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#46 roni

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Posted 16 September 2007 - 04:24 PM

love it!
please update soon

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Posted 16 September 2007 - 04:30 PM

^Thanks! and....

Second page!! Whoot Whoot! :D

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Posted 16 September 2007 - 05:30 PM

I loved it

please update soon!!
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Posted 16 September 2007 - 07:07 PM

^Thanks! I'll try my best! :D

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Posted 16 September 2007 - 08:04 PM

update again soon!
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Posted 16 September 2007 - 08:36 PM

[color="#483D8B"][font="Arial Narrow"]I don't know when I'll update this again since I have to work on Stars so I'll post a little teaser :D (I love posting dreams as teasers :P)

“That filthy creature!” Camaron roared.

“Should I go after them?” Melody asked.

“Go, try to earn their trust…”

“Yes.” Melody bowed and started to walk away.

“One more thing.” Melody turned and looked at Camaron.

“Master Satan expects success, do not fail.”

“Yes sir.”

“Now, go!” With that, Melody disappeared into the darkness. Camaron sat in the darkness, his eyes filled with pure evilness.

“Watch out…” He cackled.

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Posted 17 September 2007 - 09:13 AM

No comments yet? Thats okay....though I would like some....anyways, I'm going to do a sad ending because I cannot think of any other way to do a sequel with this having a happy ending. Sorry guys. :( I promise the sequel will have a happy ending though! :)

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Posted 17 September 2007 - 09:22 AM

wait!....sad ending?
i hate sad endings!
update soon

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Posted 17 September 2007 - 09:37 AM

^ I hate sad endings too, but I promise I'll fix it in the sequel.

Do not look unless you are desperate...though I know everyone will look-
Spoiler


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Posted 17 September 2007 - 01:31 PM

I updated Stars...ermm...yesterday...I'm working on updating this now. :D

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Posted 17 September 2007 - 04:48 PM

I'll be waiting! :)

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Posted 18 September 2007 - 10:27 AM

I thought that since I made a cover for Stars I might as well make one for this one...:)

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Is it good? I think I messed up a bit :s (The girl is Erica....)

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Posted 18 September 2007 - 01:29 PM

Last chapter of Stars was posted. I'm working on this full time now...maybe not...I still have my fan fic...oops sorry! But there will be more updates for this :D

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Posted 19 September 2007 - 09:30 AM

I requested Stars to be moved to Completed Stories. I am doing a sequel for Stars and this one :D

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Posted 19 September 2007 - 01:45 PM

Short chapter...I know. I'm trying my best though!

Chapter 4




Alex was driving and I was just…sitting there. I started to get sleepy and I fell asleep.


“That filthy creature!” Camaron roared.

“Should I go after them?” Melody asked.

“Go, try to earn their trust…”

“Yes.” Melody bowed and started to walk away.

“One more thing.” Melody turned and looked at Camaron.

“Master Satan expects success, do not fail.”

“Yes sir.”

“Now, go!” With that, Melody disappeared into the darkness. Camaron sat in the darkness, his eyes filled with pure evilness.

“Watch out…” He cackled.



Then I woke up, panting. I felt Alex’s worried gaze on me. I tried to relax.

“Are you okay?”

“Y-yeah.”

“Um, okay.” We sat in silence, it was the awkward kind of silence. After about an hour to two hours of silence we arrived at the entrance of a trail opening.

“W-why are we stopping here?”

“Just follow.” Alex started to walk in the trail. Alex walked quickly, making it hard for me to keep up with him.

“Slow down.” Alex turned around and stared at me.

“You walk slow.”

“You’re an ‘angel’ I’m human, of course I walk slow.” I made air brackets for the work angel. Alex rolled his eyes and stopped.

“Fine, I’ll walk slower.”

“You better.” I glared at him. He laughed and started to walk again, slower this time to my relief. As we walked deeper I started to see a light ahead.

“Where are we going?”

“I don’t know, we need to hide.”

“So we’re just going to ‘hide’ for the rest of our lives?”

“No, we need to find Michelle and Gabriel. I lost contact with them after I found you.”

“Oh.” We kept walking and soon we saw a cozy little wooden house. A girl with blondish brown hair came out, she looked younger than Alex and I. But of course I didn’t know how old Alex really was. Did angels age?

“Are you people okay? Are you lost?” She asked.

“No we’re fine.” Alex replied. I nudged his arm.

“We’re lost, we were wondering if we could stay here for the night.”

“Oh, okay sure.” She smiled and started to lead us in.

“Erica!” Alex hissed.

“You are not tired because you are an angel. I am not an angel, I get tired so why don’t you just let me have my way for once and let me rest.”

“We’re leaving first thing in the morning.” I glared at him.

“Fine.” When we got inside the girl introduced herself. Her name was Melody Michelle her parents went away for a business trip…they live in the woods because her parents likes nature. Okay…so she showed us rooms. This is what she said…


Melody: Here’s your room.

Alex:
There’s only one bed…

Melody:
Aren’t you guys married?

Me: *Staring her at shock* Do we look like we’re married? I’m eighteen.

Melody:
*looks sincerely sorry* Sorry.

Alex: It’s okay, I’ll sleep on the floor if you don’t mind Erica.

Me: Whatever.

I was still trying to wrap my mind around the fact that someone said Alex and I looked like a married couple. This was too confusing. Alex was very hot but that doesn’t mean I would marry him…We walked into the room he closed the door.

“I don’t sleep so it doesn’t really matter, I’ll make sure they don’t come.”

“Oh, okay.”

“Doesn’t that girl seem a little weird?”

“No.” I slumped onto the bed.

“I’m going to bed. Good night Alex.”

“Night.” I fell asleep.
~~~~~
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#61 Peachy1214

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Posted 19 September 2007 - 03:03 PM

Guess what? I can't update this until Ela updates Million Dollar Baby so make her update!!! Sorry, though if she takes to long I'll be nicey and post a teaser :D

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Posted 19 September 2007 - 05:55 PM

Update your story, Ela!
That was great, by the way.

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Posted 19 September 2007 - 06:07 PM

Man, I missed one update!
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Posted 19 September 2007 - 06:10 PM

That was really good! Update, Ela!! :D Your cover was really beautiful!! I love it! :love7:
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Posted 19 September 2007 - 06:13 PM

Thanks everyone! Now lets bug Ela to update or I can't update! *stomps off to bug Ela to update Million Dollar Baby*

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#66 luving_all_american_girl

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Posted 20 September 2007 - 06:15 AM

Whoa, Whoa, Whoa.
I just can't believe it.
Peachy... you threatened me....
I just can't believe it.
Ha Ha Ha.
Ok guys, I'll update. So don't blame me if Peachy don't update. Muahahahaha

Dear Pushy Peachy,
I'll update, maybe tonight (if I still have time after studying the damn economics), or tomorrow, or saturday...
Anyway, I nearly finished chapter 5. Is NEARLY.
And your story sounds interesting... I can't believe I haven't read it before. I'll read it later. (I'm lack of time right now)
So, breathe and relax. Ha Ha Ha, I am not going to vanish.

-Ela.
With. Love.
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Posted 20 September 2007 - 09:04 AM

Whoa, Whoa, Whoa.
I just can't believe it.
Peachy... you threatened me....
I just can't believe it.
Ha Ha Ha.
Ok guys, I'll update. So don't blame me if Peachy don't update. Muahahahaha

Dear Pushy Peachy,
I'll update, maybe tonight (if I still have time after studying the damn economics), or tomorrow, or saturday...
Anyway, I nearly finished chapter 5. Is NEARLY.
And your story sounds interesting... I can't believe I haven't read it before. I'll read it later. (I'm lack of time right now)
So, breathe and relax. Ha Ha Ha, I am not going to vanish.

-Ela.
With. Love.

Ha ha :badgrin: It worked! Yay! You'll update your story and I'll update mine :)

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P.S. Thanks everyone for your help! :D
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Posted 20 September 2007 - 05:39 PM

Just so you guys know...I finished the update. I have to say I think it is awesome! There is some cool action scenes ;) And....Alex is like superman here! :D He sounds so hot...I can't believe I just said that. lol I usually don't say that about my characters. :P

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Posted 20 September 2007 - 06:09 PM

I really wanna update but since Ela didn't update I can't so I'll post a teaser. :D

“I just got one of my shape shifters to pretend to be you and lured him away.”
“What the hel*?”
“True, true. I am from hel*”
“Oh my goodness.” I tried to back away but I was still on my bed.
“Now come with me.”
“Heck no!”
“Oh really?”
“Yeah.”
“Well, too bad. You’re coming with me.” I shook my head and dashed for the door. I ran outside but then she caught up with me.
“Big mistake.” She slapped me and I fell to the ground. Then she knocked me out, the last thing I saw were a pair of white wings. They looked like they belonged to an eagle.


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P.s. Update Ela!!!

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#70 Peachy1214

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Posted 20 September 2007 - 06:22 PM

No comments yet? :( I wish more people would read this

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Posted 20 September 2007 - 06:30 PM

UPDATE!!!

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Posted 20 September 2007 - 06:43 PM

Update all ready peaches!
*Demanding Me*
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Posted 20 September 2007 - 06:45 PM

You evil person, I see you are on,
Peaches, I know you are here!
I can see you!
So Update!!!
*Mad Me*
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Posted 20 September 2007 - 07:06 PM

*whines* But Ela didn't update yet.... I'll think about it....(which means I most likely will cause I get tempted easily...)<<A bad feature about me

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Posted 20 September 2007 - 07:07 PM

You evil person, I see you are on,
Peaches, I know you are here!
I can see you!
So Update!!!
*Mad Me*
Cerra :mgwave:

Ah, I was on but I was eating dinner ;)

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#76 SoccerRules

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Posted 20 September 2007 - 07:07 PM

Wait! what story does Ella write?
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Posted 20 September 2007 - 07:07 PM

^^A great feature about you!!

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Posted 20 September 2007 - 07:08 PM

*whines* But Ela didn't update yet.... I'll think about it....(which means I most likely will cause I get tempted easily...)<<A bad feature about me

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I meant that to go with this part!
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Posted 20 September 2007 - 07:15 PM

Ela writes Million Dollar Baby and Seriously it's a good feature? Okay...I think if i get anymore pushy comments I'll fail at resisting...oh my god did i just say that? Pretend you didn't hear it!!!

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Posted 20 September 2007 - 07:16 PM

Update!
Update!
Update!
Update!
NOW!

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Posted 20 September 2007 - 07:20 PM

Ela writes Million Dollar Baby and Seriously it's a good feature? Okay...I think if i get anymore pushy comments I'll fail at resisting...oh my god did i just say that? Pretend you didn't hear it!!!

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Hmm, on the other hand, . . .I have read Million Dollar Baby and I thought it's great, maybe you should wait till Ella updates then you may update, then It will be better for me because I will have to updates to read!
I am very sneaky! heeheehee! :badgrin:
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Posted 20 September 2007 - 07:24 PM

I was afraid to come now I have to update....so much for my plan.... <_< Kayie here is the update :D

Chapter Five



I was sleeping peacefully until suddenly I felt a hand slap my face. I opened my eyes and say Melody.

“God, you’re a heavy sleeper!”

“Whhhaaatttt?”

“Get up and come with me.”

“Why?” I sat up and saw no sign of Alex.

“Where’s Alex?” I asked.

“I killed him.” She laughed.

“No I’m serious.”

“Lover boy won’t be here to save you.”

“What did you do?”

“You want to know?” She asked.

“Yes.”

“I just got one of my shape shifters to pretend to be you and lured him away.”

“What the hel*?”

“True, true. I am from hel*”

“Oh my goodness.” I tried to back away but I was still on my bed.

“Now come with me.”

“Heck no!”

“Oh really?”

“Yeah.”

“Well, too bad. You’re coming with me.” I shook my head and dashed for the door. I ran outside but then she caught up with me.

“Big mistake.” She slapped me and I fell to the ground. Then she knocked me out, the last thing I saw were a pair of white wings. They looked like they belonged to an eagle.


~*~*~*~*~*~


“Let her go!” I heard a angelic voice cry, I was trapped in a dark cell.

“Never.” Another voice laughed. I felt weak, deserted and forgotten. I screamed.

“Erica, I’m coming!” The angelic voice screamed, it was clearly far away.

I looked around it was pitch dark, I couldn’t see anything. A split second later a pair of blood red eyes appeared before me.

“Die!” I screamed again and I saw a light appear before me. There with snow white eagle wings was Alex. He had his halo and he glowed brightly. He stood in front of me, his right hand holding a emerald green staff. There was this energy ball thingy on the top. Alex shot a green blast of energy at the cell, I could see an exit.

“Get out.” Alex whispered.

“I can’t leave without you.” I pleaded.

“Yes you can, remember I can’t die when I’m in this form.” He whispered.

“Fine.” I ran out I looked back after I ran a few meters. I saw red and green energy sparks everywhere. I was scared, scared for Alex. I kept running and finally, I reached the exit. I ran outside, I was inside a huge forest. I looked around, I felt small. I tried running into one of the trails, but I ended up in running in a circle. I felt deserted, a minute passed. I think… I saw Alex again with his snowy white wings. He smiled at me and landed.

“You need to fly to get out of here.” He whispered.

“I-I can’t fly.”

“It’s okay I’ll help you.”

“What?”

“You’ll ride on my back.” He smiled.

“Uh, okay.”

“Wait.” He started glowing again and his staff disappeared.

“Okay.” He smiled and gestured for me to go on his back.

“Uh…” I was scared I might wreck his wings or something. They seemed strong yet delicate.

“It’s okay just go on, Camaron might come. We have to hurry.”

“…Okay…” I walked slowly towards him, I climbed on him and gripped tightly on his shoulders. I squeezed my eyes shut.

“Ready?” He asked.

“Y-yeah.” I heard his wings flapping hardly and then silence, why didn’t we start flying?!?!

“Open your eyes Erica.” I opened one eye and then the other. We were in the sky. The clouds looked so fluffy and touchable. I tried to reach out and touch them.

“These aren’t touchable.”

“Oh, these? You mean there are some that are touchable?”

“Erm…I shouldn’t have said that.”

“Aww, tell me. Please Alex.”

“Fine. Heaven.”

“What?”

“You probably won’t believe me but the ones in heaven are touchable.”

“Wow, I believe you. But I don’t think I’ll ever be able to touch one.”

“Why?”

“I’m human.”

“You might, when you die?”

“What? You died to become an angel.”

“Yeah, don’t you have basic Christianity knowledge?”

“Erm, sorry.” He laughed.

“It’s okay. You’re tired.” He was right, how did he know?

“How did you know…”

“Angel powers?”

“Oh, yeah.”

“You can sleep, it’ll take a long time till we reach our destination.”

“Um, okay.” I hesitantly wrapped my arms around his waist and fell asleep.


~*~*~*~*~*


I woke up hearing Alex’s beautiful voice calling my name. I opened my eyes slowly and I saw that I was leaning against a large oak tree in a beautiful garden, Alex was in his “human” form again.

“You’re awake. It was easier than I thought.” He laughed and sat down beside me.

“Yeah…”

“Where are we exactly?”

“Um….”
~~~~~
Like it? It wasn't really a cliffy since the place they were at is just the garden of Eden :)

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Posted 20 September 2007 - 07:25 PM

Hmm, on the other hand, . . .I have read Million Dollar Baby and I thought it's great, maybe you should wait till Ella updates then you may update, then It will be better for me because I will have to updates to read!
I am very sneaky! heeheehee! :badgrin:
Cerra :mgwave:

Oops sorry, I updated before I read that....

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Posted 20 September 2007 - 07:29 PM

I was going to say the Garden of Eden!
Update soon!

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Posted 20 September 2007 - 07:48 PM

Yeah, I have a comment, You just couldn't wait, could you Peachy?
*tsk-tsk*
Now you have ruined my perfect plan!
I was going to have two updates to read, . . .Two!
*sigh*
*Not Very Dissapointed Me Because You at Least You Updated* :lol:
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Posted 20 September 2007 - 08:08 PM

Hmm, I have three stories and I don't think I can manage to update all of them...:P I know I'm a horrible updater bleh. Anyways, I'm gonna put one on hold. Which one? This is YOUR part people. Vote! Should I put:
1.Night Sky On Hold?
2.My Guardian Angel On Hold?
3. Or My Fan Fic-The Next Generation?

Please help :P

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Posted 20 September 2007 - 08:09 PM

YAY THIRD PAGE!! :D

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Posted 20 September 2007 - 08:19 PM

Please vote? Kay, I'm going to bed. But I expect atleast one vote when I come back tomorrow! Thankies!

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Posted 20 September 2007 - 08:46 PM

Wait . . . .! Is it too late Please update this story
Update on My Guardian Angel!
That is one vote
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Posted 21 September 2007 - 08:24 AM

I just updated yesterday :P So you want me to put My Guardian Angel on hold? I wanted to know which one to put on hold, My fan fic, Night Sky, or My Guardian Angel.

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