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#1 Peachy1214

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Posted 13 September 2007 - 06:46 PM

:heartbeat: My Guardian Angel :heartbeat:




Erica Lavenderson’s life takes a turn when young Alexander Angelicain moves into the neighborhood. Alexander is different, one night he appears at her window and confides to her what he really is. He also reveals that someone is after her and that he was sent to protect her. It’s a matter of life or death. Who will succeed?



Like it? I'll post the first chapter when I get some comments! :)

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#2 DrkShdwsByd

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Posted 13 September 2007 - 06:50 PM

Hmm, it sure sounds interesting! I'll have to see though...

Please post the first chapter! ^_^

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Posted 13 September 2007 - 07:06 PM

Like it?
No.
Love it?
YES!
Update Ch. 1 soon!

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#4 SoccerRules

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Posted 13 September 2007 - 07:24 PM

Oh Peaches, you're awsome!
Please, pretty please! pretty please with sugar on top!-
I would so like to see an update by today Pease?*puppy eyes*


Spread the Love yo!


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#5 a_kiwi_for_your_thoughts

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Posted 13 September 2007 - 07:38 PM

Whoa!!

I love the idea

LOVEEEE!!(i cant figure out how to copy and paste it)

but it sounds great. post

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#6 lazybum4lyfe06

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Posted 13 September 2007 - 07:41 PM

Hey, this sounds awesome!

Post the first chapter soon? :D

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Posted 13 September 2007 - 07:57 PM

OOH. Interesante. ;)

UPDATE, PEACHY!


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Posted 13 September 2007 - 07:58 PM

This looks good.

Post the first chapter soon!

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Posted 13 September 2007 - 10:17 PM

Hmm, this sounds very interesting. I hope you post the first update very soon!
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#10 Peachy1214

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Posted 14 September 2007 - 02:52 PM

Wow, so many comments! I'm so happy :D I'm sorry I didn't post the first chapter earlier. I had to go...evil dad... <_<

Bananas
-Okay thanks!
Kayleigh-Thanks! I'll post right now :D
Cerra- Aww, thanks! I'm sorry I couldn't post yesterday. I had to go, my dad was being evil! But I'll post it right now!
Kiwi-Thanks! I'll post now!
Meg-Thanks! Sure, like now!
ValenciaThank you! I'll update now!
Maggie-Okay,I'll post now.
Soccer-Thanks!

Now here's chapter one! Sorry for the wait!

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Chapter 1
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“Oh Lord, I shall not fail.” Alexander nodded, and stood up.

“Protect her, she is your responsibility. I shall send you to Earth in your human form, you will be paired with Gabriel and Michelle, they shall act as your parents.” The Lord answered.

“I will my Lord.” With that The Lord took away his wings and turned him human, Alexander started to fall. He was there. He was on Earth.


“Erica.” I turned around and saw Sierra, my best friend, standing behind me.

“Huh?”

“Come on lets go to class, we don’t want to be late.” She dragged me to History and pushed me into my seat. I sat impatiently waiting for History to start then to end. It was the last class of the day; you can understand how impatient I was getting. I couldn’t wait to go home and log on to msn and do whatever I wanted. Then an angel like boy walked in. He had honey blond hair and blue eyes like me but his eyes were bluer than any I’ve ever seen. His face made him look like he was an angel, made him look like he was perfect. I heard gasps and whispers, flirtatious smiles and Sierra looked like she was about to faint. Perhaps I’m not the only one that thinks Alex looks incredibly hot. Then Mr. Collias walked in.

“Good Afternoon Class, as you can see we have a new student today. His name is Alexander Angelicain. Could you tell us a little bit about yourself Alex?” Alex nodded.

“I’m Alex as you all know, I just moved here from Vancouver. Um, I like skateboarding and soccer. That’s about it.”

“Thank you Alex. Now we need to find a seat for Alex.” I saw hands shoot up, all girls. The guys were clearly worried about their girlfriends.

“Miss Lavenderson? Alex is going to sit beside you, please show him around.”

“Yes sir.” Then Alex started to walk towards me. I saw gazes of lust and jealousy shot at my by every girl in the class. I swear I even saw Sierra smirk at me. Alex sat down next to me and smiled. I knew that I would’ve fainted if it weren’t for the death glares the other girls were sending at me.

“I’m Alex.”

“Erica.” I smiled, and began to concentrate in class. Mr. Collias started to go on about the Second World War. Then he assigned an assignment to us on Hitler’s part in the world war. When the bell finally rang I gathered up my books quickly and walked to my locker as fast as possible. But Sierra caught up to me.

“Oh my goodness, Erica you are like so, so lucky! You got to sit next the new kid Alex!”

“Hmm? Why? He’s just some new kid.” I tried to sound as casual as possible and I tried to act like I didn’t care. I thought I sounded pretty good.

“Just some new kid? JUST SOME NEW KID? He is like totally perfect looking and hot!”

“Oh.”

“Come on Erica.”

“Huh?” I asked and I locked my locker and started to walk back home. Sierra followed me closely.

“Seriously Erica, you don’t think he’s hot?”

“Not really.”

“You are seriously weird.”

“That’s what they say.” I kept walking and I bumped into Alex.

“Sorry.” I muttered and continued walking.

“It’s okay. Bye.” He turned around and walked away. Sierra kept up with me and started to bug me about what just happened.

“Gosh Sierra, why don’t you talk to him if you like him so much!”

“Um excuse me? You sit right next to him.” She replied. I ignored her and ran home. When I finally got back home I ran up to my room.

“Erica sweetie, you have a visitor.”

“Are you sure mom?”

“Yes, go down and see for yourself.” I ran downstairs and saw Sierra at the door.

“Sierra?”

“Yeah, lets go.”

“Where to?”

“Tim.” Tim was Tim Horton’s.

“Okay…”

“Let’s go.” She dragged me out of my house and onto her car. I sat patiently while she drove. We got there in about five minutes and I hopped off her car. I walked inside and started to order, I got a chocolate muffin and a small ice cappuccino for myself and two chocolate chip cookies for Sierra. I grabbed the food and sat down at the table she was at.

“Ah ha, I see you remembered.” I smirked at her, I used to always forget what type of cookie she wanted.

“Yup.”

“oh my god, Eric look.” I turned around and saw Alex walking in looking as perfect as ever.

“So?” I asked.

“I’m going to invite him to join us.” She smiled and walked over to Alex. I heard her talking and politely inviting him to join us. He said yes. He and Sierra walked slowly over to the shocked eye bulging me. Alex sat down with Sierra.

“Hey.” Alex whispered.

“I’ll uh go uh get you guys um something.” I replied and quickly stood up and walked in line. Alex followed me.

“Are you okay? I could leave if you want.”

“No, no it’s okay. You stay okay? Please, I just need to recover from that embarrassing moment.”

“It wasn’t embarrassing.”

“Yes it was.” I turned to the cashier since it was our turn.

“What would you like?” I asked him.

“Maybe a donut?” Alex replied. I ordered the donut and stuffed it in Alex’s face and walked back to the table. I am so embarrassed. I stuffed the bag in his face!
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Hope you liked it! Please comment and I appologize for this extremely short chapter! It's usually longer, it's just that this chapter is supposed to be like introductions and stuff. So it's sort of boring and I write slow boring stuff. I don't think you'd really understand what I just wrote cause I don't..but oh well.

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#11 Legally_Brunette_60164

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Posted 14 September 2007 - 02:57 PM

lolz!
Update soon!
Can I have Alex?
Pleeeaase?

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#12 Peachy1214

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Posted 14 September 2007 - 03:24 PM

^Hmm, I guess Erica won't mind...would she? :D

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#13 Legally_Brunette_60164

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Posted 14 September 2007 - 03:33 PM

Um...

Me: Can I have Alex?
Her: sure
me: really?
her: yeah, but I get him on Tuesday.
me: why tuesday?
her: so I can go to DANCE class with him.
me: o- what?
her: yeah.
me: deal.


So, yeah, she wont mind!
*takes Alex*
yey!

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#14 Peachy1214

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Posted 14 September 2007 - 03:36 PM

lol :) Have fun with Alex!

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#15 Peachy1214

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Posted 14 September 2007 - 03:38 PM

One more thing...
lol okay then, one more thing. People, read Stars if you haven't yet. Please!
Thanks!

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Posted 14 September 2007 - 05:01 PM

Awww.

Alex seems sweet. I can't wait to read more about him.

Update soon!

Val ♥
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Posted 14 September 2007 - 05:06 PM

Hi Peachy!
2 WORDS-Loved It!
Pleas continue, I think you did really well!


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#18 Peachy1214

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Posted 14 September 2007 - 05:20 PM

Val-lol, I'm glad he seems sweet. That was what I was aiming for :D
Cerra-Thanks! I'll update as soon as I finish proof reading...or as soon as my friend finishes proof reading for me. hehehe

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#19 Peachy1214

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Posted 14 September 2007 - 06:26 PM

Here's a teaser since I don't think I'll update this story until maybe next week on Tuesday.

“We have to get her now.” James hissed.
“No.”
“We’ve waited for eighteen years.”
“Some thing is not right.”
“Who cares, her blood has been purified now. She’s eighteen now!”
“No! Shut up or master Satan will destroy you.”

Hope you liked the teaser and please vote on the poll, I really need to know so I could write the ending.

Thanks!

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#20 SoccerRules

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Posted 14 September 2007 - 08:09 PM

Come on Peaches!
I guess I am nobody? :mgwave:
:( Well I feel hurt, I am so feeling the Love right now. <_<
Won't you at least update for me?
Well I wiish you would.

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Posted 14 September 2007 - 08:14 PM

I am going to count to ten,
and when I come back,
I want to see an update! :mad:



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(still hurt) :icon_mecry2: Y . .Yo. .You better say sorry! :icon_mecry2:
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#22 Peachy1214

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Posted 14 September 2007 - 08:19 PM

oh my god I'm so sorry Cerra, please forgive me! :icon_mecry2: Chapter 2 isn't done yet but I guess I could post what I have for now.

Part of Chapter 2 just for Cerra:

Chapter 2

When I got home I freaked. I seriously think I freaked. I started to scream, I felt so embarrassed. I looked like and idiot in front of Alex! He probably thinks I’m extremely weird now! I screwed up. My mom ran up when she heard me screaming.

“Erica Ann Lavenderson?”

“I’m fine mom sorry just needed to get rid of some stress.”

“Okay…”

Then she left, I decided to take a rest and I slumped onto my bed. Then I had a dream.

“We have to get her now.” James hissed.
“No.”
“We’ve waited for eighteen years.”
“Some thing is not right.”
“Who cares, her blood has been purified now. She’s eighteen now!”
“No! Shut up or master Satan will destroy you.”


Then I woke up, Satan? Blood? Eighteen? I was eighteen but it was a dream…I’m sure the girl they were referring to in the dream wasn’t me…Or was it? I decided to forget about this dream. Then I walked downstairs, I found my mom on the couch watching Jeopardy! I walked across her and she turned to look at me.

“Dinner’s in the kitchen, dad isn’t home yet.”

“Oh, okay.” I walked into the kitchen and found a slice of pizza on a plate. I popped it into the microwave and heated it up. Then I grabbed it and brought it upstairs.

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Like it? Sorry Cerra! You're not a nobody!

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#23 SoccerRules

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Posted 14 September 2007 - 08:31 PM

Yay that was super!
I liked it, scratch that, loved it!
Peachy thanks, for dedicating it to me!
That was sweet, here! have an ice cream :mgicecream:
I forgive you!
So some sierd creatures are after her?
Why?
What do they mean by purified blood?

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#24 Peachy1214

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Posted 14 September 2007 - 08:37 PM

Thanks! I'm glad you're not mad at me :D YAY! An Ice-Cream! Yum, some creatures sent from hell by Satan-an angel turned bad(as said in the bible)- and because of her blood...they need it to make something...and all humans' blood are not completely pure until they're eighteen(at least in my story) so yeah...:D

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Posted 14 September 2007 - 08:56 PM

Thanks! I'm glad you're not mad at me :D YAY! An Ice-Cream! Yum, some creatures sent from hell by Satan-an angel turned bad(as said in the bible)- and because of her blood...they need it to make something...and all humans' blood are not completely pure until they're eighteen(at least in my story) so yeah... :D

~Peachy :mgwave:


Till they are eighteen huh? I think usually eighteen-year old's blood is usually impure by then. Huh! Teens these days.
I think I know which part of the Bible you're talking about.
I read it three times when i was in grade school, one time because my mom said she would give me twenty bucks. ;)
When you're little you really want big bucks :lol:
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Posted 14 September 2007 - 08:57 PM

I need some new characters about two or three, five at the most....tell me if you want to be in the story! :D

Please include:

Name of Character:
Gender:
Age:
Hair Color:
Skin Tone:
Eye Color:
Personality:
Which side you want to be on(Good/Bad):
Other information you would like to include:

~Peachy:mgwave:

P.S. Do me a huge favor and read stars? Thanks!

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Posted 14 September 2007 - 10:05 PM

Great story so far,

Please update again, soon

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Posted 14 September 2007 - 10:45 PM

wow
i really love this
please update soon!!!!
*new reader*
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Posted 15 September 2007 - 12:02 PM

I need some new characters about two or three, five at the most....tell me if you want to be in the story! :D

Please include:

Name of Character:
Gender: female
Age: 16?
Hair Color: blondish-brown
Skin Tone: golden
Eye Color: hazel
Personality: outgoing, attitude, un-polite
Which side you want to be on(Good/Bad): bad
Other information you would like to include: names: Melody, Jackie, Lelan, Arianna, Georgia

~Peachy:mgwave:

P.S. Do me a huge favor and read stars? Thanks!


Sorry if it sucks!

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Posted 15 September 2007 - 12:30 PM

Please include:

Name of Character: Joshua
Gender: Male
Age: 17
Hair Color: Dark Brown
Skin Tone: Pale
Eye Color: Chocolate Brown
Personality: Smart, Quiet, Withdrwn
Which side you want to be on(Good/Bad): Good
Other information you would like to include: Melody, Amy,


Name of Character: Camaron
Gender: male
Age:
Hair Color:
Skin Tone:
Eye Color:
Personality:
Which side you want to be on(Good/Bad):
Other information you would like to include:

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#31 Peachy1214

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Posted 15 September 2007 - 12:48 PM

AIMII-Thanks! I'll try. :)
Sweet Angel-Yay, a new reader! :D I'm glad you like the story! :D
Kayleigh-It doesn't suck :mellow: Okay...so you wanna be a bad guy? Cool, I was sort of scared nobody would wanna be the bad guy. :D
SoccerRules-I understand the first description but not really the second one...could you re-type it please? Thanks! :D

~Peachy :mgwave:
I'll update on Monday or Tuesday! :D

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Posted 15 September 2007 - 01:18 PM

hey....another story !!

i just read stars....both your stories are good !!

update soon !!

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#33 Peachy1214

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Posted 15 September 2007 - 01:32 PM

^I'm glad you like them! ;D

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#34 Peachy1214

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Posted 15 September 2007 - 07:55 PM

Here is the awesome update! (Still a tad bit short but it should get longer..I hope...)

Chapter 2



When I got home I freaked. I seriously think I freaked. I started to scream, I felt so embarrassed. I looked like and idiot in front of Alex! He probably thinks I’m extremely weird now! I screwed up. My mom ran up when she heard me screaming.

“Erica Ann Lavenderson?”

“I’m fine mom sorry just needed to get rid of some stress.”

“Okay…”

Then she left, I decided to take a rest and I slumped onto my bed. Then I had a dream.



“We have to get her now.” James hissed.

“No.”

“We’ve waited for eighteen years.”

“Some thing is not right.”

“Who cares, her blood has been purified now. She’s eighteen now!”

“No! Shut up or Master Satan will destroy you.”





Then I woke up, Satan? Blood? Eighteen? I was eighteen but it was a dream…I’m sure the girl they were referring to in the dream wasn’t me…Or was it? I decided to forget about this dream. Then I walked downstairs, I found my mom on the couch watching Jeopardy! I walked across her and she turned to look at me.

“Dinner’s in the kitchen, dad isn’t home yet.”

“Oh, okay.” I walked into the kitchen and found a slice of pizza on a plate. I popped it into the microwave and heated it up. Then I grabbed it and brought it upstairs. I sat down in front of my computer and checked my email. I had two of them, one from Sierra and one from Cammy, my cousin.



From: Sierra Carlington- CSierraC@email.com
To: Erica Lavenderson- xXEricaXx@email.com
Subject: Hey!

Hey,
Call me, I need help on geography homework!!!

-Si



I clicked on the reply button and started typing. Here is my finished email:


From: Erica Lavenderson- xXEricaXx@email.com
To: Sierra Carlington- CSierraC@email.com
Subject: RE: Hey!

Sierra-

I tried, the phone line is busted. You just want to know where the land marks are right? I’ll just send you the answers.

1. England

2. London

3. Paris

4. China

5. Spain

6. India

7. Canada

8. USA

That’s it, copy them down Si.

-Erica



I pressed the send button and opened Cammy’s email.


From: Cammy- Camcam@email.com
To: Erica Lavenderson- xXEricaXx@email.com
Subject: Photoz

Hey Eric,

Sent u pix from ma trip 2 new york, tak a look!

-Cam



I opened the attachments and saw a picture of Cammy sticking her tongue out, another one with her posing in front of the statue of liberty and one last one of her looking shocked. I replied and said:

To: Cammy- Camcam@email.com
From: Erica Lavenderson- xXEricaXx@email.com
Subject: RE: Photoz


Cammy-

Nice pictures, specially the one of you looking shocked. Looks so real ;)

-Erica




I turned off the computer and finished my pizza quickly, and then I brought my plate downstairs. I was in the kitchen when I heard the door open. Dad was home. I ran into the living room and hugged my dad.

“Hey daddy!”

“Eric!” He smiled and hugged me. Mom walked over and hugged him, we all smiled. Then I walked back upstairs, it was getting late, and I was getting tired. Then I dozed off and had another dream.


“Let her go!” I heard a angelic voice cry, I was trapped in a dark cell.
“Never.” Another voice laughed. I felt weak, deserted and forgotten. I screamed.
“Erica, I’m coming!” The angelic voice screamed, it was clearly far away.
I looked around it was pitch dark, I couldn’t see anything. A split second later a pair of blood red eyes appeared before me.
“Die!”



I woke up panting, I was horrified. It was already six AM, almost time for school. I was too terrified to try and sleep again. I sat quietly on my bed hugging my blue covers. I looked into the mirror in front of my bed, my eyes looked red and puffy and my hair was all messed up. Soon it was 6:30; I walked to the bathroom and combed my hair, brushed my teeth, splashed some cold water on my face and got dressed. I put on a nice light blue t-shirt and camo capris. Then I hopped down the stairs and started to walk downstairs, breakfast was a waste of time to me, I saw Sierra driving. She stopped a few meters in front of me, turned around and shouted.

“Hop on!” I smiled and ran and climbed onto Sierra’s convertible.

“Thanks for the answers yesterday.”

“No problem, that’s what friends are for.” I smiled and stared at the road, she laughed and continued to drive. When we reached the school we walked to our lockers together.

“What do you have today?” she asked.

“History, Art, Music, Algebra then lunch.”

“Awesome, we have history.”

“He’s not interested.” I laughed.

“We’ll have to see.” She smiled and pushed me to history. We sat down and waited for class to begin. Alex walked in and started to walk towards me.

“Hey Erica.” He smiled and sat down.

“H-hey.” I stuttered.

“Finish the homework?”

“Y-yeah.” He chuckled and stared at the chalk board. I felt so embarrassed. I stuttered on everything I said to him! So not cool!

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Posted 15 September 2007 - 08:10 PM

Thanks for updating Peaches,
Sounds great so far can't wait for allt he action though,
I am supposing she is going to get hurt and kidnapped right? :badgrin:
Hmm, Yes I definately like your story alot!
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sorry i messed it up the first time. Here I did it again.
Name of Character: Camaron Perez
Gender: Male
Age: 18
Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: Brown
Skin Tone: Medium -with tan
Personality: Friendly, Happy, Popular
Which side you want to be on(Good/Bad): Bad
Other information you would like to include: he has white teeth :D

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Posted 15 September 2007 - 08:20 PM

Cerra-No problem :D Hmm, the action comes in, in chapter three! :) I can't wait! Yes she gets kidnapped! :D Thanks! I'm glad you like it! Okay now I understand it :D lol he has white teeth!

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#37 Legally_Brunette_60164

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Posted 15 September 2007 - 08:27 PM

Sweetness!!!
Update soon!

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#38 Peachy1214

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Posted 15 September 2007 - 09:09 PM

Thanks! I'll try to update as soon as possible!

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Posted 15 September 2007 - 10:02 PM

Any more comments? Pwease? And I practically begged my mom for ten more minutes so I could work on the update.... :P (Though I have to admit, the next chapter is goood!)

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Posted 15 September 2007 - 10:11 PM

great update !!!

update soon again !! :P

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Posted 16 September 2007 - 12:14 AM

i loved it!!!

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Posted 16 September 2007 - 01:16 PM

Tia-Thanks! I'll try to update, I'm still working on it :D
Sweet_Angel-I'm glad you liked it! I'll try to update as soon as possible!

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Posted 16 September 2007 - 03:50 PM

I don't know why but, the chapters for this story can't get longer... <_< I'll try my best though. Anyways, here's the update!


Chapter 3





That night I laid quietly in my bedroom, Alex was different, very different. But I didn’t know why. Maybe just the fact that he is so hot, gorgeous and perfect in every way. I didn’t understand how that could happen. For someone to be that perfect. But maybe Alex was. Then I heard a sound at my window. I froze. I stared at my window but I couldn’t see what was behind it because of the curtains. I walked slowly to the window, slid open the curtains and saw Alex. I gasped and fell back a few steps. But then I saw a glow around him and a few seconds later he was inside. Inside my bedroom.

“Erica.”

“Oh my goodness. How did you do that? Y-you just came in after you started g-glowing.”

“Um, I’ll tell you later.”

“Now.”

“Later.” He whispered.

“No. Now, or I’ll um tell my parents you’re here.”

“Go ahead but it won’t work.”

“Just tell me.”

“My, you’re so annoying. Fine.”

“Thank you.” I smiled and sat on my bed waiting for a story.

“I’ll tell you the truth, but I don’t think you’ll believe me.”

“I’m ready for anything.”

“Okay, I…I’m an angel.”

“Say what?” I stared at him, at least now I knew how he was so perfect. He was an angel.

“I’m your guardian angel, I was assigned to protect you.”

“And?” I was curious now.

“You’re in danger, come with me, I have to protect you.”

“Wuh? Why do I have to come with you? For all I know you could be lying.”

“I’m not.”

“How would I know you’re not lying about lying?”

“I’ll prove to you I’m an angel, but I’d rather not.”

“Go ahead, prove it.” I stared at him mockingly.

“Okay…” Then Alex started to glow again and light appeared on his head and formed a golden halo.

“Y-you have a-a h-h…”

“Yeah, I have a halo.”

“B-but y-you’re h-h-h….”

“I already told you, I’m not human. I’m an angel. Technically I’m your guardian angel.”

“B-b-but t-that’s not p-possible.”

“Just come with me.” He closed his eyes and he started to glow again, he was human looking again. I was too shocked to object. I nodded.

“Leave a note for your parents.”

“W-why?”

“Just do it.” I wrote a quick note to my parents.





Mom, Dad-

I’m leaving for a few days, weeks, months, I do not know. Please do not worry, I promise to come back.

Love,
Erica




“Okay, lets go.” Alex nodded and grabbed me and we stood in front of my window. He started to glow once again and we were outside standing on the roof of my house. The cold air of the night hit my cheeks like a thousand knives, I started shivering.

“You’re cold?”

“Y-yes.”

“Wait a second.” He whispered. Alex started to glow again, he looked amazing as usual. His blond hair reflecting the light off, I stared at him in awe. A few seconds later I started to glow.

“What’s happening?”

“I’m transferring some of my power to you, it’ll keep you warm.”

“Oh, okay.” Instantly, I felt warmer. He smiled at me.

“Ready?” He asked.

“To do what?”

“To go.”

“Where?”

“Some place safe, for now.”

“Ok.”

“Okay then.” He glowed again and we were on the ground in front of my house. He pointed in front of us. And there parked in font of us was a black 2008 Chevrolet Impala.

“Oh my, how did you get that?”

“I have my ways, get on.” He winked and got onto the driver’s seat. I walked over to the passenger seat and sat down.

“Wait, you’re an angel. Don’t we teleport?”

“Um, we fly…but I’m not allowed to.”

“To fly?”

“Yeah, I can’t risk being seen.”

“Aw, okay.” Then he started the engine of the Impala and he started to drive, I felt safe for once. And I had only known him for three days.

“You said I was um, in danger right?”

“Yes that is correct.”

“From what?” I asked.

“Pardon me?”

“Like, why am I in danger? What is after me?”

“The Devil.”

“Why?”

“Your dream.”

“What dream?”

“Don’t play innocent with me, you had a dream about blood right?”

“Erm, yeah.”

“They want your blood Erica.”

“Oh.” I felt my muscles tense. Did they just want like one drop? Two drops? Or all of my blood?
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Liked it? Please comment, that's not really action...sorry. But it was a cool chapter right? :D

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Posted 16 September 2007 - 03:53 PM

Here is the Black 2008 Impala Alex "magically" made appear :D

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Posted 16 September 2007 - 04:06 PM

Anyone?

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