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#91 Peachy1214

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Posted 21 September 2007 - 12:54 PM

Never mind about the vote, I'm going to put my fan fiction on hold. Bleh sorry guys.

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#92 Peachy1214

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Posted 21 September 2007 - 12:55 PM

Third Page! :)

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Posted 21 September 2007 - 12:56 PM

No, wait! Put I meant to update My Guardian Amgel and put the rest on hold!
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Posted 21 September 2007 - 12:58 PM

Lol, I might get mobbed if I put Night Sky on hold :blink: But I should be able to update this today! :D

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Posted 21 September 2007 - 01:25 PM

Peachy!! Cerra wants you to update and me too!!!

so please hurry!!!

love

~emily~

p.s.

Please go to Peachy's story and vote her to update My Guardian Angel.
Please? I really want her to update that story.


LOL, That girl is so funny!!
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#96 Peachy1214

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Posted 21 September 2007 - 01:29 PM

^Lol I'll try my best, I'm writing the update right now :D

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Posted 21 September 2007 - 01:36 PM

Ahhhh,Em!
:icon_redface: Aw shucks I have been caught red handed!
Now can you see how desperate I am for you
to update Peaches? I go around demanding people to read this
story and to annoy you untill you update, But hey, . . .it is working!
heeheehee :hyper: :lol:
Okay, well I will just sit here and wait. :)
I am undercover today since My mom is home today. B)
She might see me doing something other than my homeschooling on
the computer. :badgrin:
Fortunately she is busy right now giving my little bro his class. :badgrin:
*Very Sneaky Me*
¤toodles¤
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#98 Peachy1214

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Posted 21 September 2007 - 01:42 PM

lol :D I'll post a teaser to keep you happy until I update :)

“What if I told you I was the angel guarding it?”
“But you said you came down from heaven so you couldn’t have been guarding it.”
“You’re smart aren’t you?”
“So you didn’t guard it?”
“I did.”

Lol, you're undercover XD

I'll update soon!

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Posted 21 September 2007 - 01:51 PM

lol :D I'll post a teaser to keep you happy until I update :)

Lol, you're undercover XD

I'll update soon!

~Peachy

Hmm. . .I like the sound of that,
What does the XD stand for?
I might use that as my UC(undercover) name ;)
*Undercover Me*
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#100 Peachy1214

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Posted 21 September 2007 - 01:53 PM

XD is just like a smiley, turn it around and you'll see it. Lol okay :)

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Posted 21 September 2007 - 02:02 PM

^_^
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Posted 21 September 2007 - 03:13 PM

:D I'm updating now. It's super short I know :P Bleh, I don't know why the updates can't get longer.


Chapter Six




I could not believe where we were.

“A-are you sure?”

“Yes, we are in the Garden of Eden.”

“B-But wasn’t that locked up like a long time ago? Because Adam and Eve ate the forbidden fruit.”

“I see you do have basic Christianity knowledge. A little anyways.”

“Yeah, but wasn’t it locked up so no one could come in. There’s an angel guarding it.”

“What if I told you I was the angel guarding it?”

“But you said you came down from heaven so you couldn’t have been guarding it.”

“You’re smart aren’t you?”

“So you didn’t guard it?”

“I did.”

“What happened?”

“I guarded it during 1500 BC.”

“Oh. Then who’s guarding it now?”

“Daniel.”

“Another angel?”

“Yeah, you see. This is the only place that the devils can’t come in. Well most devils anyways. But I highly doubt Satan would come in here just to find you.”

“True, true.”

“We’re going to stay here for a few days for you to rest and regain strength.”

“Nice.”

“Yeah, I thought you’d say that.”

“You can explore now if you’d like.” Alex whispered, I slowly got up and stood on my feet. I looked around, it looked like an endless maze of fruits and flowers. There were also lots of animals hidden around us if you looked carefully. I walked slowly away from the oak tree Alex was at. Soon the large oak tree was far from my sight and I was on a little hill, which I believed was in the middle of the garden. I smiled and laid down on the grass. I looked at the sky, it was light blue with small colonies of clouds here and there. I laid there and closed my eyes. I felt free and relaxed right there.

“Enjoying it?” A voice asked. I opened my eyes to see Alex standing over me and looking at me.

“Yeah.” I smiled and closed my eyes again. I felt him lay down beside me.

“Miss your family?” He asked.

“Not really.”

“Cool, scared?”

“Why?”

“People, well things, are after you. Shouldn’t you be scared?”

“Nah, you’re here to protect me.”

“I might not always be there. Like earlier. You were just lucky, that I saw two of you and I knew that the one I was after was a shape shifter.”

“I have faith in you.” I smiled. Opened my eyes and sat up. I saw my long blonde hair glittering in the sun. I saw Alex shift up a bit. I laughed and stood up.

“Let’s play hid and seek tag.” I suggested, I haven’t been a kid in along time. I wanted to feel young and relaxed again. Even though I’m not actually old…

“W-What?”

“You hide and once you find me you catch me.”

“Um okay?”

“Kay, close your eyes and count to thirty.” He nodded and I started to run. I felt so silly. I ran to an apple tree and hid behind it. I giggled like a five year old. Alex was bound to find me, I bet he had super tracking senses so I think he’ll be able to find me. Oh well. Turns out I was wrong, Alex had A LOT of trouble trying to fine me.

“Erica? I can’t find you.” He shouted. I laughed.

“Huh?” He heard me, darn it. I decided to make a run for it. As soon as he saw me he ran after me. Boy, he was fast. He caught me. No fair, angels can run super fast!




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It was night I decided to sleep against the giant oak tree. I fell asleep as soon as a laid down.

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Nice? Please comment :D

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Posted 21 September 2007 - 03:35 PM

^_^
Brilliant! :heartbeat:
Aww, I loved it! :D
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#104 Peachy1214

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Posted 21 September 2007 - 03:50 PM

I'm glad you did. I liked writing the chapter with Alex holding a staff better though ^_^ lol So there will probably be more super hero Alex scenes since I :heartbeat: writing stuff like that :D

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#105 Peachy1214

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Posted 21 September 2007 - 04:09 PM

Bleh, I want more comments before the next update! Can anybody get more people to read this? Thanks!

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Posted 21 September 2007 - 05:06 PM

hmm. . . I see what i can do.
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Posted 21 September 2007 - 08:03 PM

i loved it!!

please update soon!!!

Alex and Erica

hmmm

Can I steal Alex???

Pretty please???
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#108 Peachy1214

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Posted 22 September 2007 - 11:39 AM

Cerra-Yay, thanks :D
Sweet Angel-Thanks, hmm steal Alex? Bleh okay. *Stuffs Alex in a bag and mails to Sweet Angel* *Attaches Post card...*

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Have fun with Alex! :D Send him back soon, Erica might kill me if he goes missing too long :wacko:

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Posted 22 September 2007 - 12:54 PM

Bump?
I need more readers for this! :icon_mecry2:

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Posted 22 September 2007 - 01:24 PM

Sorry! I missed a couple of updates!! :( But I'm still here!! :D Update again soon!
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Posted 22 September 2007 - 03:57 PM

It's okay! I'll update this after I update Night Sky! :D

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Posted 22 September 2007 - 07:23 PM

*New Reader*
Yo Peachy!
Branestorm here.
Cerra let me know about you're story here.
Well, now you got a new reader.
In the words of Cerra,-
"I'll be here waiting."
So yeah, please don't take too long.
Branestorm :020:

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#113 Peachy1214

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Posted 22 September 2007 - 07:52 PM

Yay! Thanks Cerra :D

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P.S. I'll update as soon as I finish my project...turns out my big project is due on Monday...I thought it was due next thursday.

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Posted 22 September 2007 - 07:59 PM

It was great!
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Posted 22 September 2007 - 08:35 PM

Thanks!

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Posted 22 September 2007 - 09:05 PM

Just so you guys know, in the next chapter I'm going to bending rules, facts and stuff in order to make things work. So...it's not true that the Garden of Eden is above the rain forest or whatever crazy things I come up with.

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Posted 22 September 2007 - 10:04 PM

I can update now...but it's a tad bit short. I think I can stretch this chapter!!! So should I post it short?

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Posted 22 September 2007 - 10:23 PM

I thought that you were going to update Peachy?!
I brought you a *new reader*, so you have to keep you're
end of the bargain. That's final. No buts! And you are welcome.
Thank you Brainy for quoting me, and for that you owe me $10 :lol:
Okay, well see ya, Peaches.
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Posted 22 September 2007 - 10:37 PM

Here's the update then :):

Chapter 7



The next morning I woke up hearing a bird chirp. It sounded lovely, I slowly stood up and I found Alex with his gorgeous wings and shiny halo standing in front of me. He looked irresistibly hot.

“Sleep well?” He asked.

“Yeah, I guess.”

“You guess?”

“I don’t normally sleep sitting up.”

“Oh, you meant that.”

“Yeah…”

“No worries, we’re leaving today. I’ve found Gabriel and Michelle, their in New York right now.”

“Wait, if we’re in the Garden of Eden. Why did historians say it was flooded?”

“It wasn’t, they made a wrong estimate. The Garden of Eden had been rised into the air after Adam and Eve left it. The Lord shielded it with invisibility so planes can’t see it and put visuals effects in so that it “looks” like we’re really on land if you’re inside it.”

“Wow.” I whispered.

“Yeah, so technically we’re on top of a tropical rain forest right now.”

“Okay…”

“To get out, I’ll fly us down. Then I’ll call the Impala.”

“Got it.” I faked a smiled. I didn’t actually get it though. How is all this possible? But I guess God is God. You don’t have to have an explanation for everything. A few seconds later I realized that I was on Alex’s back, his huge wings flapping lightly. His hair blowing in the wind, he looked so sexy. I think I’m falling for him. I know I’m not supposed to but hey, I can’t help it. It’s not his or my fault he’s so hot. When we were in the rain forest, I saw trees everywhere. It was truly a rain forest. Alex whistled a melodic tune and the Impala we were driving a few days ago appeared. Not a scratch, Alex opened the door to the passenger seat for me to get in. I smiled and climbed in. He climbed on to the car and put it in ignition. I yawned.

“Tired?” He asked.

“Yeah.”

“You can sleep.” He suggested.

“But I’m sleeping upright.”

“Maybe I could help with this.” He closed his eyes and the inside of the car changed. There was the two seats in front where Alex and I were sitting. Then behind us was a door.

“Open it.” He urged.

“Okay.” I reached out and opened and inside looked like a beautiful bedroom, complete with a bed and everything. I gasped. Alex chuckled.

“Like it?”

“Like it? I love it!” I laughed and kissed him on the cheek. He paused and looked at me strangely, then he started laughing too. I smiled and went into the little room.

“Sleep nicely.”

“I will.” I shouted from inside the room. I wonder if the outside of the car changed…

“It didn’t!” Alex shouted from outside. I gasped. He could read my thoughts. What if he…I better not think of that.

“I don’t always read it, unless I sense a question or something.”

“Oh.” I replied. Good, I had some privacy.

“Ha, I’m glad that you think so.” WHAT?!?! SO I DON’T HAVE PRIVACY? DAM* YOU ALEX!!!

“Now, now. No need to use words like this, you do have privacy. I know when you need privacy. Like maybe this morning. I know you had something to think about, I don’t know what it is though.”

“Thank goodness.” Now he doesn’t know I’m falling for him.

“Like just then.” Oh yeah. I rock, ha ha.

“Yeah, I’m going to sleep now.” He laughed and I dozed off.




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When I woke up I got out of the bed, the bedroom Alex made for me was filled with everything I wanted and needed. I opened the laptop and checked my email. I saw emails from Sierra and everyone. I opened one.



From: Sierra Carlington- CSierraC@email.com
To: Erica Lavenderson- xXEricaXx@email.com
Subject: WHERE DID YOU GO??



OKAY ERICA,


WHERE DID YOU GO? YOUR PARENTS SAID YOU RAN AWAY FROM HOME AND SOME PEOPLE THINK YOU’RE KIDNAPPED OR SOMETHING! REPLY GIRL! I AM WORRIED SICKKKK! SO YOU BETTER REPLY THIS EMAIL AS SOON AS YOU READ IT!



-SIERRA

P.S. I AM MAD, SO YOU BETTER REPLY!



Was I supposed to reply? Tell her the truth or lie? I couldn’t decide. I left the email alone and sign off. Then I got out of the cozy little bedroom. Alex was still driving, he opened the window. His blonde hair was blowing in the wind and making him look hotter than ever.

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Likey? I'm trying to squeze in some fluff somehow...lol I'll update again tomorrow...I'm cramming a project now...it's due monday and I just started....I'm dead. If I don't update on Monday, you'll know what happened. I got busted...detention! lol

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Posted 22 September 2007 - 10:42 PM

P.S. I'm thinking about posting a story I wrote in grade four....should I? It's a horrible one...maybe I'll post it if I don't have time to update...

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Posted 22 September 2007 - 10:43 PM

Great, two questions,-How old are you and
. . . . . . . . . -Have you ever had a boyfriend?
I find it is easier to write fluff once you have experienced love.
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Posted 22 September 2007 - 10:49 PM

I am thirteen, and nope I haven't had a boyfriend before...unless you count pretend ones like when you play online games(Let's say maple story since I've played that before) and they ask you if you want to be their maple girlfriend or something. Yeah.. :D

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Posted 22 September 2007 - 10:50 PM

Great update . . .er Peachy? Sorry I don't remember, How shameful.
I noticed Cerra called you Peaches sometimes so I am not to sure.
Like the Update though, I think I am going to add you to my list
of favorite young authors from this sight in my profile.


I thought that you were going to update Peachy?!
I brought you a *new reader*, so you have to keep you're
end of the bargain. That's final. No buts! And you are welcome.
Thank you Brainy for quoting me, and for that you owe me $10 :lol:
Okay, well see ya, Peaches.
Cerra

Aww man! I think I will send the check through via mail, that okay Cerra?
I should have known you would charge me for using your phrase.
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#124 Peachy1214

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Posted 22 September 2007 - 10:53 PM

Yup I go by Peachy, I don't mind if you call me Peaches though. I have multiple names like my real name, Mimi, or my nick name by my school friends, Cookie, and I was nick named Peachy because my best friend thought my tongue looked like a peach...seriously...=.=" And yay! I've never been on anybody's list on their profile before! Yayie!

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#125 Peachy1214

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Posted 22 September 2007 - 11:15 PM

Should I post my grade four story as it is or should I re-write it and add fluff? I'm bored. Please answer.

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#126 SoccerRules

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Posted 22 September 2007 - 11:21 PM

Hmm, don't matter to me.
I think you should whatever you feel more comfortable with.
Cerra :mgwave:
L.o.l Yes Brainy. . . :huh: I mean Branestorm, l.o.l
Via Airmail will do just fine, send it to care Crazy Cerra at the loony asylum, ;) San Diego, it's a building the size of a portapotty next to Shamoo's tank. :lol:
You know Peachy, I had a nightmare that Shamoo that big killer whale pulled me in the tank and I drowned! I don't think he is my friend no more!

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Posted 22 September 2007 - 11:25 PM

^Oke, then I'll post it maybe...it's horrible. I got a B on it :icon_mecry2: and Shamoo pulled you into the ocean? Aww, I'm glad it's just a nightmare or I might've lost one of my most faithful readers! I would hunt down Shamoo if that happened. lol, Nightmares aren't always true...I once had a dream that my bestest guy buddy slapped me :icon_eek: lol!

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Posted 23 September 2007 - 12:21 AM

Gah, I am bored. Which story should I work on? This or Night Sky? Please vote.

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Posted 23 September 2007 - 01:40 AM

*New reader* Please update soon. :eusa_clap: :eusa_clap:



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Posted 23 September 2007 - 08:55 AM

*New reader*
please up date this is a relly good story
you have some ideas i wouldnt be able to do that
can i add you as best writer

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Posted 23 September 2007 - 11:39 AM

Danielle-I love new readers :D
Sinéad-Yay, another new reader! :) Sure you could add me as best writer :D

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Posted 23 September 2007 - 08:32 PM

Hey Peachy, If you check my profile out, you will see that I added you in my list of favorite young writers from this site.
Ithink you have earned it.
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Posted 23 September 2007 - 10:46 PM

Sweet Angel-Thanks, hmm steal Alex? Bleh okay. *Stuffs Alex in a bag and mails to Sweet Angel* *Attaches Post card...*

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Have fun with Alex! Send him back soon, Erica might kill me if he goes missing too long

~Peachy

wohho!oo!!!
Tell Erica she's missing a lot right now :P

I loved your update!!!
I wish there was a guy like him in my grade :(
then again Alex is THE perfect guy
Not much around these days
Update soon!!
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Posted 24 September 2007 - 03:06 PM

Branestorm-Seriously? Yay! Thanks! :D:D
Sweet Angel-Lol, I bet Erica will kill me if I tell her that. But I guess I can take a chance...:P True, Alex is perfect. I tried to make him gentlemanly. Yeah. :D I wanna do a bad boy some day ;)

Guess what people, it was my first day back at school from my long sick break. You know what happened??? I got tortured with TWO pop quizzes. Then I got hit with a SOCCER ball in the face while I was playing volley ball. So yeah, that was a real fun day....=.="

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Posted 24 September 2007 - 06:03 PM

Erm, about the update. I was working on it until my daddy brought home Harry Potter 7....I wanna read now. I'm so sorry. I'll post a teaser. I am terribly sorry about the delay.

I sighed at the fact that Alex was looking so hot. I just wished that he wasn’t an angel so I could just let myself fall in love with him. Though even though he is an angel I’m still falling in love with him. So either way, I still win. Sort of.


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