her mom calling her Nora? :o

Yay, see Aurelie....Ethan is sooo helpful and so cute and he kissed you on the cheek!!!


Update soon :)


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#135 kylie

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Posted 12 June 2011 - 09:22 AM

I love that he kisses her on the cheek all the time. So cute.

I sense some drama happening with ex in the future.
Haha, update soon!
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