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Poll: Hate or love? (147 member(s) have cast votes)

How do they really feel about each other?

  1. Prue Hate (5 votes [3.40%])

    Percentage of vote: 3.40%

  2. Madly in Love (127 votes [86.39%])

    Percentage of vote: 86.39%

  3. Have not idea (15 votes [10.20%])

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#91 noleey

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Posted 20 July 2007 - 09:22 AM

Really good :). I can't wait for the next update; what did she say to Craig at the party?
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#92 roni

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Posted 20 July 2007 - 09:34 AM

eek!
i loved it!
they almost kissed!

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#93 little rascal

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Posted 20 July 2007 - 10:37 AM

Nice update. They were about to kiss *startes doing happy dance* *notices people are looking at me weird* Yeah anyway Please update again soon and there was only one minor mistake: I got her pinned up agent [against] the counter.

Please update.

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#94 puppy_lover

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Posted 20 July 2007 - 10:39 AM

Yay they almost kissed

That means their one step closer to falling madly in love

Please update

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#95 CatPalas

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Posted 20 July 2007 - 10:40 AM

More! Please!

Update soon!

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Posted 20 July 2007 - 11:23 AM

*squeals* Vince and Zoey are sooo going to get closer being alone in the same house...(yeah, bad grammar, lol) but I'm sooo excited!

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P.S. Update soon!

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#97 Britt~Britt

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Posted 20 July 2007 - 03:43 PM

AAAAAAAH!!!!! THEY ALMOST KISSED!! YIPEEEEE!!!
Ok. I'm done screaming now lol
But, yeah they are totally in love with each other and they need to kiss/makeout real soon lol
Awesome update but you have to update soon so we know what happens!!!
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#98 HoplessRomantic02

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Posted 20 July 2007 - 05:00 PM

finally! cant wait 4 the next update. :D
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#99 Calibabe

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Posted 20 July 2007 - 05:59 PM

**new reader**
really nice story.
I would love to read more soon ;)


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Posted 20 July 2007 - 06:09 PM

Aw, wonderful update! They almost kissed, yay!! :love7: But I totally want to hear what Vince Vince has to say during that phone call, so update soon, please!!
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#101 I_LuV_jAkE

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Posted 20 July 2007 - 06:44 PM

That was awsome!!!
Just one thing, what exacly hapenned between Craig and Zoey at the graduation party? Did they fight?
Update soon..
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#102 FabulousChick13

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Posted 20 July 2007 - 07:33 PM

loved it!!! update again soon


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#103 JustlikeJess

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Posted 20 July 2007 - 10:29 PM

Holy Gothic Turtle!!! They almost kissed! Update soon!

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#104 xxluv heather wells bksxx

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Posted 20 July 2007 - 10:37 PM

*New Reader* I LOVE this story! You HAVE to update soon xoxoIonexoxo
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Posted 21 July 2007 - 02:46 PM

Thanks for loving the update and my story!

You will find out why she's so mad right now.

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Vince’s POV

After I got more ice, I heard someone else come in. I need to lock the door.

“Dude what’s for dinner?” Henry yelled as he flew trough the front door. He was followed by the twins Tray and Tony. Great three more,

“Guys my moms not here to cook,” They plopped down on the couch. Not even caring that it wasn’t my couch.

“Dude, isn’t this the couch that was in Zoey’s house?” Henry asked, rubbing the cushions.

“How would you know that?” Jay asked. Henry wiggled his eye brows. “You know what we don’t even want to know,” He was a liar; he had only know that it was her couch from the graduation party.

“Guys what you want on your pizza?” I asked as I looked at the menu.

“Pepper’s,” Jay said.

“Jalapeños,” Henry said.

“Ok let me call Zoey and see if she’s going to be eating with us,” I said. Once I said this I felt I a total idiot.

“Got to call the wife,” Henry said.

“No, I just don’t feel like a fight tonight. My head hurts too much,” I saw Jay nudge Henry and raise his eye brow.

“No! They didn’t,” Henry said.

“That’s right we didn’t!” I yelled at them. They were acting like little girls. I knew Zoey would say she did care what was on the pizza so I called and placed an order.

“Zoey, are you coming back for dinner?” I said when Zoey picked up.

“Yeah, I haven’t left the parking lot,” She said sounding embarrassed.

“I’m ordering pizza. What do you want on it?” I didn’t say anything about not leaving the parking lot.

“I don’t care. I’ll pick it up,” I knew it. I hung up and went in to the living room with the guys.

“Man you sound like-,” Zoey walked in the door.

“Quiet a gang you have here. I need money,” She stuck her hand out to me. I pulled out my wallet. I gave her a credit card.

“Sweet,” She said.

“Buy the pizza. But after that I want it back,” She rolled her eyes and went out the door.

“Dude your acting like-” Tray said.

“You’re married,” Henry finished.

“Would you stopping saying I’m married?”

“They were about to kiss when I walked in,” Jay said.

“I told you to keep your mouth shut!”

“Sorry,” He put his hands up innocently. I sat down in a chair.

“Seriously?” Henry asked in a low voice.

“Yeah,” I whispered. I put my head down in my hands.

“You and Zoey kiss? You two are like a laptop and water. One touches the other and they blow up,” Tray said.

“Thanks for the pep talk it really make me feel better Tray,” I said sarcastically.

“Pizza’s here,” Zoey said. She had four pizzas in her hands.

“Food!” Jay said. The guys ran to Zoey. The pizza was gone in no more then 10 minutes. We all crashed in the living room. Jay, Tray, and Tony were on the couch, Henry was in a chair, and Zoey and I were lying on the floor.

“Dude put in a movie,” Jay said. Zoey grabbed a box and started to look through it.

“How’s Employee of the Month sound?” She asked holding it up.

“Awesome,” The twins said. Zoey put it in the DVD player wail I got up, turned the light off, and closed the blinds on the glass door.

“Someone wants it dark in here,” I kicked Jay as I got back on the floor.

We were watching previews when Craig walked in.
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Zoey’s POV

Just has we got the movie in Craig walked in. Why can’t he just stay away? He knows Vince and I live in the same house and that I don’t want to be around him. When my dad walked in on us last week I was relived because no madder what I was saying Craig wouldn’t get off of me.

“What’s up man?” He said to Vince. “Hey Zoey,” He said, eyeing me up.

“I don’t feel like a movie anymore,” I said as I got up.

“Aww, why not?” He asked. I looked down at Vince for a half second and continued to get up.

“Craig you’re not welcome here,” Vince said. What was Vince saying Craig had been his best friend since…I don’t know?

“What do you mean?” Craig asked stunned.

“I said you’re not welcome in my house,” Vince jumped to his feet.

“It’s not just your house, Zoey do you want me to leave?” I stood there with my arms crossed. I just nodded. I was afraid that if I talked then I would cry.

“I don’t believe this man,” Craig said.

“Get out,” Vince said raising his voice slightly.

“Fine I’m out,” Craig said heading to the door. “Man, I thought you were better then this,” Vince flowed him out and shut the door behind them.
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Vince’s POV

“Why are you kicking me out?” Craig asked as soon as we got outside. “Why are you so mad?”

“Look man this is how mad I am just by seeing how hurt she is. I haven’t even heard what you did to make her that hurt. You better get far from this house. As soon as I go back in there I am going to find out what you did. If you are out here after I find out, you won’t be the same when I get done with you. I have four other guys in there I am sure would chose Zoey’s side not yours after the look on her face in there,” I didn’t even wait for an answer I went straight back in to the house.

“What did he do to you?” I screamed at Zoey.
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any correction please tell me. I read this one over and over last night but I miss little things likes caption and stool.

The last part, if it confussing im sorry. I tryed my hardist to make it understandable.

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#106 little rascal

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Posted 21 July 2007 - 03:42 PM

I understood the last part perfectly fine. That was a really good update. Please Update again soon I love this story.

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#107 annie_2011

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Posted 21 July 2007 - 03:47 PM

love the update!
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#108 FabulousChick13

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Posted 21 July 2007 - 04:23 PM

awesome!!! I totally got the last part....you have to update again soon!!!! PLEASE!

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#109 iluvmichael!!!

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Posted 21 July 2007 - 05:21 PM

your story is amazing! And your right, there was still a few minor mistakes but u have the kind of story that is so good I don't want to pick it apart looking 4 them. I luv this story and I can't w8 2 see what happens nxt!!! Please upd8 soon because I just read the whole thing today and I luv it!!! :a_smil08:
*new reader*
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#110 little rascal

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Posted 21 July 2007 - 05:23 PM

I will tell you this so the mods do not have to repeat it- hopefully.

Please do not use chatspeak it makes the boards look bad.

Thank You.

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#111 roni

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Posted 21 July 2007 - 07:08 PM

i loved it!
update soon!

miss hasta
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#112 Esdroper

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Posted 22 July 2007 - 12:15 AM

Ashley- feeew, glad its not confussing.

annie- Thanks!

Mandi- glad you got it.

Cheyenne- new reader yay!

miss hasta- glad you like it

update today or monday

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#113 beckii

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Posted 22 July 2007 - 12:45 AM

update update update!!!
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#114 XOQueridaOX

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Posted 22 July 2007 - 12:58 AM

Oh. My. God. Please update sooonn!!!!
P.S.I lvoe vince, he's s osweet and so worried fo are her!:)
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#115 evie

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Posted 22 July 2007 - 02:17 AM

update
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#116 Lizzy1212

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Posted 22 July 2007 - 09:40 AM

They almost kissed!! Please update soon!!
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#117 princess2293

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Posted 22 July 2007 - 09:52 AM

Ahhhh! They almost kissed!

I loved it Natalie, please update today. =]=]

And I understood the last part just perfectly.. =]

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#118 iluvmichael!!!

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Posted 22 July 2007 - 11:44 AM

It is easy to understand!
It's so absorbing!!!
Please update really soon or I might not get a chance to read it today!!!
Can't w8!
Peace out!
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#119 CatPalas

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Posted 22 July 2007 - 12:04 PM

They do look like they’re married lol. ^_^

Update soon!

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#120 iluvmichael!!!

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Posted 22 July 2007 - 12:12 PM

Sometimes he kind of acts like a big brother...
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#121 iluvmichael!!!

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Posted 22 July 2007 - 12:16 PM

Update PLEASE???
Can't wait any longer!!!
I must know what happens next!!!
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#122 Esdroper

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Posted 22 July 2007 - 12:20 PM

beckii and evie- I will update soon

XOQueridaOX- got you like Vince

Lizzy1212 and Hope- they will do more than almost soon

Chey- it might be up tonight, yeah and like a big brother

Catarina- Yeah they do.

I had a really nice update writen but I dont like it so I'm going to rewritre it.

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#123 iluvmichael!!!

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Posted 22 July 2007 - 12:24 PM

Hmmm... more than almost!!!
When I said he acts like a big brother, I just meant he wants to protect her...
Other than that he acts like a REALLY jealous boyfriend.
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#124 noleey

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Posted 22 July 2007 - 12:35 PM

Awesome! Update

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#125 xxluv heather wells bksxx

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Posted 22 July 2007 - 05:30 PM

oh my god, loved the update, please update again soonxoxoIonexoxo
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#126 I_LuV_jAkE

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Posted 22 July 2007 - 06:06 PM

Loved the update (they are so going to be together in the end lol)
Update soon..
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#127 bluspiral0_0201

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Posted 22 July 2007 - 06:08 PM

I loved that! Vince is being so nice to her. I can't wait till they kiss ( hopefully they do)

I'll wait and see.


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#128 Britt~Britt

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Posted 22 July 2007 - 07:35 PM

great update!!
vince seems so protectice of her

UPDATE SOON
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#129 Esdroper

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Posted 22 July 2007 - 07:53 PM

Nicole and xxluv heather wells bksxx- glad you guys like it!

NiNa- never know just kidding!

BLuspiral- they will

britt- protective oh ya!

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Vince’s POV

Zoey ran in her room without saying a word.

“Dude, you just scared the crap out of her!” Henry said.

“I’m going in there,” I yelled and turned toward the hall.

“No,” Tray and Tony said. They grabbed my shoulder and sat me down on the couch. “Your not,”

“Once you calm down you can talk to her. We will be standing out side the door. If you start yelling you’re out of there,” Jay said.

Five minutes later they let me go talk to her.

I opened the door to find her lying face down crying on the bed.
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Zoey’ POV

I heard the door open and for some reason I was positive it was Vince. I also heard the door lock when he closed it.

“Zoey?” He asked sounding mad.

“Yes,” I grunted.

“Can I sit down?” He asked quickly.

“Yes,” He sat down on my bed.

“What did Craig do to you?” He asked. I sighed and sat up.

“Why should I tell you,” I said.

“Tell me!” He screamed. I heard the door knob rattle.

“No!” I screamed back.

“Tell me!” he said jumping to his feet.

“No!” I said and stand up too. “You’ll just get more upset!” I screamed getting in his face.

“Tell!” He said getting closer “Me!” He was furious.

“I’m not going to,” I screamed getting just as mad.

“Now!” I was standing on my tip toes, so I could be face to face with him. Both of us were about to shoot steam out of our ears.

“No!” I screamed.

“Yes!”

“No!”

“Yes!”

“N-,” Before for I could finish he kissed me. I know it sounds cliché but I saw sparkers. When the kiss was over I told him what Craig had done.

“I’m glad I kicked him out,” He said sounding angry.

“But he was your best friend,” I said. “Why would you do that for me?”

“One, no matter who he did that to I do not want to hang out with a guy that does that to girls. Two, you are my friend I have never noticed it before now but, you mean a lot to me,” He said. I was shocked. I grabbed his hand. He kissed me again and I kissed back. Before long we were lying down on the bed, with him on top of me.

We were about to deepen the kiss, when the other guys came crashing in.

“We told you if you-,” Tony started he wasn’t able to finish because Tray put a hand over his mouth. Vince got off the bed and I sat up. Vince glared at the four of them.

“Let’s go watch a movie,” I said as I got up and walked out the door. They followed.

We all got back to the places that we were in before Craig walked in. I pushed play on the menu screen. Vince and I didn’t kiss but we stayed close together, throughout the whole movie.

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ok if it totally sucks please tell me.

i know its short but i didnt want to add any thing

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#130 I_LuV_jAkE

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Posted 22 July 2007 - 07:58 PM

AHHHH they kissed!!!!
*don't even think about doing this to us lol
update soon
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#131 P.O.G_Wannabee

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Posted 22 July 2007 - 07:59 PM

yes!!!! they kissed!!! *huge grin spreads across Diana's face* took long enough. anyways update soon preety please?
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#132 bluspiral0_0201

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Posted 22 July 2007 - 08:04 PM

YESS!! Finally
1 Please do a update today!! I love this story! You should od a long one if u can. If you can't though its pretty than nothing!! :)


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#133 XOQueridaOX

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Posted 22 July 2007 - 08:05 PM

Wow.
Speechless.
Update soon.
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#134 little rascal

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Posted 22 July 2007 - 08:09 PM

Wow I mean wow that was amazing! Finally they kissed geez it took them forever. Please update soon...

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#135 noleey

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Posted 22 July 2007 - 08:16 PM

WAHOOOO! Update! Uh-uh-uh-update!!! WAHOOOO! :)
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