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#91 Peachy1214

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Posted 17 September 2007 - 01:27 PM

Amanda-Everyone thinks their gonna kiss, so much for my cliffy <_<...oops did I just say that? never mind....;)
Tia-Chris...hmmm, he thinks that his friends would never like his lil sister. He is just so...Chris...lol :D

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#92 Peachy1214

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Posted 17 September 2007 - 01:27 PM

Yay! Third page! I'm so happy :D

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#93 princess2293

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Posted 17 September 2007 - 03:27 PM

Ah!

He's going to kiss her. I know it.

Well, I hope it anyway.

Update soon!!


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#94 lady_in_the_lake101

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Posted 17 September 2007 - 03:50 PM

Ooh I wonder what's going to happen at the park. I hope kissing is going to be involved. Loved the update. Hope you post a new chapter soon...

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#95 SoccerRules

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Posted 17 September 2007 - 04:54 PM

That was a little wierd. :blink:
I mean the story is okay, it's just that,
well, I mean Christopher's attitude.
Serenity's whole purpose in getting to know
Alice in P.E was. . .why?
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*Confused Me*
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#96 Peachy1214

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Posted 17 September 2007 - 07:23 PM

Hope-Maybe...
Joelle-lol everyone guesses kissing :P
Cerra-Serenity got to know Alice during PE? I wrote that? *checks* I did? Chris's attitude? Hmm, he's just being overprotective :P

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#97 roni

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Posted 17 September 2007 - 07:26 PM

updation needed...soon

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#98 SoccerRules

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Posted 17 September 2007 - 07:39 PM

Hope-Maybe...
Joelle-lol everyone guesses kissing :P
Cerra-Serenity got to know Alice during PE? I wrote that? *checks* I did? Chris's attitude? Hmm, he's just being overprotective :P

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Okay I feel dumb right now, I don't know why I asked about Serenity and Alice, sorry. :icon_redface: :blush: :( :o :icon_mecry2:
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#99 Peachy1214

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Posted 17 September 2007 - 07:50 PM

It's okay, you probably got mixed up. :)

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P.S.
I 'tried' to make a cover for Stars...here it is:
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I'm sorry if it's not really good :P The boy is Xander and the girl is Serenity...


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#100 princess2293

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Posted 17 September 2007 - 07:51 PM

It's excellent!

Xander is so hot!

...hope...[With.Love.]

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#101 SoccerRules

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Posted 17 September 2007 - 09:31 PM

It's okay, you probably got mixed up. :)

~Peachy :mgwave:

P.S.
I 'tried' to make a cover for Stars...here it is:
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I'm sorry if it's not really good :P The boy is Xander and the girl is Serenity...

That is so cool Peaches!
You said you made it?
How ?
I think it looks ah-mazing!
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#102 avalonprincess

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Posted 18 September 2007 - 06:28 AM

ohmigod !!!

xander.....xander looks soooo...hot !!

love the cover for stars.....even serenity looks good !!

and you made it ??

thats awesome !!

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P.S- update soon
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#103 Peachy1214

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Posted 18 September 2007 - 09:30 AM

Hope-Thanks! :D
Cerra-Thanks, I used Adobe photoshop :)
Tia-Yeah I made it :D Thanks! :)

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#104 do-or-die

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Posted 18 September 2007 - 11:03 AM

Update, please...

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#105 Peachy1214

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Posted 18 September 2007 - 12:30 PM

Working on the update...I'm trying to write as fast as possible!

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#106 Peachy1214

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Posted 18 September 2007 - 01:07 PM

I think the next update will be the last chapter....

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#107 Peachy1214

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Posted 18 September 2007 - 01:15 PM

K last chapter... :icon_mecry2:

The last chapter. *moment of silence for the fact to sink in* Yeah, it's short but I hope you like it :D

Chapter Seven



“To do this.” I leaned in and kissed Xander on the lips. Then I pulled away to see his reaction. He stared at me in shock and paused. He was silent for a very long time. Then he started to talk.

“Serenity.” I looked at him.

“I guess both of our wishes came true” I looked at him dumbfounded. Did he just say what I heard him say?

“You like me?”

“Yes.”

“You are not joking?”

“No.” My heart was filled with joy, I haven’t been so happy in ages!

“Wow, what an awesome night.”

“Yes.” He smiled and pulled me towards him.


~*~*~*~*~*~*~*


I woke up this morning hearing a light sobbing sound. I opened my eyes and saw Chris walking to the stairs, passing my room. With a hard look on his face. Chris?

“What happened?”

“Oh,” –sniff-“ you’re awake. Nothing, I’m sorry.” He kept walking. Something was wrong.

“Chris, come back.”

“You were right okay? I get it Serenity, no need to rub it in my face.”

“What happened?”

“You knew didn’t you?”

“What?”

“You told me that Alice doesn’t like me, I mean like fine but you didn’t need to tell Will to spread it.”

“So you no popular?”

“Uh, what does this have to do with popular or not? God, Serenity. You’re so stupid.”

“What? I’m just trying to be caring or whatever.”

“Okay, it doesn’t change my popularity Serenity. Not that I care, it’s just that I’m having heart breaks of the century. I get dumped by Jen then rejected by Alice. Can this get any worse?”

“It’s okay Chris, I’ll be there.”

“I’m not a kid Serenity.” With that he stomped off and I got changed. I walked downstairs, Chris was in the car. Doesn’t the guy wait? He drove to school and I saw Xander. I hopped off the car and hugged him.

Nicole’s POV.

A few weeks later…..


Everything is in place now, Chris and I are officially dating now, Serenity and Xander are dating….not that I approve of it or anything but you have to admit that they look cute together.

Serenity’s POV.

I guess wishes do come true. At least for me they did.
~~~~~

I apologize for making Chris sound weird in this chapter...I'm clearly bad at writing from a guy's POV.
So this is the last chapter....I'll ask the mods to move this as soon as some people read it :D

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#108 crouchingtiger18

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Posted 18 September 2007 - 01:16 PM

What?! The last chapter?! Are you talking crazy, Peachy?! :mellow:

You better be! Explain. Now. <_<

Update soon! ^_^

~Amanda :spinstar:

PS: Xander looks like my kinda guy... :heartbeat:

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#109 Peachy1214

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Posted 18 September 2007 - 01:19 PM

Um...*gulps* It is the last chapter....I don't know how to keep on writing this since Xander and Serenity are already together and they already wished upon a star and yeah...I can do a sequel but I need to think about some ideas...give me some time?

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#110 crouchingtiger18

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Posted 18 September 2007 - 01:20 PM

Sorry! Sent that message before your update!

Still I dont understand why your finishing it so quickly! :(

~Amanda x

PS: Great last chappie, though you should have written more detail of Xander and Serenity at the hills!
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#111 crouchingtiger18

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Posted 18 September 2007 - 01:21 PM

Oh, okay. I get it now!
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#112 Peachy1214

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Posted 18 September 2007 - 01:23 PM

I don't really know what else to write about :mellow:, though I can do a sequel about them after...I'm ending this because the title is stars....I already wrote about Stars...I promise I'll do a sequel though :D

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P.S. About more detail on the hill...um...*whispers* I'm not good at writing make out scenes..

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#113 Peachy1214

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Posted 18 September 2007 - 01:25 PM

Oh, okay. I get it now!

Wah? So...now I don't get it... :S

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#114 Peachy1214

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Posted 18 September 2007 - 01:27 PM

I keep forgetting things...sorry for the multiple posts. Last one in a row! I promise!
Since I finished Stars, I'm going to work on My Guardian Angel more. That's all so read it? Please?

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#115 princess2293

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Posted 18 September 2007 - 03:28 PM

You should make a sequal where Xander and Serenity are going out but somebody else wants Xander and will do anything to get him... *duh duh duh*

It'd be pretty sweet!

But I can't believe its over! It was so good!


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#116 Legally_Brunette_60164

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Posted 18 September 2007 - 03:30 PM

IT'S OVER???
You should so totally make a sequal where like 5 years later...

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#117 Peachy1214

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Posted 18 September 2007 - 03:49 PM

Hope-Oh, okay. Great Idea I'll think about it :D
Kayleigh-Yeah, five years seems like alot...maybe 2 or three years?

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#118 Legally_Brunette_60164

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Posted 18 September 2007 - 03:56 PM

The only reason was because like they married, Serenity married Wil and she runs into Xander and he wants her back!

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#119 Peachy1214

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Posted 18 September 2007 - 03:58 PM

^Why Will?

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Posted 18 September 2007 - 03:59 PM

Any of Xanders friends.
They backstabbed him, really had a dying love for Serenity for like ever.

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#121 Legally_Brunette_60164

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Posted 18 September 2007 - 04:00 PM

How do do the covers?

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#122 Peachy1214

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Posted 18 September 2007 - 04:10 PM

Kayleigh-Oh, I see. I'll think about it too :D. The covers...first I find all the pictures I want. I open Adobe Photoshop and open a base background. Then I open one of the pictures-for exampel the cover for stars I opened the space background then I opened a picture of Drew Fuller(Xander) and used the move tool(the black cursor thing with a plus thingy) to drag Drew's picure onto the space back ground.- then you click on the eraser tool and put it on 200 first and roughly erase most of the background of the first picture. Then use a smaller eraser to do the details and erase the rest until you've cut out the whole object. (make sense so far? I hope so...I'm sorry if it doesn't) Then you post all of the pictures and repeat the erasing steps. Then add the text and you're done :D Also, if you would like to blend it then select a decor or something and using the move tool drag it on to the bas background with the pictures and on the layers menu the scroll thing that says normal. change it to screen but make sure you're highlighting the decor. Thats it. I hope it makes sense, if it doesn't you can go to youtube and search how to make blends. :)

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#123 Legally_Brunette_60164

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Posted 18 September 2007 - 04:12 PM

YOur good at computers, aren't you?
Well, I"ll try...

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#124 Peachy1214

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Posted 18 September 2007 - 04:15 PM

^Um I don't know. I just learn stuff from my dad. He writes programs, webstie things and yeah so he teaches me this kind of stuff. :D

By the way, it would make me reallly happy if more people would read My Guardian Angel. Please?

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#125 pupcraze

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Posted 19 September 2007 - 05:14 AM

new reader, i really like your story Peachy
update last chapter soon
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#126 avalonprincess

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Posted 19 September 2007 - 06:32 AM

no.....this can`t be.....you ended it sooo.....soon !!!

no fair !! * pouts *

you have to write a seqeul....please.....preety please with cherries on top !!!!

i`m gonna miss this story !!

love you, peachy !!

do think about writing a seqeul !!!

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#127 Peachy1214

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Posted 19 September 2007 - 09:25 AM

Pupcraze-Yay awesome a new reader! :D I already put the last chapter up. :)
Tia-Okay, I'm gonna write a sequel :D I got all the ideas ready (with the help of you guys :D Thanks!) I just need a title and I'll start writing!

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#128 Peachy1214

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Posted 19 September 2007 - 09:33 AM

This is going to be transferred to the completed stories :D If you need to contact me before I start the sequel for whatever reason, find me here:D

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#129 Peachy1214

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Posted 19 September 2007 - 11:42 AM

The sequel is up! Here

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Posted 19 September 2007 - 12:06 PM

shes totlaly going to kiss him!
i hope.....
because if she dosent i will ;)
update soon

roni


LMAO
your soooooooooooooo funny roni!

why was that your last chapter peachy?
did you bang your head REALLY hard o something?
or did roni push you down a flight of stairs?
how rude of her
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#131 Peachy1214

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Posted 19 September 2007 - 07:25 PM

I couldn't think of anything else to write. Sorry, there's always the sequel! :D

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#132 HoplessRomantic02

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Posted 21 September 2007 - 08:23 PM

Xander is the grown up Will from Charmedddddddd!! I love Charmed!

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#133 Peachy1214

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Posted 22 September 2007 - 12:41 PM

Um, I think so. I used Drew Fuller :D

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#134 takari28

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Posted 13 March 2010 - 12:50 PM

This is a really
great story.
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Posted 09 May 2012 - 06:31 AM

One word: CUTE!!!!

I loved this story!! You are an amazing writer!!


I'm so happy for Nicole and Chris. They are both amazing characters!!

Xander and Seren just go along so well!!! It's

- Yuyu💛💙💜💗💚❤
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