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#46 Legally_Brunette_60164

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Posted 14 September 2007 - 04:09 PM

The only one I can find is at my local library. And that's number 5!
Update soon1

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#47 Peachy1214

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Posted 14 September 2007 - 04:22 PM

The only one I can find is at my local library. And that's number 5!
Update soon1

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O, aww. I'm sorry. :( I'll update as soon as more people comment. :D

One more thing...

SECOND PAGE!! YES! (This is my first story that has reached a second page, you can understand how happy I am right now!)

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#48 Angel15073

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Posted 14 September 2007 - 04:55 PM

That was great!!!!!! I love this story please update soon.



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#49 Peachy1214

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Posted 14 September 2007 - 05:03 PM

Thanks! I'm planning on updating this tomorrow!

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Posted 14 September 2007 - 05:10 PM

Heheh. Hey, Peachy, do you have some sort of obsession with the name Alexander? :mellow:

I mean, don't get me wrong it's one of my favorite guy names, but I'm just wondering since in your other story the main guy's name is "Alex" and in this one it's "Xander." So yeah.

Have a wonderful Friday! :D
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#51 Peachy1214

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Posted 14 September 2007 - 05:16 PM

nope not really I just think it would match the characters. lol I just realized that thanks for pointing it out! :D
Have a nice weekend too :)

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#52 Peachy1214

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Posted 14 September 2007 - 07:27 PM

I'm so nice :D

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Chapter four
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I woke up next morning, I felt incredibly sick. Chris is so not going to be happy about me not going to school, but I am just feeling horrible so I don’t think one day would count matter too much. I walked downstairs to tell Chris.

“I’m not feeling well…”

“You need to stay home eh? Okay then I’ll grab your homework for you and you stay here and rest.” Wow, that was easy. Usually I had beg Chris to let me stay home. Wow, he must be in a good mood or something. I decided to go back to bed. I dozed off for a few hours and realized it was already four O clock. I looked around the house for Chris. He wasn’t there. I found a note on his bedroom door.



Gone to Cameron’s. Sorry Seren, I made spaghetti. It’s in the microwave. See you.


-Chris



Okay then…I finished eating the spaghetti and decided to go on the computer.

Seren has just signed in.


Then two convos popped up. One from Nicole and one from Xander. I opened the one from Xander first.

Xander: Hey

Seren: Hi

I minimized Xander’s window and opened Nicole’s.

Nicky: oh my god where were you today? I was so bored!

Seren: Sorry, felt like crap today.

Nicky: Oh, fever? Cramps? What?

Seren: I have no clue.

Then Xander’s window started flashing, I opened it up.

Xander:
What’s up?

Xander: Why weren’t you at school today?

Seren: Sorry, felt really sick today.

Xander: Aww, feel better kay?

Seren: Sure, I’ll try ;)


Nicole….

Nicky: You know that friend of yours?

Seren: Which one?

Nicky: Zander…yea that one!

Seren: Xander.

Nicky: Oops yea him.

Seren: What about him?

Nicky: Why does he hang around us?

Seren: No clue, Chris’s friends…

Nicky: I see. Where is Chris, he’s not online.

Seren: Why do you care…*snorts*

Nicky: Serenity…you know why I care.

Seren: Fine, fine, he is at….

Nicky: WHERE?

Seren: Er…umm…uhh…

Nicky: Just spill already.

Seren: Cameron’s

Nicky: Oh.

Seren: What? You think he’s visiting Jen or something? XD

Nicky: Er..um no.

Seren: You’re hilarious!


Xander….

Xander: Are you still there?

Xander: You’re ignoring me aren’t you?

Xander: Why?

Xander: Hmm?

Seren: Whoa slow down, I’m not ignoring you. I was talking to Nicole.

Xander: Muffy?

Seren: Nicole…

Xander: I know! Muffy!

Seren: Her name is Nicole.

Xander: I call her Muffy.

Seren: Okay?

Xander: She looks like Muffy?

Seren: Who the hel* is Muffy?

Xander: My ex.

Seren: Nicole is your ex?

Xander: oh my god NO! I would never go out with her! I just said she looks like Muffy, my ex.

Seren: Okay, what’s wrong with Nicole?

Xander: She’s so…weird…

Nicole…

Nicky: I am?

Seren: Yesh, do you have a thing with Xander or something? He seems to dislike you.

Nicky: If you count spilling a drink on him and him calling me a Bitc* then I guess yes.

Seren: Wow, and I was only gone for a day.

Nicky: Yeah…


Then Chris came home, I had to sign off.

Seren: Gotta go, Chris is home!!!

Nicky: Buh Bye!

Xander…

Seren: I have to go! See you tomorrow, unless I’m sick again :P

Xander: Bye.

Seren has signed off.

I ran downstairs and saw Chris by the door.

“Christopher!”

“Mom?”

“No, it’s me dumb dumb.”

“Oh, sorry I came back so late.”

“It’s okay pudding boy.”

“Pudding?”

“I don’t know, just felt like calling you that.”

“Okay then.” He walked upstairs and I heard his door close. I sighed and ran back to my room.

I woke up the next morning with Chris practically slapping my butt.

“God Chris, why are you slapping my as*?”

“Oops, sorry. Thought it was your back. Didn’t know you were that short. Today’s Friday. Coming to school?”

“Sure, fine whatever.” I pushed him away from my bedroom and changed and brushed my teeth. I ran downstairs.

“Chris, I’m gonna be in the car.”
“Kay.” I ran outside and climbed into the car. Chris climbed in a second later and he started driving.


Chris’s POV.

I entered my classroom and sat down with my usual friends, Xander, William, Michael and John. We started to talk about the History assignment that was due today and then a girl walked in. She looked incredible. Her long black hair fell lightly on her shoulders her eyes were enchanting. Then Ms. Cemard walked in and introduced her.

“Hello class, we have a new student today. Her name is Alice Cammison, please show her around if she needs help.” Then Alice smiled and Ms. Cemard told her to sit in the desk behind me. I swear I saw her wink at me when she walked past me. William and the guys looked at me with weird faces when I smiled at Alice. When it was lunch I saw Alice in the halls, it was going to be a great chance to get to know her!

“Hey, I’m Chris.” I smiled and stuck out a hand.

“I’m Alice Cammison.” She smiled in reply and shook my hand.

“Would you like to sit with my sister and I at lunch?”

“Um, sure.” I walked with her to Serenity’s table. Serenity gave me a ‘what? Who is that?’ look. I decided to introduce Alice.

“Hey guys, this is Alice Cammison.” Alice smiled and sat down next to me. I saw Nicole staring at me with a strange look. What’s with her?

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Like it? Please comment. It motivates me! ;)

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#53 lady_in_the_lake101

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Posted 14 September 2007 - 09:47 PM

*New Reader*
So I guess I'm the first one to comment on your new update. It was really. So is the rest of your story. It's actually quite different from some of the stories on this site which makes even better. Update soon...

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#54 luving_all_american_girl

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Posted 14 September 2007 - 11:42 PM

Whoa. I can't believe I have missed so many chapters.
I am sure Xander had a thing on Seren.
Ha Ha.
And Nicole had a thing on Chris.
There are so many 'things'.
Ha Ha.

Update soon.

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#55 crouchingtiger18

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Posted 15 September 2007 - 06:26 AM

Hey!

Told you I was checking this story out! :D

This is a really good story, please update soon, and I'm glad you like True Love Knows No Boundries :heartbeat:

Please update soon! :icon_study:

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#56 Legally_Brunette_60164

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Posted 15 September 2007 - 10:35 AM

It was great!
But I have a feeling that Alice will become the new queen b.itch.
Update soon!

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Posted 15 September 2007 - 10:56 AM

NEW READER! This is awesome!

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Posted 15 September 2007 - 11:16 AM

So peachy, when are you going to update? :D
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Posted 15 September 2007 - 12:56 PM

OHHH! Is someone writing an update? (jumps in the air) She is She is! And Xander and Seren will live happily ebver after!

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#60 Peachy1214

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Posted 15 September 2007 - 12:56 PM

Joelle-Yeah you're first one, thanks!
Ela-lol true, so many things... :D
Amanda-Yay, cool! True Love Knows No Boundries is cool :D Please update it! :)
Kayleigh-Thanks! Really? Alice seems like that? lol I had no idea, I just wanted to make it so that Chris has a short term crush on her... ;)
Maddie-Yay a new reader! Thanks, I'm glad you like it! :)
Cerra-Hmm...maybe when I get home, I'm at the library now :D

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#61 Legally_Brunette_60164

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Posted 15 September 2007 - 12:57 PM

Joelle-Yeah you're first one, thanks!
Ela-lol true, so many things... :D
Amanda-Yay, cool! True Love Knows No Boundries is cool :D Please update it! :)
Kayleigh-Thanks! Really? Alice seems like that? lol I had no idea, I just wanted to make it so that Chris has a short term crush on her... ;)
Maddie-Yay a new reader! Thanks, I'm glad you like it! :)
Cerra-Hmm...maybe when I get home, I'm at the library now :D

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No, she doesn't seem like it.
But that's how most new students like that end up, right?

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Posted 15 September 2007 - 01:05 PM

hey * new reader *

this story is great !!!

chris is such a sweet brother.....and xander`s nice too !!

love this story !!

update soon again !!!

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#63 Peachy1214

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Posted 15 September 2007 - 01:15 PM

Kayleigh-Oh, okay then. Though you are correct...new students usually get a quick ticket to the popular crowd, but I promise that Alice is going to be really nice :D
Tia-Yay another new reader! I'm so happy :) *feels all warm and fuzzy inside* I'm glad you like this story! :D

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Posted 15 September 2007 - 03:31 PM

Oooh. -points- You update faster. I like it! :D
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#65 Peachy1214

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Posted 15 September 2007 - 06:00 PM

^Thanks, I try my best to update everyday unless I'm really busy. :D

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#66 Peachy1214

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Posted 15 September 2007 - 06:45 PM

A little spoiler about Chris-
Spoiler


That's all.. ;)

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Posted 15 September 2007 - 06:47 PM

Alice!!!!!

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#68 Peachy1214

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Posted 15 September 2007 - 07:00 PM

Spoiler
, Alice-my best friend- and I decided it would be fun to
Spoiler
. Sorry all Chris lovers!

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#69 Peachy1214

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Posted 15 September 2007 - 07:06 PM

hmm, when I finish updating My Guardian Angel. I'm almost done My Guardian Angel's update so I think I should update Stars tomorrow or on Monday. :D

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Posted 15 September 2007 - 09:28 PM

Finished the update early...couldn't resist....posting update now...



Chapter Five


Nicole’s POV.




I couldn’t believe what just happened. Chris brought a new girl to our table. Alice Cammison or something. I think he likes her. She is quite pretty, like Serenity. Serenity and Alice are the only people I’ve ever been jealous of. Serenity because Chris is her brother and she gets to see him everyday. Alice because well it looks like Chris like her. But I couldn’t dislike Alice, she’s just the person that once you look at her you can’t hate her. I may be jealous of her but I do not hate her. I decided to talk to her.

“Hey Alice, I’m Nicole. You can call me Nicky.”

“Hey.” She smiled and got up.

“I’m going to go get a coke.” Said Alice, then Chris got up.

“Do you know where the machine is? I can show you.” She giggled and nodded. Chris and Alice walked out of the cafeteria. I turned to Serenity to see what she thought of the new girl.

“Seren? New girl?”

“She’s nice, Chris seems to like her.”

“Uh, yeah.”

“Oh, yeah.” She remembered that I liked Chris.

“I’m sure only as a friend. By the way, have you seen Xander?” I sighed and told her where Mr. Annoying was.


Chris’s POV.


I walked to my gym after lunch and realized that Alice had gym too! Yay! We’re both in the same class of History and Gym! I walked coolly into the change room and changed into our regulation gym wear. Navy blue shorts and a white t-shirt with our school logo on it. The warm-up was to run laps around the school. I ran outside with my friends trailing behind me. I ran as fast as I could, soon Alice caught up to me.

“Hey.” She smiled.

“Hi.” I smiled at her and kept running. She looked so pretty, her dark black hair tied up in a long pony tail. She tried to keep up with me so I slowed down.

“Thanks.” She giggled and ran even faster, faster than me. I stared in shock and started to run in full speed. I finally caught up to her and I looked at her.

“Catch me if you can!” Then I sprinted in front of her. Leaving William, John, and Michael running by themselves. She caught up to me again.

“This won’t be easy.” She whispered and tried to sprint ahead of me, but I ran before she got a chance. Finally when it was time to stop we both laughed and went back inside with Will, John, and Michael.

“You interested in that chick?” Asked John.

“Hmm, you guess.” I winked and walked over to talk to Will.

“What are we doing today?” I asked.

“Coach says football practice after school.”

“Oh, aw.” I sighed and we started the activities.


Serenity’s POV.



When school ended Chris told me he had football practice. Perfect. Now I have to sit for two hours watching guys in tights tackle each other. But then Xander offered me ride. It was obviously better than sitting on those wooden bleachers watching my brother tackle other guys in tights. So I accepted and climbed onto his convertible. I’m glad Xander didn’t play football.

“So, wanna listen to some music?”

“Sure.” I smiled and Xander flipped through his CDs. He saw one and picked out an Avril Lavigne’s The Best Dam* Thing.

“Like it? My cousin gave it to me, apparently she thought I was into this kind of music.”

“Sure.” I laughed. He looked at me weirdly and put it in. When we reached my house I got off the car and walked to the door.

“Thanks.” I smiled

“No problem.” He smiled and drove away and left me feeling incredible. I realized three things that evening. One, I think I was developing a crush on Xander. Second, Xander is as old as my brother and would never be interested in a young girl like me. Third, Chris wouldn’t approve. At least I think not. I ran up to my room and worked check my email, I was too tired to go on MSN. I found one email, Xander sent it to me.



From: Xander Cummings- xboyxrocker@email.com
To: Serenity Faith- angelicfathom@email.com
Subject: Hill

Hey Serenity,

Meet me on the hill at Erin Dale Park, tomorrow, 9:00 PM.

Xander




I wonder why. But I decided to go anyways.



My reply:



To: Xander Cummings- xboyxrocker@email.com
From: Serenity Faith- angelicfathom@email.com
Subject: RE: Hill

Xander,

Sure. :D

-Serenity




I sent it and started to surf the net. But one thing was still on my mind. Why did Xander want me to meet him on the hill tomorrow?
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Pretty short eh? I wanted this chapter and the next chapter to be short, especially the next one, so I could make one cliffy. Sorry guys, I guess I'm being evil. But since it's going to be a short update I should post it either tomorrow or monday. :D

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Posted 15 September 2007 - 09:33 PM

yes!
a wonderful update!
please update soon

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#72 lady_in_the_lake101

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Posted 15 September 2007 - 09:41 PM

Update as soon as you can. Man that is evil and plus you are letting us know in advance that there is going to be a cliffy. You might be evil (not to much :P ) but your story is great. Can't wait to read more...

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#73 Peachy1214

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Posted 15 September 2007 - 10:00 PM

Roni-Thanks! I'm glad you liked it :D
Joelle-Okay, I'll try my best. Yupie I'm evil aren't I? lol :)

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Posted 16 September 2007 - 01:13 AM

Nice update. :)
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Posted 16 September 2007 - 10:02 AM

he wants to meet her ??

i wonder why too...

update soon again !!

loved the update !!

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#76 Peachy1214

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Posted 16 September 2007 - 01:18 PM

Cerra-Thanks!
Tia-Yup I wonder why too....:P

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#77 Peachy1214

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Posted 16 September 2007 - 01:47 PM

Here's a teaser:

(It's in Chris's POV.")

“WHAT?” She stared at me with eyes the size of watermelons.

“I’m doing this for your own good, you’ll thank me one day.”

“AS IF!”

“Listen to me Serenity Diana Faith.”

“I’m going no matter what Mr. Christopher Matthew Faith.”

“You do not call me by my full name missy.”

“Oh yeah?”

“Yes, now go to your room.”

“Who are you? My mom? Baby sitter?”

I posted a teaser since I wanted to update My Guardian Angel first.

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Posted 16 September 2007 - 03:13 PM

Great!
Update soon!

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Posted 16 September 2007 - 03:55 PM

^Thanks! ;) By the way, I updated My Guardian Angel. :D Read it?
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Posted 17 September 2007 - 06:10 AM

Wow! Great update!

Oooh...Serene & Xander sitting in a tree, K-I-S-S-I-N-G :D

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#81 lady_in_the_lake101

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Posted 17 September 2007 - 07:20 AM

I don't want a teaser I want an update *starts to pout* Nah I'm just kidding. But I do want you to update soon...

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#82 Peachy1214

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Posted 17 September 2007 - 09:05 AM

Amanda-lol :)
Joelle-I'll try to update today, but I'm not really supposed to be on right now...shhh :P

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Posted 17 September 2007 - 09:12 AM

Oh, that was such an evil cliffie...

I beg of you to update, pwease?

Please?

I'll cry if you don't-- :icon_mecry2:

And I'll give you a smile and an ice-cream if you update!-- :D & :mgicecream:

Please update soon...

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Posted 17 September 2007 - 09:15 AM

yeah, shhh....don`t worry we won`t tell....lol !!

but please do update today....am dying to know why xander wants to meet her....and about the teaser too !!

update soon !!

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Posted 17 September 2007 - 09:50 AM

Muhahaha, if you hated me for the last cliffy you will hate me even more for this one! Sorry, I just want to make this story interesting.

Chapter six



Chris’s POV.




Seren is acting all weird today. It annoys me. She’s basically ‘trying’ to hide something from me. But I think I know what it’s about. Xander. He told me yesterday that Seren was going to be meeting him at Erin Dale Park. I was like, what? Serenity is not going to want to go to this thing, I know she has a crush on my buddy Xander, I bet he totally does not like her. Seren has to prepare herself for the heart break of the century. I feel so sorry for her.

“Chris, where are the keys? I need them tonight?”

“Why?” I raised my eyebrows at her, she is so going to admit it!

“I’m going somewhere.”

“Where?”

“God, Chris you’re annoying.”

“Tell me or you don’t get them.”

“I’m er meeting er Xander at um Erin Dale Park um tonight.”

“I see, why?”

“I um have no clue.” She answered. Poor thing, she’s going to get rejected tonight! I have to stop her from going, she’ll thank me for this some day.

“Okay then, you can’t go.”

“WHAT?” She stared at me with eyes the size of watermelons.

“I’m doing this for your own good, you’ll thank me one day.”

“AS IF!”

“Listen to me Serenity Diana Faith.”

“I’m going no matter what Mr. Christopher Matthew Faith.”

“You do not call me by my full name missy.”

“Oh yeah?”

“Yes, now go to your room.”

“Who are you? My mom? Baby sitter?”

“I’m your older brother and mom and dad left ME in charge while they were gone.”

“Whatever, no wonder Alice doesn’t like you.” Alice doesn’t like me? Seren is just trying to make me mad, calm down Chris.

“You know what? Just go to your room Serenity.” She glared at me for a few seconds and stomped up the stairs and I heard her door slam shut. Serenity seriously has a attitude problem, I remember when she was in kindergarten she slapped me because I dropped her teddy bear on the floor, then I went to mom and I suggested that Serenity get a therapist. I ran up to my room and logged onto MSN. Serenity was sure to be on!



Christopher has just signed in.





Xander was on, Nicole was on, Alice was on, Serenity was on, William, John, and Michael…wait…Alice was on? When did I add her? Hmm, whatever. I clicked on Alice and Xander, separate conversations.

Christopher: Hey.

Allie: Hi 

Christopher: How’d you get my MSN?

Allie: Serenity.

Christopher: Cool.

Allie: ;)

Christopher: :D


I minimized Alice’s conversation and opened Xander’s.



Christopher: Xander.

Xander: Hey.

Christopher: Why do you want Seren to meet you tonight?



No reply for 1 second….2..3..4…4..5..6, then he logged off. I decided to click on Serenity.



Christopher: Serenity.

Seren:
What?

Christopher: Good.

Seren: What?

Christopher: You’re still here.

Seren: oh my god You idio* decided to come on and rub it in my face that I can’t go?

Christopher: Erm, no.


Then she logged off. I heard her scream from her room. I laughed.


Serenity’s POV.




Chris is like such a %*&#&%$!!! I was going to sneak out tonight. He would never know, I’ll lock my bedroom door and sneak out from my window. When I opened the window, the cold air hit my face. I shivered and went back in to get a sweater and some warmer clothes. I decided to run to Erin Dale Park since I couldn’t get the keys. Finally when I reached there I saw Xander. Sitting on the hill looking as stunning as ever. I ran over to him.

“Hey.” I smiled.

“Hey, I thought you couldn’t come.” I frowned.

“I snuck out.”

“Oh…what?”

“I snuck out.”

“Chris will kill me.” He stared at me.

“Why’d you tell me to come out today?”

“Stars.”

“What?”

“Do you believe in wishing upon a star?”

“Not really.”

“Try it.”

“Um, okay.” I made a wish.

“What did you wish for?”

“Courage.”

“For what?”

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Liked it? I'm sure this is probably the most evil cliffy and the shortest chapter.
Don't hate me! I'll try to update!

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#86 roni

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Posted 17 September 2007 - 09:55 AM

shes totlaly going to kiss him!
i hope.....
because if she dosent i will ;)
update soon

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#87 do-or-die

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Posted 17 September 2007 - 11:47 AM

“Courage.”

“For what?”



Umm...was "Courage." Said by Xander? If yes then I am sure he is going to kiss her, I am like so sure! Though, I still wish they kiss...

Though you updated!!! Now here's your ice-cream--- :mgicecream: , your smile--- :D and also a :dog: cute dog!!! Plus a another reader--- :icon_study:

Update soon

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#88 Peachy1214

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Posted 17 September 2007 - 12:08 PM

Courage was said by Serenity. Yum, and ice-cream! Thanks for the doggy! So cute! :D

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#89 crouchingtiger18

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Posted 17 September 2007 - 01:09 PM

Great update! Yeah I still think they're gonna kiss...Update soon!
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#90 avalonprincess

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Posted 17 September 2007 - 01:21 PM

peachy, you are sooo.. evil...how could you leave us hanging like that???

i think they`re gonna kiss too...

but why does chris feel that xander does`nt like her??

i hope nothing bad happens * crosses finger *

oh yeah and great update !! :D

update soon again !!

:spinstar: Tia :spinstar:

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