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Posted 07 December 2010 - 04:05 AM

sorry about the short reply

am tired and sore, just won at soccer but ultimetly failed!!!!


when are you updating next?


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Posted 07 December 2010 - 04:07 AM

Taha, i was scrolling down your page before i posted that last comment and thought

"hey she should be close to her 2nd page"


and by the way


HAPPY 2ND PAGE


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Posted 08 December 2010 - 11:47 AM

sorry about the short reply

am tired and sore, just won at soccer but ultimetly failed!!!!


when are you updating next?


mel :)

Taha, i was scrolling down your page before i posted that last comment and thought

"hey she should be close to her 2nd page"


and by the way


HAPPY 2ND PAGE

You play soccer?? Wow. Thats cool.
Thanks
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Happy 2nd page to me too!!!



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Posted 08 December 2010 - 12:26 PM

ARGHHHHHH YOU POSTED A NEW STORY AND I DIDNT EVEN REALISE!!!!!!!!!

...anyway I'm going to read the rest now- i just read the first bit (invisible earphones!) :P xxx
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Posted 08 December 2010 - 12:48 PM

:o!!!!!!! There aren't any more updates!!
You have to update soon... pleasee!!

I love Alex and Andrew, Valerie and the rest especially Tyler- he sounds dead hot
and I love his attitude. You made me love the word 'blase' lol.

the military academy sounds horrible but at least there's decent people there to
keep her company. Can't wait to see how their plan works out.

I hope Alex gets her PSP back!
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Posted 09 December 2010 - 02:49 AM

ARGHHHHHH YOU POSTED A NEW STORY AND I DIDNT EVEN REALISE!!!!!!!!!

...anyway I'm going to read the rest now- i just read the first bit (invisible earphones!) :P xxx



:o!!!!!!! There aren't any more updates!!
You have to update soon... pleasee!!

I love Alex and Andrew, Valerie and the rest especially Tyler- he sounds dead hot
and I love his attitude. You made me love the word 'blase' lol.

the military academy sounds horrible but at least there's decent people there to
keep her company. Can't wait to see how their plan works out.

I hope Alex gets her PSP back!


LOl, Mariaaa!!! You're back!!! You should totally post another update on your story!
Hehe, you made me smile there... :) :)
Yeah, she seems lucky. Good friends. Hot guys.
Posting....
Thankss!!! :spinstar:

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Posted 09 December 2010 - 02:54 AM

Chapter Five

Just breathe deeply, Alex. You made three teachers life a living hell, no need to panic for a little fainting acting. Everything is going to be just alright. I mean, I’m a pro, right?!

9:55 a.m.

Where is Tyler??? Okay, there’s five minutes more, but still! And also, Andrew and Peter won’t stop looking at me. As if I’m not enough nervous for this little stunt! I don’t even know why I am. Normally these things are normal for me...maybe it’s the new school. And maybe it’s TYLER!!!

While pretending to listen in my Physics class, I see Tyler near the doorway, wearing a gray slack pants, a black t-shirt and a wool cap. Well, it’s friggin’ cold here, did I mention that? I think I must have. With a nod, he signals me to start acting.

I pinch my nose lightly to get myself in control. It’s a thing that I do, and guess what? It works. I feel much better.

I stand up, eyes mid close (it’s part of my fainting acting, you see!!...) and raise my hand, “Officer,” I call with a strange voice. “I’m not feeling well.” I pretend to struggle to talk.

“What’s wrong Miss Riley?”

“I don’t...know...” I grip the table next to me, letting my head loll back.

“Alex! Are you okay?” Andrew comes behind me, his voice ringing with anxiety. It’s fake, I know. Gently, he puts his hand around me, pretending to stop my fall. As if I’ll let myself get hit on the head! Hah!

Just in time, Tyler comes in the class and asks, “Problems Officer?”

“Tyler! This girl doesn’t feel well...”

“Maybe I should take her to the infirmary? You’ll be free to continue your class then.”

“That’ll be real nice of you Tyler.” The Officer gently thanks him before Tyler comes to help me.

“Lean on me.” He offers when he places his hand around me shoulders.

“Like hell!” I said through my teeth, and I hear him trying to control his laughter. He thinks the situation is comical! Well, I think not!

He kept his hand on my shoulders till we arrived at the infirmary where there was an old man who should have retired a few years ago.

“Tyler! That’s nice to see you again my boy!” The old man seems genuinely happy from seeing Tyler. “And more nice to know you haven’t come here with blood on your forehead this time.” The old man laughs at his own joke.

“Yeah, Doc. Nice to meet you again. It’s been long.”

“You brought in a patient for me?”

“Urrr, yeah. She’s new here. Alexie Riley.”

“Okay, Alexie, come and sit here, my girl, and explain your case.” The Doc guides me to a bed that kind of smells medicine. Yuck.

Half hour later, Tyler convinced Doc that it’ll be alright to leave me in the infirmary alone and that he’ll keep an eye on me. And I tell you, the meds Doc gave me was awful. But anything, and anytime for my PSP.

We get through the infirmary’s back door and take the second door to the left. “And how do you intend to decipher the code?” I ask with a raised eyebrow.

“You forget that you have a hacker in front you, Cookie!

“You think mighty high of yourself, don’t you?” I scowl. “And what’s with the Cookie??”

“Oh that! Andrew told me you have a thing for cookies!”

“I don’t!” I DO. I DO. I DO.

“Oh.” He makes a thinking face. “But I’m still going to call you Cookie.”

“You’re sick.” I roll my eyes at him. I’m really beginning to think that he came from planet Pluto. Oh wait! It disappeared! That’s why he’s on earth! His habitat doesn’t exist anymore.

I think it’s me who’s sick now.

Tyler takes out a small device out of his pocket, and connects it with the security system. “It’s a device designed to crack security codes.” He explains. “I’ve construct it some years ago.” He gloats. Why am I not surprise. Seriously, he doesn’t seem to be twenty two years old. I thought people of his age were somewhat a bit more mature.

“It’s the computer language.” He clarifies when a stack of numbers consisting of zeros and ones appears on screen of the pocket device.

“I’m not a dummy in programming, you know!” I retort.

“Oh yeah. I forgot.”

Within a minutes, the device crack the security system and the bolt was released from inside.

“Dang!” He gives a little yell of triumph before pushing the door.

Inside, the room was full of shelves with boxes on it. I give Tyler my ID Number that I got on my first day, and we started to look for the box.

“Got it!” He smiles at me. Yeah, and me who was hoping that it’ll me who’ll get it first. Apparently, it’s Tyler who is the ‘Hero of the Day.’ Not me. Obviously not me! He opens the box and as if in slow motion, I see him taking out my PSP and my mobile along with my charger in a small plastic bag.

“I’ll keep it with me.” He states.

“What?? But why?!”

“You don’t want to get caught with it. Let’s head back to class now.”

Oh well! I think I’ll just have to wait. Tonight will be fun!

&*&*&*&*&*&*&*&*&



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Posted 09 December 2010 - 03:18 AM

THAT WAS AWESOME!!!!!!!!

think she should be with andrew though!!!


haha loved it as always

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Posted 09 December 2010 - 02:41 PM

I will do soon hopefully

but that was amazing!!! Haha Alex is a good actor.
Actually Andrew and Tyler are aswell :P

Lol Tyler really isn't mature for a 22 year old
but then again girls mature faster than guys!

I :heartbeat: :heartbeat: :heartbeat: :heartbeat: :heartbeat: Tyler loads n loadss

update again real soon!!
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Posted 10 December 2010 - 12:37 PM

THAT WAS AWESOME!!!!!!!!

think she should be with andrew though!!!


haha loved it as always

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Thank you mel, aka - Jasper's dinner :P kidding
Lol, maybe.... :spinstar:


I will do soon hopefully

but that was amazing!!! Haha Alex is a good actor.
Actually Andrew and Tyler are aswell :P

Lol Tyler really isn't mature for a 22 year old
but then again girls mature faster than guys!

I :heartbeat: :heartbeat: :heartbeat: :heartbeat: :heartbeat: Tyler loads n loadss

update again real soon!!

Yeah, he isn't exactly high on maturity, you could say that.
ABSOLUTELY!!!
Goody. :heartbeat:
Thanks Maria.

Updating on Monday. I think.

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Posted 10 December 2010 - 06:44 PM

Awesome update, Shaheen! ;)

I love Tyler already! So I have dibs on him :P

UPDATE SOOOOON!

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Posted 12 December 2010 - 02:41 AM

COOKIE! EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! So cute!

Tyler = :heartbeat:

great update! update soons with the 'fun' tonight ;)

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Posted 12 December 2010 - 11:54 AM

Who knew Hackers could be so hot? I'm talking about Tyler, of course :D

Great update Shaheen!

UPDATE SOON!!! :)

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Posted 14 December 2010 - 10:26 AM

Awesome update, Shaheen! ;)

I love Tyler already! So I have dibs on him :P

UPDATE SOOOOON!

Bee

Lol, bee ( :mgbumblebee: ) Thank youu.
Update coming up.


COOKIE! EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! So cute!

Tyler = :heartbeat:

great update! update soons with the 'fun' tonight ;)

Rivea :icon_flower:


I really love cookies!!
Posting right up. Thanks for reading

Who knew Hackers could be so hot? I'm talking about Tyler, of course :D

Great update Shaheen!

UPDATE SOON!!! :)

Alex


I tell you, they are. :heartbeat: I just love them. The nice one you know...
Thanks Lexie!!

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Posted 14 December 2010 - 10:26 AM

Awesome update, Shaheen! ;)

I love Tyler already! So I have dibs on him :P

UPDATE SOOOOON!

Bee

Lol, bee ( :mgbumblebee: ) Thank youu.
Update coming up.


COOKIE! EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! So cute!

Tyler = :heartbeat:

great update! update soons with the 'fun' tonight ;)

Rivea :icon_flower:


I really love cookies!!
Posting right up. Thanks for reading

Who knew Hackers could be so hot? I'm talking about Tyler, of course :D

Great update Shaheen!

UPDATE SOON!!! :)

Alex


I tell you, they are. :heartbeat: I just love them. The nice one you know...
Thanks Lexie!!

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Posted 14 December 2010 - 10:29 AM

Chapter Six

“Is it time yet, Andrew?” I whisper in the dark.

“Oh my God! Will you shut up now??!” He whispers back. I could feel Andrew annoyed grunts underneath my bed. I guess he isn’t happy with me asking the same question since the last fifteen minutes. But what can I do?? I’m so impatient to get out of this hellhole! Even if it’s for only two hours.

“Andrew?” I call, “Now? Can we?”

“I swear if you ask me this one more time I’m going to let you rot on this bed, Alexis Riley.” That sure got me to shut up.

“Way to talk to a girl, Andrew!” I sniff.

After what seems to be a few lifetimes, Andrew finally decides to get into action. He is a very moody guy, I must admit. Not exactly like his brother.

We glide down the water pipe (this is the most exciting part of my day!) and walk to the backyard. Valerie was already there and a few minutes later, Peter joins us.

But...where is Tyler? More, WHERE IS MY PSP?

“Where is Tyler?” I ask.

“How the hell do I know?” That’s Andrew talking. No doubt.

“Well, he got my PSP with him!”


So, with nothing to do, I lay on my back, and watch the stars. Seriously what am I doing in this freezing cold weather looking at starts like some damn astronaut! No idea!

“Sorry, I’m late!” Tyler walks closer and throws the PSP on my lap. Hey! At least he could have shown some dignity to my PSP, right! “But I’ve got you these.” And the next thing I know is that he threw a packet of chocolate chip cookies on my lap.

Oh My Cookies!

“Thanks.” I mumble. Well, he DID come late. So, it’s OK of I’m not saying a more cheerful thank you. Well, I guess.

“How nice!” Valerie beams. “You’ve got such a nice brother, Andrew!”

Andrew makes a disgusted face.

“I know you for two years now, and you never gave any gift! Valerie complains.

“What do you need a gift for?” Oh. MY. God. He’s so stupid!

“You guys are like...together?” I ask. I know I asked this before, but I just need to confirm it again.

“No!” Both reply simultaneously.

“Okay.” I shrug. They know each other for two years, and they STILL aren’t together??! Things are SO obvious between them. I have to talk to Valerie. When we gets a moment alone! Which is quite rarely.

So, I played Resident Evil for the next hour (and ate my cookies of course! Gave some to Valerie too!) before we climbed the pipe again back to our room.


Next morning, while running on our usual track, I made an extra effort to run a bit quicker so as to get in line with Valerie. Right when Officer Blare turns on Peter to scream at him for running like a ‘girl’ I pull Valerie with me and run for the trees.

“Oh God! If Blare finds out, we’re SO dead!” Valerie gives me her oversized smile, a bit breathless from running. But she seems happy to have broken some rules.

“I just wanted to ask you something.”

“Something that couldn’t wait?” She asks.

“Well, it could have...but I wanted to ask it now.”

“Shoot it then.” She adjusts her wool cap and we sit near a tree.

“Ahh...I just wanted to know what is it between Andrew and you.”

She seems pretty shocked at first, them smiles, “Why, you want him?”

“God! No!” I say with a roll of my eyes. “Tell me.”

“There is nothing. We told you yesterday.” Wow. She’s a good liar.

“C’mon Valerie! Tell me! He seems to like you very much. Well, in his Andrew kind of way.”

She looks at me for a few seconds as if I’m crazy and then she explodes, “Oh my god! He does? He does, doesn’t he?? No, he doesn’t! He’s always snipping at me. I shouldn’t dream too much. No! I shouldn’t!” Then she leans on the tree, her eyes big as if she just had a revelation.

“Oh god, I like Andrew.”

As if I don’t know that already!

&*&*&*&*&*&*&*&*&



HAPPY HOLIDAY TO ME!! YAY!!!!!
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Posted 14 December 2010 - 05:30 PM

Aww I think Valerie and Andrew are totally in love
but they're too scared to admit it.

Haha Alex was dead funny at the start asking Andrew
every two seconds :P Well I'd be like that too if I
was waiting to get a psp back- and in a place like
that!!

Tyler's sweet for bringing it and the cookies-
I bet he was hoping for more of a thankyou! ;)

Well even if he wasn't I can dream can't I? :P

I love it!! Update soon!!!
Can't wait for more!! XXX

Ps ^^ that's a lot of exclamation marks! :P
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Posted 15 December 2010 - 06:51 AM

ooh, Valerie and Andrew? Now why didn't I see that before? :o anyway, AWWWWW :heartbeat: :heartbeat:

That leaves Alex free for Tyler. Who got COOKIES for her. EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEP! Is that not the most obvious declaration of love EVER, Shaheenie? *innocent smile*



“Way to talk to a girl, Andrew!” I sniff.




oooh, Alex, what's happening to your tough gal attitude which drives away Maths teachers? ;) First the screaming in the water, now this. *cough* Ahem. What're you doing? Alex? Don't hit me!!!

UPDATE SOON!

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PS. Holidays??? WOW> I thought it was your exams. anyway....HAPPY HOLIDAYS! HAVE LOADS OF FUN! :D
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Posted 17 December 2010 - 04:11 AM

Aww I think Valerie and Andrew are totally in love
but they're too scared to admit it.

Haha Alex was dead funny at the start asking Andrew
every two seconds :P Well I'd be like that too if I
was waiting to get a psp back- and in a place like
that!!

Tyler's sweet for bringing it and the cookies-
I bet he was hoping for more of a thankyou! ;)

Well even if he wasn't I can dream can't I? :P

I love it!! Update soon!!!
Can't wait for more!! XXX

Ps ^^ that's a lot of exclamation marks! :P


You think so huh???!!
Yeah, I'm a bit like that too. Impatient.
Loooolll.....maybe???
I have to say, you guys are in for a major surprise.


ooh, Valerie and Andrew? Now why didn't I see that before? :o anyway, AWWWWW :heartbeat: :heartbeat:

That leaves Alex free for Tyler. Who got COOKIES for her. EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEP! Is that not the most obvious declaration of love EVER, Shaheenie? *innocent smile*



oooh, Alex, what's happening to your tough gal attitude which drives away Maths teachers? ;) First the screaming in the water, now this. *cough* Ahem. What're you doing? Alex? Don't hit me!!!

UPDATE SOON!

Rivea :icon_flower:

PS. Holidays??? WOW> I thought it was your exams. anyway....HAPPY HOLIDAYS! HAVE LOADS OF FUN! :D


Because you were too busy with Tyler??? :P lol
I have to say, if guys start bringing me cookies instead of ask me for some help with some stupid accounting law, I might start to like them.
Innocent smile doesn't work for you Riv. We both some there's something else behind it...: :icon_geek:

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Posted 17 December 2010 - 02:51 PM

NEEDS MORE TYLER!!! But otherwise, funny and awesome update :D

ANDREW AND VALERIE TOGETHER... now :P

Loved the last few lines!

UPDATE SOON!!!

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Posted 20 December 2010 - 04:23 AM

It's been five days...and I've been waiting patiently :D

Update?

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Posted 20 December 2010 - 04:28 AM

^^I was just rereading this story and I saw the Happy Birthday banner for the first time! I swear! Either my computer is mad or I am. anyway, THANK YOU! (It's late I know) but thank you so much for posting that on your story! I'm really touched :heartbeat:
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Posted 20 December 2010 - 05:08 AM

Please can we have an update o two for Xmas, please?

Mums already bailed on all my gifts, was getting surfing lessons and hairspry tix, she bailed.

Now all I get is pinks greatest
hits so far from my sis

please update, do it for all of us withnlousy families who don't let you cook and play favs to your sibling!

For us who get yelled at everytime they want o watch their favourite show (topgear) because sibling doesn't like it, I put up with jer stupid little kiddy shows, she can put up with my awesome funny car show!

She could at least let me read my top gear magazine (I save 8 bucks a month by reading the libraies ones!) in peace!!!


Sorry, in rambleibg!

But I would really like an update


I love this story!

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Posted 22 December 2010 - 09:59 AM

NEEDS MORE TYLER!!! But otherwise, funny and awesome update :D

ANDREW AND VALERIE TOGETHER... now :P

Loved the last few lines!

UPDATE SOON!!!

Bee


Thank you Hon. I'm glad you like it.
Will do. :)


It's been five days...and I've been waiting patiently :D

Update?

Rivea :icon_flower:

Patiently, huh?? :mellow: :mellow:
PC problem :( :icon_mecry2:


^^I was just rereading this story and I saw the Happy Birthday banner for the first time! I swear! Either my computer is mad or I am. anyway, THANK YOU! (It's late I know) but thank you so much for posting that on your story! I'm really touched :heartbeat:


Lol, it's okay. It was on the previous page anyway.

Please can we have an update o two for Xmas, please?

Mums already bailed on all my gifts, was getting surfing lessons and hairspry tix, she bailed.

Now all I get is pinks greatest
hits so far from my sis

please update, do it for all of us withnlousy families who don't let you cook and play favs to your sibling!

For us who get yelled at everytime they want o watch their favourite show (topgear) because sibling doesn't like it, I put up with jer stupid little kiddy shows, she can put up with my awesome funny car show!

She could at least let me read my top gear magazine (I save 8 bucks a month by reading the libraies ones!) in peace!!!


Sorry, in rambleibg!

But I would really like an update


I love this story!

Mel :)


Ohhh, poor you. Ramble anytime. I tend to do so too. Lots. Have a great holiday :)
Will try to update soon. If I have enough time I'll try to update today itself.



SORRY FOR THE DELAY IN UPDATING....PC PROBLEM. GOTTA RUSH NOW. SORRY.
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Posted 25 December 2010 - 04:29 PM

All that for a PSP ??

Aww romance is blooming :)

mERY CHristMas !!


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Posted 29 December 2010 - 01:52 AM

All that for a PSP ??

Aww romance is blooming :)

mERY CHristMas !!


Lea


*roll eyes*
You don't know what people do for PSP. The wacko one, you know.
:) :)
You tooo. A bit late-ish, though.
HAPPY NEW YEAR!!

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Posted 29 December 2010 - 01:57 AM

Chapter Seven

They are offering croissant for breakfast! Where did the sun rise today?! I carry my tray and sit next to Valerie who seems unusually quite. I make it a must not to sit next to Peter because he makes awful noises while he eats. Disgusting if you ask me!

I put my tray in front of me and smile cheekily as I take a bite of my croissant. Sunday seems cool here. Except for the morning exercise where they made us run half an hour longer. Not that Valerie and I were running. And we didn’t even get caught!

“If you don’t want your hot chocolate I’ll be glad to take it from you.” Andrew suggested as Valerie kept on looking at it as if in trance.

Valerie’s head snap up, “Don’t push your luck Andrew. I made my math teacher half crazy, I wouldn’t think twice to make you a full one.”

“What’s with her??” Andrew asks before taking a huge bite on his croissant as if nothing happened. That’s the problem with guys. They are all stupid clueless food eating ogre.

“What DID you call me???”

Oh-oh. I guess I must have said that one out loud.


Sunday is the day when parents are allowed to visit. Not that mine is going to come to Canada to visit me for JUST one single day. Not that I mind too. I’m still on not-speaking-to-the-parental-unit mode. Also, not many parents come to visit as well since most of the kids here aren’t even Canadian. Peter is Russian, Valerie is American like me and Andrew is an English man. So, yeah, not many parents bother to visit their rebellious child here.

But, I never ever thought that Mark would come to visit me. It actually brought tears to my eyes just by seeing by big teddy bear brother standing right there in the doorway, with chocolate cookies in his hand. So, yeah, like in a big classic movie, I run and hug him tight.

Mark is the best brother you’d ever dream of getting. Yeah! I just said that and meant it too. Normally, teenagers of my age just ignore their brothers and pretend to hate them. But mine is seriously the best. Not that we never fight. Oh, but we fight a lot! But Mark is the kind of brother who really cares and is not afraid to show it. He’s like a big giant teddy bear who can speaks just like you would dream about when you were kid.

“Alexie baby!” He hugs me tight in a Mark-y kind of way and then kisses me on the head before letting me go.

“What’re you doing here Mark?” I ask, enlacing my arms with him as we walk. “Shouldn’t you be working?”

“Can’t I come and visit my little sister, now?”

“Sure you can! Especially if you have cookies!” I joke. “C’mon. Tell me!”

“Mom told me what happened. I had to make sure you’re okay.” That sure brings tears to my eyes. He looks at me carefully and asks, “You’re okay, right?” I’m sure that proves that when I said that I have the best brother, I wasn’t kidding, nor was I crazy.

I nod, “I feel better now, Mark. Thanks.”

“Damn! It’s cold here!”

“You have no idea.” Actually, I’m getting used to the cold now. A little. “You want one of my gloves?”

“Actually, I’ll be going in a few hours, but, I won’t refuse the gloves.” He smiles.

Inside my room and forty other students’ room as well since I don’t have a personal room, Andrew and crew were sitting on a bed, talking video game tactics.

“Hey guys, this is my brother here, Mark.” I say as I take a pair of glove out of my drawer and give it to him. “Mark these here are my friends, Peter, Valerie and Andrew.” I introduce. Mark politely shakes everyone’s hand with a smile.

“Nice to meet you guys.”

When Mark was five years old, he dreamt of having a little brother to play football with. But, fate wanted it otherwise, and I, Alexie, was born. So he thought, oh well! He’ll just take good care of his little baby girl like the man he was and he promised the little girl to play doll house with her on the day she was born. And again, fate wanted it otherwise. The girl, that is I, turned out to be more interested in balls, video games, and mud. So, instead of playing doll house, he started to teach her football, volley ball and baseball at an early age. He even brought her to watch baseball matches in his school and show her off to his friends...wait??? Why am I telling you this?? This is irrelevant! Forget it!

“You’ll have lunch with us before going, right?” I ask.

“Yeah, I will. Don’t worry.” He smiles.

“And dinner??”

“Don’t push your luck.”

Later during the day, I kiss my brother goodbye, crying like a baby. And I’m not even kidding on this one. All I wanted to do was grab his feet and let him drag me home. Though I wouldn’t have been able to see Tyler anymore, or my other friends which came to mean much more to me than my friends back in U.S! Who were, by the way, all snobs!

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Posted 31 December 2010 - 10:57 AM

sorry I can't write much
(my laptops still not fixed)
but I loved it!

I want a brother like Mark
and I can't believe she still wants to go home

I mean it does sound horrible but
what Tyler and Valerie and Andrew?

Update soon!
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Posted 01 January 2011 - 04:30 AM

awww, her brother's so cute and awesome ;) *sigh* makes me wish I had a brother...

although I felt bad about her parents...

Update soon

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P.S. HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!
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Posted 06 January 2011 - 06:13 AM

sorry I can't write much
(my laptops still not fixed)
but I loved it!

I want a brother like Mark
and I can't believe she still wants to go home

I mean it does sound horrible but
what Tyler and Valerie and Andrew?

Update soon!


Ohhh....and me my PC still not fixed :o :o
Yeah. Me too. I'll change mine with Mark anytime.
Well, Canada is cold. But then, you're right. I'd rather suffer the cold than deny my eyes the hot guys.
Will do :P


awww, her brother's so cute and awesome ;) *sigh* makes me wish I had a brother...

although I felt bad about her parents...

Update soon

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P.S. HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!


You don't have a brother???!! I've got two. Want one?? It's free of charge, with a FREE gift to accompany it? Excellent deal, isn't it? :P
THANK YOU. Hope you had fun. And this year I've decided to stick to my new year resolution for more than two weeks.

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Posted 07 January 2011 - 12:06 AM

And why do I feel so suspicious that you’re offering me such an excellent deal, huh? ;) *cough*Is there something about your brothers that I should know about before I accept?*cough*

Ooh, I stopped making new year resolutions when I figured out that I didn’t follow them at all.So what’s your new year resolution? :D

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Posted 07 January 2011 - 07:12 AM

And why do I feel so suspicious that you’re offering me such an excellent deal, huh? ;) *cough*Is there something about your brothers that I should know about before I accept?*cough*

Ooh, I stopped making new year resolutions when I figured out that I didn’t follow them at all.So what’s your new year resolution? :D

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*look on the left*
It's a good deal.
*nods*
Really. :unsure:
*look at my feet*
I wouldn't lie to my fav Riv, right?
Nothing you should know.

Well, my list is downstairs, and I'm too lazy to fetch it.
But I can list down some:
Be nicer to my brothers (I think I already broke this rule when I threw water on my kid bro's face near midnight), Watch more local news without making awful remarks, be more interested in Mauritian politics then France's (Jean Sarcozy *drool* :heartbeat: ), wear more sexy undies to feel more confident (I've yet to go shopping), read more educational books, stop hiding my dad's slippers when he's in the bathroom and blah blah blah.... :P

C'mon. Don't be a pessimist. You have to make new year resolutions!

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Posted 08 January 2011 - 01:18 AM

*look on the left*
It's a good deal.
*nods*
Really. :unsure:
*look at my feet*
I wouldn't lie to my fav Riv, right?
Nothing you should know.

Well, my list is downstairs, and I'm too lazy to fetch it.
But I can list down some:
Be nicer to my brothers (I think I already broke this rule when I threw water on my kid bro's face near midnight), Watch more local news without making awful remarks, be more interested in Mauritian politics then France's (Jean Sarcozy *drool* :heartbeat: ), wear more sexy undies to feel more confident (I've yet to go shopping), read more educational books, stop hiding my dad's slippers when he's in the bathroom and blah blah blah.... :P

C'mon. Don't be a pessimist. You have to make new year resolutions!



haha, how many Riv's do you know? ;) One? :D
Baby, flattery's going to get you nowhere...
Nothing I should know? This deal is sounding more and more shady to me by the day...
*cough*

LOOOL! Nice resolutions. Especially the politics one :D

Ooh. I'm one HUGE pessimist. But I have no idea what resolutions to make? Stop sleeping till 10? Stop spending the night reading novels? Actually start studying? Stop spending hours on the computer when I decide that I will spend only one hour? ;)

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Posted 11 January 2011 - 03:10 AM

Chapter Eight

After the humiliation of crying in front of my brother like a big baby, I went in hiding in the girl’s toilet for half an hour before visiting my usual rock where I like to sit in the park.

“I thought I would find you here.” Tyler walks toward me and manage to sit beside me on the rock.

“Get lost, or die.” I state. What? It’s pretty obvious he came here to mock me!

He looks at me and sigh, “Pretty great show it was back there with your brother, huh.”

“You know, you and your brother should get the world’s biggest pain in the ass award.”

“Oh, now! Sorry. I’m not sharing any award with Andrew. Especially, not about something this prestigious!” That sure makes me want to smile. But I won’t! Wouldn’t want to give him that satisfaction now, would I? Instead, I bit my cheek.

“A sharp tongue does not mean you have a keen mind.” I state.

“You’re a bit high on sarcasm, aren’t you?” He laughs.

“Well, sarcasm is just one more service I offer.” I nod. “You came down here to mock me, or for something more mature?”

“Mature? As in?” Tyler nudges me with his shoulder, and wink at me.

“Are you trying to seduce me??” I ask loudly.

“Now, don’t be so direct and loud. I was only kidding you know.” He sniffs. “Or maybe not. Wait. Was I kidding?”

I look at me for a few seconds, trying to decipher him before muttering, “I'm impressed, I've never met such a small mind inside such a big head before.”

“Now. That’s a plain insult.” He sulks. “I’m wounded.”

“Tyler, I’m gonna repeat myself. Why the hell are you here???” I scream.

“Oh yeah, I nearly forgot!” He says. “Valerie was looking for you. She said it was ‘deadly urgent’.”

“And it is NOW that you say that???” Really I’m trying my best not to scream, but that guy keeps testing my patience.

“Well, I did say I forgot, right?” He defends. “No need to yell.” With that, he vacates my rock, and walks away. Well, legally it’s not my rock...but you know...


“Val, you were looking for me?”

And here goes the high pitched scream. Which is so unlike Valerie. But then, loves can make us do pretty insane things. Somebody said that. Not me.

“Where were you??? I was looking for you everywhere? I’m so gonna kill you for that! Really if not for you, I’d never had known that I love Andrew. And it was better that way. Way better. Because now, everytime I see him, I make a complete ass of myself. I thought I would die from blushing so hard......”

That could have been convenient seeing that if she were dead, she wouldn’t have been wishing for my death now. God! I’m so awful.

“......and Andrew kept looking at me as if I’ve grown another head. He kept asking ‘Val, why are you blushing’ or ‘Val, I think I should call the firefighter just in case you start burning up from blushing...and....blah, blah, blah,”

I assure you, Val hasn’t gone crazy and started talking another language. It’s just that I’m not understanding the rubbish she’s talking about and in the end I’m starting to hear her say ‘blah blah blah’. Not very nice picture. Thank God, Andrew is not here. He would have been running, scared.

“Val, will you please shut the hell up??” I scream. Ok, that sure got her to shut her. Just thinking of her tirade makes me want to wipe off my imaginary sweat. But hey, the migraine is real! “Now, you’ll start from the very beginning and tell me what happened.”

“Right. Right. I tell you...” She started to talk very quickly.

“Deep breath...” I suggested.

“Right. Deep breath.” She takes a deep breath, and then calms herself. “The thing is,” She starts very slowly, “Whenever I’m in front of Andrew, I get word vomit. I badly, I mean, badly, want to tell him that I love him. And then I blush real red which is very, I repeat, very, embarrassing. And now, I’m doing my best to avoid him.”

“Val!” I exhale, “Let him know!”

“Are you kidding me??” Valerie screams, back to her hysterical mode. “He doesn’t love me. It’s pretty obvious he doesn’t love me. And I’m totally sure there’s another one.” She tells me. And then she whispers is a very crazy, fanatical way, “There is another woman in his life.”

“Oh, c’mon, Val! We would know if there is another one, right? He’s practically with one of us or with Peter twenty four over seven.”

“Oh! That’s right.” She laughs. “Goody,” She claps, “There’s no one!” I wonder where is the real Valerie is...because this one is not her at all. “But maybe...”Valerie asks, wiggling her finger, “you could just ask Peter. I bet he knows.”

“I refuse to star in your psychodrama.” I shook my head in fake disgust.

“Pretty please.”

“Oh damn! Alright. I’ll ask Tale!”

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Posted 12 January 2011 - 01:43 AM

ooh, so she's going to ask Tale, is she? ;)

Val was sooooooooo funny! I mean all that shrieking!!! And the crazy fanatical way she said, "There's another woman!" <--- LOOOL!

and Alex seems weirder and weirder day by day - her ROCK? :icon_lol: I know something - or rather someone - she could rather be possessive about...*hint hint*

UPDATE SOON!

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Posted 12 January 2011 - 04:19 AM

I CALL DIBS ON TYLER :P



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Posted 12 January 2011 - 04:35 AM

I CALL DIBS ON TYLER :P




sorry something got messed up i was going to type more than that ^

alex -seriously i love her with only if i had some
tyler -well he's MINE ahahaha , although i am wondering what is he doing in a highschool when he is 21 ?
Andrew- two words WAKE UP ,
Valerie - poor poor girl although i loved how she managed to drag alex in all that

Seriously she is going to ask peter ????
giddy with excitement

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Posted 13 January 2011 - 03:18 AM

ooh, so she's going to ask Tale, is she? ;)

Val was sooooooooo funny! I mean all that shrieking!!! And the crazy fanatical way she said, "There's another woman!" <--- LOOOL!

and Alex seems weirder and weirder day by day - her ROCK? :icon_lol: I know something - or rather someone - she could rather be possessive about...*hint hint*

UPDATE SOON!

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Yes. She is going to. :)
And quite scary too. I always find fanatic person scary. *shudder*
No need to hint. You mean Tyler. We'll see about that ;) ;)
Tomorrow will update.


sorry something got messed up i was going to type more than that ^

alex -seriously i love her with only if i had some
tyler -well he's MINE ahahaha , although i am wondering what is he doing in a highschool when he is 21 ?
Andrew- two words WAKE UP ,
Valerie - poor poor girl although i loved how she managed to drag alex in all that

Seriously she is going to ask peter ????
giddy with excitement

-Liberty/Anshi

LOL...Liberty!!!!
I really glad you seems to love my characters. Thanks.
And I have to say, you guys are in for a big surprise ;)
Yesss!!! She will!
Updating tomorrow. Hopefully.

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Posted 14 January 2011 - 02:57 AM

Chapter Nine

“Are you high?”

“Stop being dramatic!” I roll my eyes at Tale. “It’s either a yes, or a no!”

“Well, no! Andrew doesn’t have another girl! And what do you mean by another, anyway?? Because he is s’upposed to have one now?”

“Forget it, Tale!”

“I was just wondering you see!”

“Well, don't let your mind wander, it's far too small to be let out on its own.” With that I walk and climb up the water pipe to our room and try to sleep. Which is, not very easy seeing that about more than fifty percent student here SNORE, and I forgot where I put my earplug!!

So yeah, I don’t even know if I managed to sleep or not. Feeling cranky in the morning, I run, or rather drag myself, for my daily exercise, eat my breakfast with my eyes closed, and of course, sleep in my literature class...only to be awakened by an Officer with his flying chalk which ended hitting me on my head. Why do they even use chalk here??

“Answer the question, Miss Riley!” The Officer barks.

Question? What question?? Jeez, didn’t he see that I was sleeping? Andrew leans in behind me and whispers me the answer. God bless him.

Forcing a smile, I stand up and give the answer whispered by Andrew, “Juliette killed Romeo because he was having a hot torrid affair with one of her servants’s baby.” I blink a few times and ask, “Baby???” The whole class looks at me for a few seconds before laughing. Andrew even fell from his chair and is rolling on his belly, laughing. Dog.

Andrew, I’m so going to kill you, I promise myself. Really, he just took the advantage that I was half asleep.

“Miss Riley, you’ll go and meet Officer Blare right now for your punishment.” Blare?? God, no! Not Blare!!! My body will not be able to stand more exercise!

At lunch, everybody who was in literature class is still laughing. Andrew stands on his chair and mimicked our literature officer, “Miss Riley, what was the cause of Romeo’s tragic death?” And then he answer his own question with a high piercing voice, which was supposed to sound like mine, but was more like the sound of a vacuum cleaner mom has back home, “Juliette killed Romeo because he was having a hot torrid affair with one of her servants’s baby.”

Everyone in the café burst out laughing. Including Tyler who high five his brother. Totally my luck! And then I decide, my revenge will be in IT class. I sit just beside Andrew in IT seeing that Valerie and Peter elect for biology.

I run in to IT class early and start loading up funny pictures of Andrew in the projector which I got from Tyler (the pictures, not the projector!) after substantial begging and a seductive pose that he insisted on. There was even one picture where Andrew was in his Disney Princess underpants which he had to wear for a whole twenty four hours after losing a bet.

“Hello, Andrew.” I greet sweetly. Too sweetly.

“Hello.” He hesitates.

“Lights off!” Our IT officer screams and I smile, evilly. And here the show begins. Our IT Officer looks so transfixed by these ridiculously funny pictures of Andrew that he didn’t even thought of stopping the projection. When the picture of Andrew wearing Cinderella costume, along with her wig, laughter was uncontrollable in our class.

“Nice one, Alex!” Andrew shot me an evil look, and I smile back charmingly at him.

On our way back to our room, Andrew curls his arm around my shoulders and smiles, “So, we are quit, now?”

“Totally!” I beamed. “Really, that picture with your Disney under--”

“Stop.”

“Alright.” I giggle

“By the way, Peter told me that you ask if I have ‘another woman’.” Andrew asks, “What is that supposed to mean?”

“Nothing. Absolutely nothing.” I look at him and say, “But I’ll tell you something, talk to Valerie.”

“She seems pretty weird these days.”

“I know.” I nod, smiling.

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Posted 14 January 2011 - 03:13 AM



I run in to IT class early and start loading up funny pictures of Andrew in the projector which I got from Tyler (the pictures, not the projector!) after substantial begging and a seductive pose that he insisted on.


AHA.

AHAAA.

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Posted 14 January 2011 - 03:49 AM

AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

dude that was soo funny specially
“Well, don't let your mind wander, it's far too small to be let out on its own.”
AND

I run in to IT class early and start loading up funny pictures of Andrew in the projector which I got from Tyler (the pictures, not the projector!) after substantial begging and a seductive pose that he insisted on

my mind is submerged into the relams of gutter .


anywho i was laughing at the screen again . wiping my tears because i was laughing too much and probably convincing that i an off the kitler when my mom came in my room :/

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Posted 14 January 2011 - 11:17 PM

Ohhhhhh-kayyyy!!!!!!! So 'Hey', I hope you remember me because I vanished for like THREE GINORMIC months for reasons!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

So you start up a story and I didn't even know, yes, I'm literally asking you to kill me if you want. Okay, so that was a little bussiness-like intro, now I'm just gonna go forward and say it:

OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HOW ARE YOU???????? Your story's AWESOMASTIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AND I CAN'T WAIT TO READ IT!!!!! Yes, I've come online just now and till now I've just saw the banner and read the prologue, and it has left me mesmerized, CAN NOT WAIT TO GOBBLE WHOLE OF YOUR STORY UP!!!!!!!!!

I hope you can forgive me because I'm apologizing you with sweet blink-blink eyes!!

So, I'll catch up until then you continue doing your thing, which is writing--phenomenal writing that is.

Lots of LOOVE,

Zoe :icon_geek:

PS. What's this with MCMB about the 'reputation' on the profile?? :blink:

(Sorry my comment was so short, I've come back after three months and my mind is exploding with the things I've got to do! Ciao.)


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Posted 17 January 2011 - 04:31 AM

Oh my Gosh! That was such a funny update :D :lol: ^_^ B)

Sorry i haven't been commenting :( Life is busy filled with university applications...-_-

I like Andrew, he's cool.

BUT WE NEED MORE TYLER :)

UPDATE SOON!!!

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Posted 21 January 2011 - 04:54 AM

BUMP!
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Posted 25 January 2011 - 04:18 AM

HUGE SORRY GUYS!!
I know, I suck BADLY. But I can't actually do anything. Problems with finding monitor parts, that's why I still didn't get my PC back. And I'm so busy as well. I actually have to work during my LUNCH HOUR!!!!!!!! Took five mins to log in. Gotta rush back. DEADLINES!!!!
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